My new FanFic......’Life’....Pt3..pg3

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Six ppl.....Naina,Pooja,Alekh,Huda,Ali and Yudi.....were just sitting around a table and were playing the game Truth or Dare

The bottle points at Huda....and he chooses Truth

Alekh:hmmm....abbey yede...tu sach bol....aage kya karna hain....kuch socha hai ki nahin....

Huda grows quizzical...

Huda:Abbey Alekh....ye kaisa sawal...tu toe jaanta haina....ki hum sab wohi karenge....jismein mastii ho...fun element ho...sab kuch ho...

Alekh: Tu toe ekdum phatoo insaan hain.......jo sawal maine poocha uska sahi sahi jawab dena....kaiko itna complication karta hai...socha hai ki nahin

Huda:NO...matbal nahin

Alekh:Toe kya kare....kuch toe karna hai ki nahin....varna aise hi haath pe haath dhare baithe rahenge toe kya hoga....atleast kuch alag masti ke baarein mein toe socho.....poora din dharu pee peekar....main bhi bore ho raha hoon....life mein kuch toe maza chahiye na....

Every1 sitting there become serious....suddenly....there is a sweet song sung by....

Pooja:Round and Round the cobbler's bench

The monkey chased the weasel...

The monkey thought 'twas all in fun...

Pop! goes the weasel....

Every1 stares at Pooja....as to what her song indicates.....but it was her habit....b4 telling anything special she wud sing atleast four lines of this so called poem or song.....hmmmm.....wateva

Pooja: Lets join the Army

Every1's likeeeee....."Pooja have u gone insane".....but there was an immdediate answer too.......

Naina:Awesome....lets have fun there....

Ali:What????......R u sure....do u know how strict they r....

Naina:What strict....c'mon yaar....lets take this adventure...

Alekh:Tum dono ekdum paagal ho gaye ho....

Pooja:Hum ladkiyan hokar jaana chahti hain.....aur tum ladke...chiii....aaj kal ke ladkon ko toe choodiyan pehen leni chahiye....kyun Naina

Alekh:Aye kya rey....jaasti mat bol...

Pooja:c'mon....grow up....mujhe kuch alag karna hai...

Naina:Absolutely rite.......

Alekh: Abb ye bhi.....sab log yede ho gaye ho kya....mental hospital phone karoon....

Pooja: Haan haan....tujhe toe number by heart hoga....itni baar wahaan jaa jo chuka hai...

Alekh :Aye punjaban

Pooja: Kya rey....

Huda:Stop it guys...whats wrong with u.......After a pause....'aur jahaan tak Army ka sawaal hai....kuch khone toe waala nahin haina.....toe tension kis baat ki....lets give it a try'

Yudi:Aur agarrrr....

Huda:Kya agarr...

Yudi:Aur agar wahaan pasand nahin aaya toe....

Naina:hmmmm.....toe....after a lil gap.....'Bhaagkar aajayenge...atleast mastii toe marenge....watsay....????'

Yudi:hmmm.....bhaagne ke liye toe main all time ready...masti ke liye bhi all time ready...

Alekh:Jahaan tum sab....vahaan main bhi...(Gusse mein)

Ali:No other choice

They think for a while.....and the environment goes silent......every1 with a smile on there face take there glasses of juice which they were drinking...and say......"CHEERS"....naturally Alekh has a bottle of rum in his hands

Ali:hmmm....lekin entrance...I mean entrance exmas

Yudi:Dont u worry....kal tak everything will b ready....

They all play the game for some more time....and after a while every1 leaves to their respective homes...

How do u like it guys....If u wud like me to continue...then I will....😳😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guuuuud Start Swappy!!!I liked it....ab jaldi se continue kar!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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👏 dis is so cool!!!
its different frm ne oder FF... 😃
gr8888 work swappy!!!! 👏
continue fast!!! 😳
i cant wait 2 read more!!!! 😳
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This is cool 👏 but again i m surprised ur first fan fiction aur vo bhee Ritu ke bagair strange 😆
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Originally posted by: kiran_sherry

This is cool 👏 but again i m surprised ur first fan fiction aur vo bhee Ritu ke bagair strange 😆

Aisa kabhi ho bhi sakta hai kya....neva na....there is a lot of time for Raj's and Ritu's entry....😳😳😳

Thanx a lot Sanya...dunno hw will it go on...😆😉

Preru....m noing b4 u....I was feeling so bored...had noing to do...nd I have holidays....so thought y not start this😳😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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its v.nice plz continue 👏 👏
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ish awesum..................yarrr
aur diff bhi so continue plz.....................gr888 work 👏 👏 👏
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Thanx guys....m getting ready with ma next part....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very good Swapna,i really liked it very much. 👏 And if u can,isme plzzzzzzzzz luv shuv mat ghusana.Plzzzzzzzzzz concentrate on pure friendship in this fanfic.Vaise bhi sachme LRL me toh dur dur tak koi friendship nahi dikh raha kam se kam yaha rakhna. 😆 Its a request.....
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Recap: They play Truth and Dare..... and one game will change their life.They all have decided to join the army but b4 that they have to pass the written exam....

Yudi tells his parents abt his decision and that his frends are also gonna join with him.And so the conversation leads to conformation from his parents

Yudi: Mom puhhh....lease....I m not a small boy anymore.....

Mom: lekin betaa....tu vahaan kaise rahega....

Yudi: Mom....Hostel naam ki bhi ek cheez hoti hai...

Mom: Acha....ye kya koi naye brand ka 'cheese'. hai kya???...aaj se Amul Cheese chodkar main 'Hostel' cheese kharid loongi beta....lekin tu ye zid chod dey.....please beta

Yudi: Mommmmmmmmmmmmmmm.....(shouts)....this is not the eating Cheese....Goddddddd......Forget it...

Yudi's dad: Kyun tang kar rahi ho usse....kyun uska peecha nahin chodti....ek baar vahaan jayega....vahaan ki discipline mein rehna lagega....toe apne aap laut aayega

Yudi was just abt to leave the door....he turns bak and saya

Yudi:What do u mean dad???...U mean....main vahaan se bhaag aaonga...aur main vahaan tik nahin paaonga

Dad: hmmmm....ahem ahem....jee haan...

Yudi: Toe aap bilkul bilkul bilkul.....sahi hai.....

Yudi's dad and yudi both laugh very loudly....and his mom stares at both of them....

Yudi: Mom....please....dont take it to heart....main toe sirf kuch din ke liye masti maarne jaa raha hoon....ek...ek holiday hi samaj lijiye....I'll b bak fast....and do wateva u say......but first v all have to pass our exams....

He gets every1's application forms filled up and they all start preparing for their exmas.

Pooja's and Naina's parents lived abroad.They have been living together since their childhood.From their boarding school to their college life they have been best frends.They informed their parents about their decision.However,they din think they'll ever get a response so fast.Both their families had only helped them financially but had never cared about them much.So,they were not waiting for a response at all.However,inform karna toe zaoori tha.

Huda's parents had always been against what his son had done till date.Naturally,even this decision was not favoured by them.But,naa Huda manne waala tha....aur nahin uske parents.His parents were very rich and wanted him to join their business but he neva wanted to just sign on papers and earn money....after all...all the decisions were taken by his father and he only had to sign.

Huda: Papers par sign karna mujhse nahin hoga...ye mujhe bilkul bhi gavara nahin

Huda's dad: toe mat karo....par dekhna ek din tum zaroor mere paas aaoge aur mujhse plead karoge ki main tumhe apne business partner banaloon

Huda: Dad ye sapna hai....aur sapney din mein ache nahin lagte....sirf andhere mein ache lagte hain...kabhi din ke ujale mein aakar dekhiye ye duniya kitni rangeen hain....

He says this and leaves.

Alekh was an orphan boy.He had only these five frends and they were his life.But life seemed more simple to him than others.

Ali's parents were very happy with his decision to join the Army.His parents were very supportive.But he was joining the Army only because of his frends and he knewthat one day they wud return bak to their homes.He wanted to disclose this to his parents but a felling inside stopped him to do so.

All six meet at the examination hall.Luckily,all of them get admission at the same place and there is no problem at all.They all are very happy to take this small adventure and have fun.But.....will their adventure be really small.

Guys....quite a long one....from the next part its gonna be really interesting....w8ing for ur responses...

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