My new FanFic......’Life’....Pt3..pg3 - Page 3

Recap: All six have passed thier entrance with ease.They are all set to leave now.

Yudi:KANCHENJUNGA MILLITARY ACADEMY....wooohooo...nt bad....lets c...our tickets r all booked...v all r leaving 2moro....I guess the flight is on right time....Its at 8:45...please b there by 7:30....I dun want any tamasha....puhh...lease...

Every1 agree and r all set to pack their belongings.In no time everything is done.They all meet at the airport.They get their boarding passes and security check done.And in about an hour they reach Delhi.After that they move towards the New Delhi station and then in about 12-14 hours they reach Panchgani.They hire a taxi and finally they reach their very awaited destination....KMA...

Huda: At lassttt.....v have reached....

Naina: hmmm....(with a large smile)....not bad....

Alekh: ayeee yedi....le apna bhaari sa suitcase....pata nahin kya kachra bharkar layi hai....dimag toe kachra hai hi.....yedon ki tarah bag mein bhi bharkar lekar aa gayi...

Naina: Kya rey....piyakad....

They were almost about to fight and Pooja stops them.

Pooja:Naina....please...behave urself...dekh dekh koi aa raha hai...

Enters a tall lady with a confident personality and with a man staring at her like fools with a pagadi on his head and of courseee....white beard...

The lady introduces her as Lolita Chokroborty as their hostel Maiden....

Lolita: Both the galssss....follow me...

After a while...

Lolita:Suriji......Surjiii....wake up...ur boys are waiting for u....

Suriji: aooo....k...saare khotiyooo...chalooo mere pechee vich....aur jaldi jaldi...zyada time na lagana....oye chal khotiyo...

Naian and Pooja move to the gals dormitory and Yudi,Huda,Alekh and Ali o the boys dormitory...

Precap:

Senior Boys: Ayeeeee.....inn freshers ko toe dekho...ssab kitne chamak rahe hain..

Alekh: Ayee...kya rey...jaasti..

Stranger: hello cadets...

And som1 interupts them...

Swapna-Mobile😳

I know a very absurd and an abrupt end for this part but gtg guysss.....so will b bak with another part which'll include the entry of Rajveer.....keep giving ur feedbacks...I really need them....and of course suggesstions too 😳
Swapna-mobile 😳

it was a good part swapna 😳 😳
if i can suggest something it wud be that you can make it a bit more fast-paced... 😊
lekin app achha likhti hain 😳 😊 👏

Swappy I liked Naina & Alekh getting into argument.....dis is new!!!!Guuuuuud to kno dat they can fite as well..just like all normal frnds do!!!Cooooool!!!!
Well d end was abrubt bt definitely not absurd!!!Nice sweet lil part.Post nxt one soon!!
BTW dat stranger in nxt part....is it Raj?????Looking forwad to his entry!!!

Originally posted by: drymaple

it was a good part swapna 😳 😳
if i can suggest something it wud be that you can make it a bit more fast-paced... 😊
lekin app achha likhti hain 😳 😊 👏

Thanx a lot drymaple....will try to make it a lil fast as u said from my next part....vaise wats ur name😳😳and thanx a lot for ur suggestion...😳😳

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Originally posted by: sanyamalhotra

Swappy I liked Naina & Alekh getting into argument.....dis is new!!!!Guuuuuud to kno dat they can fite as well..just like all normal frnds do!!!Cooooool!!!!
Well d end was abrubt bt definitely not absurd!!!Nice sweet lil part.Post nxt one soon!!
BTW dat stranger in nxt part....is it Raj?????Looking forwad to his entry!!!

Yupe....wanna show the best frends fite.....but of course....these r only quarells....and as far as the end is concerned I thought it was absurd....well thanx for making me realize it wasn't😆😆😆....yupe the stranger is Raj....thanx for ur lovely comments sanyaa...😳😳

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Originally posted by: sweetncute

Thanx a lot drymaple....will try to make it a lil fast as u said from my next part....vaise wats ur name😳😳and thanx a lot for ur suggestion...😳😳

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😳thanks for appreciating it😳 my name is Devyani Dutta😊 hi!😛 😊

willbe waiting for the next part!😊

omg swapna!! this is the first time i read this fic and its soo good 👏 .. your ideas are awesome and you have a nice style.. !! 👏 . as im not good in hindi, im commenting n english 😆 😆 but do post soon.. cant wait for your next part 😳 👏

shreyasi

ur ff is realli nice swapna! 👏 plzzz do post da next part asap! 👏

its awesome swappy.. 👏 👏
maine saare pasts abhi padhe.. 👏
its very different and unique in its own way.. 😳 👏
plzz continue soon..