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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ss2829

this ff is shaping up so well! the occasional bhabi by rv, and the kiss are so cute! would be waiting for next update!

thank u...😛

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pretty.doll

oye hoye renu g...kya masaledaar update tha..nd the kiss,,awww kd is shooo cute,vse b mujhe rotlu kd bda cute lgta h..awww renu the chapter was sooo cute ,jealous kiya omg...shez sooo bubbly.lving rv here..their discussion abt kiss-hallarious..superb update..jldi se update krna czzz u've givn d precap.

thank u ..

kd tho har xprssn me cute lag tha hey...

will defo try to update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Razzy-

omg renu this was such a cute updates <33
KiSha are way beyound amazing
haha lolz KD crying when kiya kised him , lolz😳
and kiya getting jealous 😆
hey can u do one thing , make KD jealous in this na ,
all i could see is kiya following him and getting jealous ,
i would love to see some feelings from KD😳
but anyway the story is jst awesome
continue soon renu🤗

thank u razzz...

yup i will defo try to show jealus kd ...

will defo cntnue it vry soon...🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
Ya plzzz!!! update the nxt part soon, itz going superb👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayshi

Ya plzzz!!! update the nxt part soon, itz going superb👏

thank u... 😊will update it soon,,,

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Posted: 12 years ago

ch3:chuha maharaj ki jai ho..

aftr the clg ...kd was waterng der plant in der balcny...sudnnly rv came rung to him..

rv:bhaiii

kd:kya huva chotey...?chila kyu rahahey?

rv:bhai jj uncle humarey ghar ayehey...

kd:tho?

rv:bhai jj uncle ayehey..

kd:kya ?sach me?

rv:ah ..muje persi unki japi me suffr nahi honahey...uskey bhad wo hamerey checks bi pull karengey..

kd:muje bi nahi chotey..

rv:tho chalo bhai chup jathehey...

kd:chalo...

ransh in fear got into each other room..(i mean to say rv went into kd's room and kd went to rv's room)rv went and hided under the bed...kd went in and clsd the door and stood nehnd it...meanwhile dwnstrs mrs.desai was perparng pakodey and sophia ,kiyan went der...

sophia:hello mrs.desai..

mrs desai:hello sophia ji..hello panchi aur kiya beta..

kiya:wow aunty kji pakodey..yummy ..(takng and eatng it)

panchi :aunty me apaki koi help karu?

mrs.desai:arey nahi beti ..i will handle it..tum na bus keshu ko neche bolavo ..will u do it for me?

kiya:aunty me bolavu?

mrs desai:hmm tum na ranu ko bolav ?

kiyan:hmm okay aunty..

both kiyan left and went to rv and kd's room respctvly...panchi went insde kd's room wer rv was hidng under the bed...

panchi:keshav ji

rv:arey panchi bhai ko bola rahihey?(he lft his head up and got hrutd by the bed's crod and panchi heard it )

panchi:suno kd ji..humko patha hey aap dadyji ki japi si dar raheyho..but wry not ji me dady si aap ko bachavungi...aap bahar aajav pls..

rv came out of the bed and panchi trund towrds him..

panchi:ranveer ji aap yeha...?😲

rv:ah kyu nahi reha saktha..ye meri ghar hey rght?

panchi :ah par..(befre she wuld cmplt she saw a rat in his room and she jumpd and hugd rv shutng )chuha chau ranveerji humkona chuhon si bohat dar lagatha hey...pls humey bachalejeyena...

rv:(he was jst on clud nine):don't wry panchi ji hum heyna aap ko bacheney us chuhey si..(to himslf)chuhey maha raj ki jai ho...

panchi was feelng safe in his arms...rv was carssng her back ...

there postn was jst lyk dis:


here wid kisha...

kiya went near rv room it was clsd..

kiya:arey rv door kolana muje tumse bat karaney hey...(kd was schkd hearng kiya vce)arey kolona..aur kitha tme wait karawayega?tu door opn karaga ye me esi thodi du?kya bola thahey..muje patha hey ki tu andara hey so jaldi opn karo varana me door ko brk karadungi...

(kiya wait fr sumtme and kd didn't opn it so she desd to brk it but at same tme kd thught of opng it..kiya mve back some distnce marchd towrd the door and she was abt to hit it kd opnd the door and kiya went strght into kd's arms..and becos of loosng the balance both had falln to the grund...and strtd rollng..now kd was on the top and kiya was on the grund..der postn is sumwat lyk dis..:


son kisha wer pulled into a eyelock...the pairs wer in the same postn for sumtme...

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phew...katham hogaya ...sry fr not updatng soon... ab aap badey badye cmmnts dijeyega...cmmnt karana pls...den only am gng cntune it..if not ye ff yehi katham...ye warng hey..serusly lena... pls ignr spllng aur gmmr mistkes...

dis is ur renu sign off...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Renu ji.that was awesome ji.hayye kisha ek doosre ki baahon mein aaye hayye!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awsom yar
rahi <3
i loved the rat...
and kisha were cute aswell plzzz continue soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just loved it both kishaa nd rahi toh hai hi adorable plzz update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh this was shooo cute
I lvd it
Kisha nd rahi in each others arms...hayeee
Kd is a big darpok here..itni choti c kiya se darta h
Nd rv..uski to lottry lg gyi

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