*Awarded* A New Khushi #6 Ch 60-65 *COMPLETED* - Page 58

Sami, it is the writing that inspires me to write the comments I do, and you are amazing….as are your stories….I love your thought process and how you cover everything…. and the way things fit in like pieces of a puzzle coming together and I love the thrill and excitement I feel when that happens….

I Loved all the pictures you used...especially of Barun😉 I mean Arnav!

I loved the hustle bustle, the chaos and the excitement over the engagement and the sarees being chosen, I could picture all the colourful saree, the jewelry and other accessories and the chattering over the choices…

I loved how Arnav realizes that he need to go into work and wanted to sneak out knowing that the next day he would be expected home early, I loved how while buttoning his coat he is thinking of his exit strategy anticipating trouble from his wife and sister, mami and nani he could handle but the other two women's reaction worrying him , and he is wondering what excuse he should make and then realizes that he was being ridiculous he was ASR and he had no reason to be scared of Khushi and di….he would boldly go down and inform them he has to leave giving them so choice in the matter…..this was too funny, I could imagine his expression when he realizes that, so off he goes briefcase in hand…….to face the music and ignore it …….

I loved how on Anjali saying that he should not go as there is so much work to be done that he calls HP, and asks him if he is capable of working and a poor confused HP nodding not sure what that question meant, HP and his confused look ….Sami I loved this, Arnav at his witty best….telling HP that now since he is capable of work he and the rest of the P's are to help di finish all the work and solves the issue….ha ha

Loves how he goes up to Khushi and tell her that he has to take care of some important stuff, I am so happy that you made him to up to her and tell her separately and was pleased that she did not give him any grief and smiled instead… and like how instinctively leans to give her a kiss but stops seeing her reaction, her moving back and her wide eyes indicating they were not alone…..the honeymoon is over…….I am hoping these lines do not have too much significance going forwards ?!!

I love how he comes home and not finding Khushi preparing for dinner wonders where she is and finds her by the poolside on the phone but automatically is disturbed hearing her talking to the doctor and setting up an appointment, annoyed that this whole baby thing was being given so much priority by her, as though it was the most important issue. Not even waiting till after the engagement, he knew her stubbornness but did not agree with her being so impatient about it and could not hide his displeasure when asking her if she was talking to the doctor…. I could sense his frustration he feels thinking it's not even been a year and this baby thing seemed to be totally consuming her, but realizing that it was a sensitive topic was approaching it with caution, but does manage to tell her that he thought that they had decided to wait and think about it and she had promised to see it from his point of view. But she just brushes it off saying it's just to discuss the facts and she was scheduled to go for a post-surgery checkup anyway…she still hopeful to change his mind once the doctor assures him

I love how she greets him with a big smile….I smiled too….

She, was taking full advantage of the fact that he had agreed to consult the doctor and not wanting to lose time or give him time to change his mind about the consultation went ahead although she realized that he did not sound too excited…

And loved how he sweetly just tells her to let her know so he can keep his schedule free…but with all this talk he was not able to sleep as he was worried how he would hear on handle this delicate situation, loved how he not wanting to disturb her, seeing her sleep so peacefully that he takes his laptop and the camcorder to the guest room, thinking of watching the recording of the fun time…

I loved that seeing the sangeet night he remembers how he had been mesmerized by her and how she had made him laugh while she made fun of him, and how he was enamored by her dancing…I LOVED that you gave us closure on this terrace scene and the events of the sangeet day, Arnav realizing that Shyam had manhandled Khushi and his remembering how she flinched with pain at his touch, this was never revealed to anyone, in the show , this was totally forgotten as though it never happened, so I am glad you wrote about it letting him an entire account of what happened.. ….her initial happiness, NKs commentary and finally Shyam approaching her and his behavior, he needed to know the complete truth about the terrace scene, what he had seen and the more crucial portion that he had not seen that night where she pushes him off disgusted by him and his touch and his treachery

Loved how he was so moved and felt so protective about Khushi, his anger and frustration for the pain she had to endure and go through, his inability to protect her while under his roof…and fear for all that she has to bear while living in Shantivan…and if there were more such incidents that he was not aware about…...I love how her resolves that from now on he would never fail to protect her irrespective of the conditions , circumstances and consequences……while tears of disappointment flowed from his eyes….

This was such a beautiful update, the way you wrote it made it so easy to visualize it scene for scene, the importance of this chapter in taking the story forward, the revelation of the truth….the feeling of total love and protectiveness for her, memories of the happy times….the excitement of the celebration at home…

Waiting to see the impact of what is revealed to him tonight on his relationship with Khushi if any, waiting to see how they tackle the baby issue…..I hope they are able to reach some middle path, I do think they should wait…..but don't mind her just finding out that she is fit to have baby but should ideally wait….

Excited for the next update for NK's engagement…..