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Hi guyzz dis is d first tym im writing any story nd dat too on kriyaansh dis story was in my mind bothering me since LONG really long believe me...den i thought i shud write it down i dont know weather its nyc or not so, all depends on u guyzz!!!...plyzz guyzz tell me how is dis if u lyk it its awsome if u hate it still ok all kinds of criticism welcomed plyzzz plyzz tell me!!!!
-Rishita...😊
Part 1-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59917989�Charachter Sketch-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/59974009� Part 2-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/60144684�Part 3-
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3060476/someone-completed-me-ff-chp19-on-page-120?pn=14 FRIENSHIP DAY SPCL...
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&TPN=23
Part 4
ww.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&TPN=19https://www.india-forums
Part 5
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&TPN=29
New charachter CS-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&PID=64419955�PART 7-
ww.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&PID=64688443�
part 7 b-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&TPN=39part 8 (kriyaansh long drive)
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&TPN=42part 9-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&TPN=52Part 10-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&TPN=57Part 11-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&TPN=62Part 12 (ViHa Date)-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&TPN=67Note-
Part 13-
Promo-
Part 14-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3060476&PID=69109263�
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Part 16:
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Part 17:
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Part 18:
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Part 19:
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Reyaansh singhania (rey)- a cute loving witty handsome guy who evry grl wants inshort he's d clg heart-throb evry grls crazy for him...(including us) loves to dance...reys parent hv gave him each ryts...😊
Kriya Ghai- A fun loving, beautiful girl each nd evry guy wishes 2 hv her but as its said wishes r not meant 2 be true...shes perfect disciplined, cte jus jus Perfect, shes vrry afraid of her maa...nd try her best to stay away frm stuff lyk boyz, love etc...loves to dance...😊
Part 1
Rey ws walking in d corridor of clg he ws checking out the Papers he ws so lost in his work dat he cudnt even see where he ws going nd "BAM" he bumped into someone he undrstood dat she fall down "srry mene dekha nai r u f9?" he said without seeing the girl "haan haan im vrry comfortable here on d floor, nd wat do u mean by dekha nai? apni badi ullu jaisy aankhen khol ke toh dekho!!" she shouted reys eyes grew wider wen he got a unexpected rply usually girls wud try to imress him nd dere wid dat anger m sure u all must hv understood ... yes...shes Kriya Ghai..."kaha na srry any ways cn i help u?" he said nd forwarded his hand 2 hepl her "no thnxx" she said "help hi kr rha huh" he said softly "kaha na no thnxx, ill manage" she said rudely again she stood up he took his hand back she left with a singh rey started to collect his papers wen he noticed some mobile phone ws dere on d floor he grabbed it he switched it on..."Kriya!" he said to himself while reading the name...whereas Kriya ws searching for d classes rey ws searching for her finally he saw her checking out the notice board he
He tried his best to say her name but he cudnot remember it he just shouted "Madam!" nd went to her "Aaap! yahan mra picha kr rhe the? kya mumbai ke saare boyz essehi hotein hain chipku?" she said..oops..yelled angrily "oh hello, mujhe tumhara picha krne me koi intrest nai hai bas..." he tried to explain but she cutted him "kya bas train laga rkha hai?paagal" she said "par suno toh!" he pleaded but she simply left "ajab ladki hai, re beta phone lota aur nikal le iss mess se" he said to himself as he went 2 his classes he ws already 10 mins late"hell! aaj toh abhijeet sir pakka detention denge!! ye phonevali ke chakkar me aisa phansa ke said to himself finally he went to his class got inside with secret passage created by his friends nd him nd wen he sat in his seat he cudn't believe his eyes "TUM!!!!" he shouted kriya luked at him "aap kahan se tapke?" she asked "voh aaj late tha na so secret passage..par 1 min me ye sab tumhe kyu bta rha huh?" he said "toh mat batao na!" she again yelled suddenly rey remembered to gyv bck her cell "sunno!" he said "mujhse oh baat nai krni thi na toh ab kya hua?1 word bhi mu se nikala na aur toh sir ko bta dungi yahan baithna hai toh chup chap baitho!!!" she said rey didnt dare to say another word he simply did his work...wen d class ended rey nd kriya parted dere wayzz rey compleatly frgot about her cell dey both attended dere classes...at d end of d day-
finally rey went to parking to take out his bike he suddenly saw kriya she ws standing nd waiting fr d auto he ignored her wen suddenly his mind striked him of her cell he went 2 her said "xcuse me?" "aap?" she said "plyz plyz plyz chillana mat i jus wanted to gyv back ur cell to u i found it on d floor jahan tum gir gyi thi remember?" he said "ya, i remmbr thnx a lot fr giving it back i really needed it" she said her rude voice changed in sweetness "chalo tumhare mu se thnxx nikla toh mujhe toh laga tha tumhare muh se keval no thnxx niklata hai!"he said she gigled "im really srry agr mujhe pata hota aap cell dene aaye ho toh me rudely baat nai krti..vese m kriya ghai, friends?" she said nd forwarded her hand for shake hand "im reyaansh singhania u cn call me rey!" dey both shook dere hands fr 5-6 mins nd den left "so, tum yahan kyu khadi ho?" he asked "auto ka wait kr rhi thi" she said "par aaj toh auto strike hai tumhe pata nai?" he asked "shit! auto strike me toh gyi'!!!!" she said "chill, if u dont mind ill gyv u a lyft to ur house only if u dont mind nd if ur comfortable!!" he said she thought for a few mins "so?"he asked "sure" she said nd smiled "perfect let me get my bike wait here" he said he got his bike nd came to d main gate she ws still dere "common" he said "ham ispe jaenge?" she asked "haan kyun?"he said "rey me aaj tak bike pe nayi bathi hoon" she said "nothing beats a first experience, let me help u" he said he got down frm his bike nd "vahan pair rakho aur upar chado" he said nd she followed lyk a obeidient child she held his arm rey noticed dis nd simply smiled widout saying a word "agr chaho toh dono pair 1 side rakhlo" he said "haan" she said "gud!" he said wen she finally ws on bike kriya quickly left his hand nd said srry also he too sat "so, lets move, hold tight" he said nd raced his bike kriya ws so scared dat she hgged him tight really tight he blushed a little nd slowed down his bike kriya quickly came out nd said "srry rey vo..vo me darr gayi thi!" she apologised "no prob kriya mujhe dhyan rkhna chahiye tha m sorry!" he said..after 2 or three seconds she finally said"wil u plyz say smthing im gtng bored" "oh m srry...so kriya madam aur kuch bataiye apne baare me?" he said...
Rey ws walking in d corridor of clg he ws checking out the Papers he ws so lost in his work dat he cudnt even see where he ws going nd "BAM" he bumped into someone he undrstood dat she fall down "srry mene dekha nai r u f9?" he said without seeing the girl "haan haan im vrry comfortable here on d floor, nd wat do u mean by dekha nai? apni badi ullu jaisy aankhen khol ke toh dekho!!" she shouted reys eyes grew wider wen he got a unexpected rply usually girls wud try to imress him nd dere wid dat anger m sure u all must hv understood ... yes...shes Kriya Ghai..."kaha na srry any ways cn i help u?" he said nd forwarded his hand 2 hepl her "no thnxx" she said "help hi kr rha huh" he said softly "kaha na no thnxx, ill manage" she said rudely again she stood up he took his hand back she left with a singh rey started to collect his papers wen he noticed some mobile phone ws dere on d floor he grabbed it he switched it on..."Kriya!" he said to himself while reading the name...whereas Kriya ws searching for d classes rey ws searching for her finally he saw her checking out the notice board he
He tried his best to say her name but he cudnot remember it he just shouted "Madam!" nd went to her "Aaap! yahan mra picha kr rhe the? kya mumbai ke saare boyz essehi hotein hain chipku?" she said..oops..yelled angrily "oh hello, mujhe tumhara picha krne me koi intrest nai hai bas..." he tried to explain but she cutted him "kya bas train laga rkha hai?paagal" she said "par suno toh!" he pleaded but she simply left "ajab ladki hai, re beta phone lota aur nikal le iss mess se" he said to himself as he went 2 his classes he ws already 10 mins late"hell! aaj toh abhijeet sir pakka detention denge!! ye phonevali ke chakkar me aisa phansa ke said to himself finally he went to his class got inside with secret passage created by his friends nd him nd wen he sat in his seat he cudn't believe his eyes "TUM!!!!" he shouted kriya luked at him "aap kahan se tapke?" she asked "voh aaj late tha na so secret passage..par 1 min me ye sab tumhe kyu bta rha huh?" he said "toh mat batao na!" she again yelled suddenly rey remembered to gyv bck her cell "sunno!" he said "mujhse oh baat nai krni thi na toh ab kya hua?1 word bhi mu se nikala na aur toh sir ko bta dungi yahan baithna hai toh chup chap baitho!!!" she said rey didnt dare to say another word he simply did his work...wen d class ended rey nd kriya parted dere wayzz rey compleatly frgot about her cell dey both attended dere classes...at d end of d day-
finally rey went to parking to take out his bike he suddenly saw kriya she ws standing nd waiting fr d auto he ignored her wen suddenly his mind striked him of her cell he went 2 her said "xcuse me?" "aap?" she said "plyz plyz plyz chillana mat i jus wanted to gyv back ur cell to u i found it on d floor jahan tum gir gyi thi remember?" he said "ya, i remmbr thnx a lot fr giving it back i really needed it" she said her rude voice changed in sweetness "chalo tumhare mu se thnxx nikla toh mujhe toh laga tha tumhare muh se keval no thnxx niklata hai!"he said she gigled "im really srry agr mujhe pata hota aap cell dene aaye ho toh me rudely baat nai krti..vese m kriya ghai, friends?" she said nd forwarded her hand for shake hand "im reyaansh singhania u cn call me rey!" dey both shook dere hands fr 5-6 mins nd den left "so, tum yahan kyu khadi ho?" he asked "auto ka wait kr rhi thi" she said "par aaj toh auto strike hai tumhe pata nai?" he asked "shit! auto strike me toh gyi'!!!!" she said "chill, if u dont mind ill gyv u a lyft to ur house only if u dont mind nd if ur comfortable!!" he said she thought for a few mins "so?"he asked "sure" she said nd smiled "perfect let me get my bike wait here" he said he got his bike nd came to d main gate she ws still dere "common" he said "ham ispe jaenge?" she asked "haan kyun?"he said "rey me aaj tak bike pe nayi bathi hoon" she said "nothing beats a first experience, let me help u" he said he got down frm his bike nd "vahan pair rakho aur upar chado" he said nd she followed lyk a obeidient child she held his arm rey noticed dis nd simply smiled widout saying a word "agr chaho toh dono pair 1 side rakhlo" he said "haan" she said "gud!" he said wen she finally ws on bike kriya quickly left his hand nd said srry also he too sat "so, lets move, hold tight" he said nd raced his bike kriya ws so scared dat she hgged him tight really tight he blushed a little nd slowed down his bike kriya quickly came out nd said "srry rey vo..vo me darr gayi thi!" she apologised "no prob kriya mujhe dhyan rkhna chahiye tha m sorry!" he said..after 2 or three seconds she finally said"wil u plyz say smthing im gtng bored" "oh m srry...so kriya madam aur kuch bataiye apne baare me?" he said...
so how ws it? lyk it or hate it?...dis ws d end of dis chapter i thnku evryone fr d beautiful cmmnts...luved dem...my spcl thnxx to shenz_kriyaansh wich is shehnaz fr sharing my link wid urs thnx alot dear,surbhi popularly known as surbhi fr helping me nd jheling me nd finally my thnx aishasully wich is aisha fr helping me sooo much thnx a ton evry1...hope u all liked it do leave ur lovely cmmnts im waiting to read evry1s ill be updating on next friday nd i promise dat!!!!! byeee enough of my bakar now leave cmmnts...
-Rishita
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