story An unexpressed bond PART 3 UPDATED ON PG 3

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hello everyone am back today I write a story as u know am too excited with entry of dakshh singh but unfortunately he give small appearance so I try make the bond b/w baojiraj n rajrana ji more deeper so here it is aree aree pahle isse padiye this scene is after the horse race scene

Pratap isin front of god : hume maaf kigiye ga hume jhoot
bolna pad raha hai par aap to sab jante hai ki ye sub hum mewar aur darjiraj ke
liye kar rahe hai hume shakti digiye</font>

Then he heard some noise of footsteps he worried then after
a while raj rana is there</font>

Rajrana: bachhe tum yaha kya kar rahe ho jante nahi yahan
par rajwaro ke ilava kisi ka aana nishedh hai </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Pratap: r.. hokum wo hum bhagwan se himmaat mangne aaye the
ki hum jite jai khani khamma hokum</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Pratap left rajrana feell strange with this guy </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">IN MEETING ROOM OF RAJRANA BHADUR</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Rajrana ; aap sab ko pata chal hi gaya hoga ki yudh ki tithi
nazdeek hai ab hume apna karz chukana hai jo
iss yudh ke liye tyaar nhi hai wo jaa sakta hai[nobody left] </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Udham ; hokum uss bachhe ka kya[pointing towards pratap] </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Rajrana ; udham singh ji aap use humare abhyaas kaksh me
bhejiye</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">AFTER A WHILE</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Pratap enter in kaksh saw rajrana is practicing </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Rajrana tumhe talwar chalani aati hai </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Pratap ji </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Rajrana; chla kar dikhao </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Pratap tries but not succeeds then rajrana give him tutorial
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<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Rajrana tum yudh me kyu jana chahte ho </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Pratap; mewad ki vijay mee yogdaan dena chahte hai</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Rajrana; tum iss ke liye choote nhi ho</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Pratap; hokum insaan ko chota bada uski soch banati hai aur
mera maan mazboot hai</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Rajrana ; moot ka samna kar sakoge khoon dekhsakoge agar mar
gaye to</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Pratap; darjiraj khete hai ki moot se woo darte hai jo kayar
hote hai par jo veer hote hai ve apni moot khud chunte hai</font>

<font color="#990099">Rajrana ; ye to
mewarnath ki soch hai tumm,,,,</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Pratap; hokum mewarnath bhi too humare darjiraj hai humare
pitaji ne hume bataya tha ki wo yee bolrahethe</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Pratap wants to confuse rajrana and rajran let him go</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">AT GARDEN </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">All soliders are eating food except pratap he is sitting in corridor
alone remembering his last lunch with his family especially his mother rajrana
came and see all that </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Udham ; hokum apko isse saniko ki ginti me see nikal dena
dena chahiye akhir yehai to bachha hi rajrana give him a gloomy look and went away to meet udaisingh</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">AT CONFRENCE TABLE </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Rajrana ; mewarnath apke sabhi putra kahan hai</font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Udai ;humne unhe surakshit sthan par bhijwa diya hai </font>

<font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3">Rajrana; sabhi ko</font>

</p><font color="#990099" face="Calibri" size="3"><p>Udai; ji parntu aap assa kyu puch rahe hai hum jan te hai apka or humare kuvar ki umar me jyada farak nhi tha hume jab bhi apka sandes mila usme kuvar pratap ke liye chinta thi hume apke putra ke liye khed hai aur garv bhi ki apke kuvar sa jasaa putra sabke pass ho

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rajrana; apke pratap ke baree me bhi humne kafi kuch suna hai agar hum jeet gaye too apke kuvaar sa se milna chahenge
udai ; chaliye hum apko humaree ran niti aur sanilo ki shankhya ke bare me batate hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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free to like dislike critisise comment but plz left ur valuable feedback good or bad nrver mind and let me also know that should I continue it or drp it
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Wish his character has not died in the battle. Daksh is a very good actor. Nice Pratham...But try to write in English coz there are many members outside India who understand and speak Hindi but they may find it difficult to read Hindi written in English.
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Sure anu even it us more easy I just wanna to make it traditional so... thanks for appreciate guys I all try my best coz am not a writer
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Great story and wrote it very nicely!!!
Thanks for it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice n awesome story u have written it nicely so thanks
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After the conference meet udaisingh invites rajrana for the last dinner with his family before war rajrana accept and promise to meet at sharp dinner time

DINNIG AREA

[There are many tables commonly known as chowki in their language are arranged with muslin cloth and big thali over it]

Jayanta enter seeing sajja not in good condition; behna kya hua

Sajja ; vikram aur shakti ki yaad aa rhi hai hum khaana kase kha sakte hain

Jayanta ; apki zimedari [duty] sirf kuvara ke prati nhi shreeji ke liye bhi hai wee antim baar yudh se pahle humare sath khaa rahe hain aur aaj to rajrana jib hi hai too muskurayee kyunki wee apke priye devarsa hain

Sajja; ji

Then a maid comes there to inform that udai n rajrana will be here soon and bhatyani also joins them then both come all greets each other and udai allows to sit but jayaanta denies becoz she wants to offer food herself udai agreed after offering she also settle there

Sajja is not in mode to eat jayanta offers her a bite

Rajrana; bhabhisa kha lijye nhi to jyanta bhabhi sa ka dil tut jyaga wase bhi wo har kisi ko niwala apne priyeee hatho se nhi khilati [all smiles]

Jayanta; devarsa hum hamesha apni behno ko itne pyar se hi khilayenge

A darbaan aka guard enter and said that shamskhan is planning to attack on us after two days all are in tension and goes to their sleeping quarters

When rajrana is going to his quarter he heard some noise from weopan ware house he attentively goes their secretly he see that pratap is practicing from his sword he internally smiles and then enter

Pratap; ganni khamma hokum

Rajrana; tum abhi tak yaaha ho smy dekha hai kya kar rhe ho

Pratap; hokum hum abhyaas kar rahe the apne hi kaha tha jung me jaane ke liye abhaayaas ki bhi zaroorat hoti hai

Rajrana; tum jao wishraam karo 2 din baad afganion se ladna

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a small update hope you like it plz comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome update👏
i like ur writting skill...:)))
keep it up!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue Pratham. You write very well. Its not easy to write about historical characters. Good work !!

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