How is Bani Feeling!

Something i read a while ago, and I thought it would suit Bani perfectly... let me knwo what you think?

Ghum Nahi Bhoolta Bhulanay Say
Num Hoe Ankhayen Muskurany Say

Aaj Woh Ajnabi Say Lagty Hain
Jante Houn Jisay Zamany Say

Doston Ki Parakh Nahi Kerna
Maan Totay Gaa Azmany Say

Jab Say Apno Say Choot Khaye Hai
Koi Shikwah Nahi Zamanay Say

Zindagi Ki Haqeqaton Ki Kasam
Dil Ki Baatein Hain Bas Fasanay Say

Great lines.... I can feel Bani's pain while reading all lines... Thanks Ash