WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE~~MANVEER SS~Prt24 newpg 78 - Page 49

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

loved all the parts so much I didn't even realise when I finished reading all the chapter loved each and every part awww thanks alot yar... so u finally read my ss...😉 anya and udays romance... but then there was a six month leap how comes manyata was in relationship with Aryan rai chaduary what actually happened 6 month ago...woh toh suspense hai deary... I just hope uday forgives manyata yup... and the distance between them reduces please update soon and thank u so much for the pm no sorry and thanku in frnzz plz no formalities yar...and also I want say UPDATE SOON PLEASE REALLY CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART yes yes....

and a very very lovely comment thanks...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Great update Mahi👏.thanks Uday and Anya's PAST moments were so cute and sweet and romantic😳. What went wrong😕?woh toh suspense hai... Even in the present , both are miserable without each other and keep remembering their special moments together. han yar ab agar manveer ke romantc moments nahi honge toh sab mujhe jhoote marenge...
Well , we do know "WHO" came between them😡? chal chalke khun karde uska...😆

Please Mahi , bring them back together soon😃.
We hate seeing them apart😭!!!!!!!me tooo... majburi hai na... jaldi sath laungi pakka...
Thanks for the PM😊.
Sorry about the LATE COMMENT.
(I only discovered now , that I didn't post a comment for your SS😆)phirse dosti ke niyam tode woh bhi doh doh bar... thank u toh bola hi upar se sorry bhi navi tu na...

chal anyways bahot bahot achi cumment di...😃u brought a big smile on my face...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: serat

yaar when are u goona update nexttt chappp???????????
plzzz
updateee
nexttt
chappp
soonnn

today pakka sorry wait karaya na...😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
all chapters are awsome pm me plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Thanks for the pm 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Mahi plzzz update the next chaptr soon
Wating desperately 4 it
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Posted: 12 years ago
simply woao ...update soon
nd plzz plzz do pm me also
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Posted: 12 years ago

WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 23: MANVEER:::::: <3:::::::

Manyata closes the door and drops down on the floor crying!!!

Manyata: nahi sehen hota uday… aur nahi!!! Nahi reh sakti tumse dur!! Nahi de sakti apne aap ko aur tumhe itni takleef…. I love you uday… I miss you…

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REMEMBER THE DAY WE SPENT TOGETHER,

THE HUGS THE KISSES THE LOVELY ANGER,

THE WALKS ON BEACHES,

WE LOVED THE TEASES,

UNTIL THE FATEFUL DAY,

YOU WENT AWAY,

OUR DRIFTING BROUGHT PAINS IN WAY,

THE WAY YOU LOVED ME,

CARED AND PESTERED,

THE PAINFUL TRUTH,

I HAD TO SWALLOW WITH YOUTH,

I WISH YOU COULD REDUCE THE PAIN,

AS I MISS YOU EVERY NOW AND THEN!!

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The scene shifts to dining table. All are there except for manyata .

Ds: manyata kaha hai?

J: pata nahi ds hum abhi dekh kar ate hai.

J is about to get up when they see manyata coming down the stairs. She did look angelic wondered uday who was brought out of his world after the mention of manyata. But somethinged pricked his heart her swollen eyes, her red cheeks,he knew she cried a lot. Cried because of him cried for him. He knew she was weak at the moment. She came and sat beside j front of Uday.

J: kya hua jiji apki tabyat thik hai na??

Manyata smiles weakly: han j hum thik hai bas thodi si thakavat hai..

Every1 was ok with it apart from Uday.

J: Uday da aaj sab apke pasand ka khana bana hai, French toast,upma aur pasta.

Unnati: wow pasta, j tumhe pata hai dada world ka best pasta banate hai,infact hume bhi nahi pata tha,hume toh manyata ki wajah se..

She stopped abruptly realizing what she was about to say. But the mere mention of it affected manyata. Every1 noticed it on the table.

Uday glared at Unnati while others were at loss of words even ds. Seemed like manyata would burst out any moment…..

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Anya was asleep.uday comes in her room and sees his angel sleeping. He goes and caresses her cheeks.

Uday: good morning princess ab uth jao na.

Anya pouts and throws his hands away.

Uday: ofo gussa to humesha tumhare naak par chadha rehta hai ms. Han nahi toh!! Kal keliye sach mein sorry humne koshish kit hi jaldi ane ki par college ke kaam se phas gaye. Chalo ab achi bacchi ki tarah fresh ho jao aur niche ao humne khud tumhareliye nashta banaya hai.

He kisses her cheek and leaves be4 se could say anything.

Anya smiles: ye uday bhi na pata nahi mujhe manane keliye kya kya utpatang harkate karta rehta hai.. chalo dkhte hai yuvraj udayveer singh apne mereliye kya nashta banaya hai..

She freshens up and goes down only to see Uday in most funny but cute avtar. Uday was wearing a chef hat, had a checks apron on him and had all flour on his cheeks and some in his hair.he was waiting for anya desperately. She sat on dinning table quietly but couldn't stop herself from giggling and eventually bursted out in laughter leaving behind a bichara confused uday.

Uday: kya hua princess has kyun rahi ho??

Anya: apna huliya dekha aine mein… hahahahahaha… so funny..

(she goes near him and pulls his cheeks.) kuch bhi kaho you look damn cute with this flour as make up.

Uday rubbing his cheeks: ya I know.

And both burst out laughing.

The servants bring the food. It was gobi-aloo parate pasta some fruits and juice.

Anya: oh my god Uday itna sab kuch??

Uday makes puupy face: actually princess hum gobi aur aloo parathe banane wale the par who dumb flour parathon se jyada humpe hi lag raha tha. So I told chef to make them and eventually I ended up in making pasta.

Anya smiles: you sure na mein ye kha sakti hu??

Uday pouts: princess ek toh humne tumhareliye itni mehnat se ye banaya aur tum ho ki… jao mat khao..

Anya : hehehehe I was just kidding mere pyare se golu molu flour make up wale teddy bear..

She says again pulling his cheeks…

And hugs him tightly.

Uday: sorry for yesterday.

Anya: its ok Uday tumne itna sab kuch kiya ye bahot hai.

They share a beautiful eyelock.

Unnati comes down chirping..

Unnati: hi any…..(Sees Uday) oh my god dada ye konsa naya fashion try kiya apne??

Anya bursts out laughin: hehehehe good 1 unnzie actually Uday ne humareliye nashta banaya hai. Who bhi pasta.

Unnati: wat dada sach mein?

Uday: han mere life ke rahu ketu ab mujhe baksh do aur mere dimag ko nahi pasta khao.

Both girls sit and have pasta.

Anya shocked: omg Uday ye sach mein awesome hai.. are you sure ye tumne banaya hai??

Unnati: han dada I mean this is the best pasta ive eaten till now!

Uday smiles proudly: maa ki recipe hai fail hona impossible.

Anya hugs him: I swear Uday jabbi mein gussa ho jau na mujhe manane keliye yehi pasta khila dena han nahi toh!!

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Manyata was on verge to break down again,

Manyata: ds mujhe bhuk nahi hai…

She leaves from there without getting any reply.

Unnati curses herself for saying so and so does uday…

NOTE:

guys i know itne dino baad update diya hai toh thoda lamba hona chahiye tha. aur mein dene bhi wali thi. but aaj mera chota sa accident hua. aur mere left hand mein sprain hua so mein sirf utna hi depai jitna i could type...

i hope u all understand...

~mahi~

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Posted: 12 years ago
really wanted to know what actually happened in their past that manveer r seperated nd why no one talk to her about uday nd uday himself
plz plz plz update soonnn nd plz plz plz update soon nd Take Care of yourself
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awww Mahi , u made me all teary and emotional😭.

Awesome update BTW😆!
The past scene with Uday and Anya was too cute😳. Your description of Uday in a chef's avatar was spot-on👍🏼. I want to employ him to make pasta for me😉.
This was my favourite line : Anya : hehehehe I was just kidding mere pyare se golu molu flour make up wale teddy bear..
... I loved it!
But I'm still very curious about what caused their split , hope u reveal that soon. Really hoping u can update soon , thanks for the scrap.
Sorry to hear about your hand ... hope the sprain heals fast!
Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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