ArHi FF:BETRAYAL IN YOUR LOVE#11 Season2link-pg105

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Part 54

The road was empty and the sky was dark.. The darkness of the sky was accompanying a person whose life was also dark just because of him.. He was the one lead his life in a dark way.. He was the one who destroy his own life and the life of the person he loves the most.. A man who write his own destiny was been betrayed with his own faith.. He was no longer to judge his own words or his own faith.. Everything was destroyed and there were no way of returning back.. Even if he wish but the pain and the lost can never be refundable.. He drive his car with full speed.. If can he wanted to end his life at this point and vanish from all this pain and guiltiness.. But he wasn't a man who run from his responsibility.. But just because of his one mistake his own life turn to a cruel tragedy.. He clenched on the steering and exhales a harsh breath' He closed his eyes and the only face he saw was Khushi.. Who was still asking him WHY..??

He brake his car in sudden and come out from the driver seat.. He was walking restless while his hand was forming a perfect fist.. His nails was poking his skin but he didn't care.. The pain he was feeling in his heart wasn't comparable with the physical pain he was suffering now.. He lean his back on the car and slowly lean down.. He seat on the rough road and tear start to roll on his cheeks.. He can never forgive himself.. He can never forgive his own deeds.. His eyes was red his heart and brain was fighting with each other.. He still remember the promise he made with her.. 'I will never leave you Khushi..' But all this remain promise which he couldn't fulfill..

Arnav: "I'm sorry Khushi.. I'm sorry.. Aryan and'" Uttering his daughter name was too difficult for him.. He can hear her crying voice ringing in his ear.. "Ryana'" He whisper.. "I'm sorry.. I can't save you that time.. I'm really sorry.. I know I'm not worthy to call as a father but please forgive me.. Please'"He pleads.. His breath was irregular while his eyes was busy shedding tear on his destiny and fate.. "If I knew you was in pain I will never let anything happen to you.. You Mamma have full faith in me but I have betrayal her.. I have only given her pain nothing else.. Even a lot had happen she still hope for me.. She wait for me.. But I.. I ruin everything.. I spoiled everything and now after seeing her shattered again just because of me is killing me in guiltiness..".. He closed his eyes tight and tear rolled on his ASR 's mask.. The mask which he was too proud to carry out.. The name was enough to fear anyone but today the same name can't do anything.. The same name can't even save his daughter.. "Mamma.." He called his own mother with trembling lips.. "Why all this happen to me..?? Why me Mamma..? First I lost you then Papa and now Ryana.." His lips was dried so does his throat.. "Why Mamma..?? Why all this happen to me..? Don't I too deserve a happy life..?? Why you leave me Mamma..?? Why..?? If you was with me.. Then I would never let ASR overshadow my life.. I wouldn't let that happen..! Because of me Khushi have gone through a lot.. She was broken just because of me.. Why Devi Maiyya did this to her..?? She should punish me not her..? She shouldn't take Ryana.." He cried his heart out.. This was the second time he was crying at this extend.. first was when he misunderstand Khushi and today he was crying for his own built mistake.. "Mamma.. I always wish to have a daughter.. A daughter which will love me.. But now my daughter too hate me.. She would never forgive me on what I have done to her mother.. I am bad person.. I can't give anyone happiness.. I can only give pain to them.." He gulped down the pain he was feeling in his heart.. "What should I do Mamma..?? How should I make everything normal and where should I start..??"

He was clueless.. Seem everything was blend up.. He doesn't found any ray to make thinks back to present.. Just then something whisper in his ear.. He hurriedly stood up and start his engine and drove back to Raizada Mansion.. He knew from where he should start.. This was only opportunity he has.. To meet his Daughter..

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The time he reached at his mansion it was already midnight.. There were slightly dark at the living room and kitchen light was open.. He walked straight towards his room where Khushi was sleeping.. The moment he step in he was stunted.. He looked here and there to find her.. He checked the bathroom and she wasn't there too.. He walked towards the poolside and sigh in relief when he saw her standing and watching the moon and stars..

Arnav: "Khushi'" almost whisper.. The moment she heard his voice.. She turn to meet his eyes.. Her eyes was filled up and she was literally holding her own tear to fall down.. Arnav took a small step towards her.. He didn't know what he should do..?? What if she distracts him to touch her..?? What if she blurt out in sudden..?? But.. She run in his embrace and cried hard on his chest..

Khushi: "Why Devi Maiyya took Ryana for me'?? Why Arnav..?? She was too small.. She needs me.. She needs a mother and I can't even took her in my embrace.." She cried out.. Like always he don't have any answer for her query.. The more she asked the more he was clueless.. The only he can do was hug her tight..

Arnav: "Because Devi Maiyya loves her more than anyone.." He whisper in her ear.. She sobs silently..

Khushi: "Then why didn't you whisper all these words to me when I really need you..?" At least she wanted him to answer this question of hers..

Arnav: "I'm sorry.." Alone tear rolled on his cheeks..

Khushi: "It can't be repair Arnav.. I can never get back my daughter.. I was waiting for you day and night so you will come to me and we will have a happy life.. But everything remain hopes which can never been fulfill.." His shirt was drenched with her nonstop tear..

Arnav: "Don't forgive me Khushi.. I'm not worthy for any forgiveness.. I have only given you pain and hurt.. I don't even deserve yours and Aryan's love.." He gulped down.. "I will respect every decision of yours from now onwards.. I meant it.." They pulled apart.. She cupped her cheeks and looked in his moist eyes..

Khushi: "Promise..??" He nodded and put his hand on hers.. "Will you fulfill my wish.." He nod a Yes.. "Take me to Amirstar.. I wanted to meet my daughter.. I wanted to meet my Ryana, Arnav.. She might be waiting for me.. I visit her every year.. And I don't want to make her wait for me.. Please take me.." He pulled her in his embrace and hug her tightly.. She was totally broken just because of him.. He can't even forgive himself after thinking of this horrible deeds towards her..

Arnav: "I will take you.. We will meet our Ryana at Amirstar(Golden Temple).." He whisper all those words he should do before.. He can see how badly she need him that time but he was showing to the worlds that all these doesn't matter to him.. How wrong he was..?? All this does matter to him..

To be continued..

I don't want to hide anymore.. I will tell what kind of ending I'm giving..? It would be SAD ending.. After all his deeds I don't think so he deserve for forgiveness.. Let him earn for that sorry.. If forgiving is that easy then there would be no divorce cases in this worlds.. Season 2 which is sequel would be happy Ending..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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INDEX..

Part 55 - Click Me..

Part 56 - Click Me.. (Last)

Season II - Click Me..

Edited by ..Sugar_ArHi.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow cant believe am in firstpage to comment... loved the update he should be punished more and i too think he should not get forgiveness soon wairing fr its sequel and i love ur writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I read ur FF in one go and I must say u are amazing writer

there are so much pain... is love always bring that much pain?
plz don't break them apart make happy ending...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo for new thread...
He is feeling the pain of losing his daughter.
Its nice he is taking her to amristar.
Waiting for sequel
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very Emotional Update...😭
Well Arnav really can't get a forgiveness from Kushi that soon...

👏👏👏Great Buddy..
I Never Missed any Emotions of your Great Stories...😳
Edited by -Iruni- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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y sad ending :( feeling bad... hope no one ll die or something :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread nice update loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved d update
C 🥳 NGRATS ON NEW THREAD
pls update soon
Thanx for pm
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Loved the update.. its gonna be sad ending of this season.. then will be waiting for season2.

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