ARSHI FF:BETRAYAL IN YOUR LOVE THREAD 2 - PART 18

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THANKS FOR ALL THE LOVELY COMMENT AND WE ARE ON THREAD TWO
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I WANTED TO TAKE THIS OPPORTUNITY TO THANKS ALL MY READER AND TODAY I WILL GIVE A SURPRISED TO ALL OF YOU.. HOPE YOU PEOPLE LIKE IT..🤗

Betrayal in your love is my first attempt in writing and this thread i wanted to dedicated to my first reader ANUJMENON.. She is the first person to read and comment on thread one.. Thanks Anuj

CHAYMA sorry i think i miss out your name while sending pm previously.. I didn't delete you from my friend list and i know you always comment on my works.. really sorry...

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PART 13

Arnav: "Khushi open the door.." he keep on knocking her room's door.. "Khushi open the door.. Please open it.." he keep on knocking and still no response from her end.. "Khushi.. I'm sorry.. Please open the door.. Please Khushi.." still knocking..

He was feeling guilty.. He shouldn't threaten her that way and by his one threat everything has crushed. By his one mistake, it will be difficult to plead apologize from her again. And this time her heart will be hard just like a stone and it will make more difficult to break that stone. He can't turn the time but he still can change everything and make it prefect just like before.. He knock the door again and still no response from her.. He started to get worried.. Did anything happen to her? Did she hurt herself? No.. She won't harm herself.. She is strong and what if yes'??? He start to get in nervous.. His thought of her hurting herself is hunting him.. He knock the door with rough.. He was screaming in restless

"Khushi.. Open this damn door..!!" He shouts.. "Khushi please at least tell me you are alright.. Please.." His voice changing in plead.. "Khushi.. Please ope.." been interrupt

Room service: "Excused me sir.. May I help you..?" he asked once he saw him knocking the door and nervousness all over his face..

Arnav: "Get double key of this room.." with impulse

Room Service: "May I know who you are..?" Just after he speak.. Arnav grab his collar and give him an murderous glance..

Arnav: "ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA.. Keep in your brain!!" gritting his teeth.. The boy quickly nodded.. "Get the key..NOW!!" he shouts..

Once he leaves his collar.. The room services boy quickly run to the receptionist desk to take the key.. All the hotel staff have been informed about ASR outburst again and they were in shocked because he had just turn the hotel upside down by Sanchi incident and now??

Manager: "ASR.. What happen..?" the manager ask as he have been informed about his sudden outburst..

Arnav: "Where is the key of this room??" with rough voice

Manager: "ASR.. This room is empty.." trying to hold his breath while answering him..

Arnav: "What!! Khushi was staying in this room.. Then how this possible.. It can't be empty.. Don't lie to me..!!" he shouts

Manager: "ASR.. She already check out two hours ago.."

Arnav: "WHAT!!" he shouts till verge' He couldn't believe that she had left the hotel and back to Dehli.. Without wasting time.. He quickly run to his suite and leaving the staff without any answer..

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Arnav's suite

He quickly dialed Aman's number while moving restless in his suite

Aman: "Hello.. ASR"

Arnav: "Aman.. Get me ticket to Dehli within one hour.." he was speaking rashly.. He didn't even bother to listen Aman's answer.. He just cut the called and throw his phone on his bed.. He quickly open his wardrobe and pack his luggage in hurry.. He sat on the couch and close his face with his hand..
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His eye started to moist .. He was thinking about her.. Her tear her pain and her breakdown was effecting him badly.. Her words flashing in his mine.. "Can you take back all the satire that I have to face during the day..? Can you scratch the mouth of the society..? Can you turn the time..? Can you clean my name..? Can you give me back my LIFE MY SOUL that you KILLED when you betray me on altar.. Can you give me back my soul??" He closed his eye tight and alone tear roll on his cheek..

"I'm sorry Khushi.." he whisper in pain which is killing him by his own act.. Just after 30 minutes his phone rang again and he quickly answer it..

Aman: "ASR.. There is no flight to Dehli till tomorrow morning.."

Arnav: "What!!" he shouts

Aman: "ASR I have tried and the last plane took off two hours ago.." tried to explain

He suddenly thought it might be Khushi who depart by that plane.. Because she just left the hotel within two hours..

Arnav: "Aman get my cooper.. I want it by 30 minutes at Goa airport and get my car at Dehli Airport.." This is the only way left to reach Dehli and this is the only way to meet her soon.. Even it already late.. But still he don't want to lose hope and most important is he wants to make sure she is fine.. He wanted a relief that she is alright..

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Dehli

Arnav drove his car from Dehli Airport to their apartment. In between, He has tried to call her. But her call was not connecting because it was out of reached. He tried to called again..

Arnav: "Khushi please answer the damn phone" but his affect went vain..

What the hell!! Where is she? Why she is not answering her phone? He mutters

He tried again and still out of reached.. He banged his fist on the steering' Once he reached at the apartment entrance, He brake his car rashly and leave it at the entrance door.. Before moving in the apartment lobby he throw the key to the security and ask him to parked the car.. The security quickly nodded..

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Once he come out of the evaluator.. He run to her doorstep and start to knock the door

Arnav: "Khushi open the door.." He shouted while banging the door.. "Khushi.. Open the door damn it.." He started to move restless in front of her doorstep.. He knock again and still no answer.. He rush to the Lobby and ask the receptionist.. "Did Khushi reached from Goa?" he speak while gasping for air in between his words..

Receptionist: "Yes ASR.. She have reached but she took her luggage and leaves to airport.."

Arnav: "Airport!!!" his heart start to beat in hurry.. "Did she leave any message??" Looking at the receptionist..

Receptionist: "Yes ASR.. She told us to give the key to her cleaner whenever she comes to clean her apartment"

Arnav: "Did she leave any other message?? When she will be back or where she went?? He was shooting question just like shooting bullet.. Her previous message was not enough for him and he thought maybe she leaves any other message about her whereabouts..

Receptionist: "ASR.. She told she is leaving for few weeks and not sure went she will be coming back and she didn't mention where she is going?" She looks at a nervous and restless ASR

Arnav: "Few weeks!!.." almost whisper.. His eye getting wider for each second by thinking she had left Dehli.. He quickly called Aman and told him to find about Khushi's from Dehli Airport.. Only from there he can know where did she went.. He told Aman to give all the information to him as soon as possible.. He will be waiting at Blue Bar..

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Blue Bar

Arnav was having his whiskey.. He was lost in his own world.. He was thinking about Khushi and where she has been.. All the bar staff was looking at him.. They feels scared, if he did the same mess again just like he did before.. His lost been interrupt by sudden pat on his shoulder..

Karan: "Hey ASR.. Whats up dude??" with smile

Arnav: "Karan.. What are you doing here..?" he lifted his eye and look at him

Karan: "What people does at Bar??" teasing him.. "Of course to have a drink dude.." he said while sitting on the chair beside him

Arnav: "Waiter.. Get a drink for him" then he lost again in his own thought.. But this act of his have been notice by his friend, Karan

Karan: "ASR.. What's wrong..? You didn't look fine" while putting his hand on his shoulder

Arnav: "I'm fine karan" with a tired and low voice

Karan: "ASR.. you doesn't look fine.. Just tell me is anything bothering you.."

Arnav: "Nothing wrong with me.." he gulp his drink.. Karan was noticing his behavior.. He can feel something wrong with him.. His face are showing all of his worries and tiredness..

Karan: "Is that about Khushi??" he guesses.. He didn't response in words but his grip tight on the glass while her name is took..

Karan smile.. But unnoticed by Arnav.. So it's about her. ASR you always hide your feeling and this is one of your weakness.. And most importantly is you always has problem to control your anger.. He thought.

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Karan: "Where is Khushi now..?" he tried to trap him in his words

Arnav: "I don't know.. She leaves Dehli today.." with sadness and heart breaking tone

Karan: "She left.. But why??" with shocked expression

Arnav: "We have a huge fight today" while gulping his next shot

Karan: "You fight again.. But why??" rising his eyebrow

Arnav: "I threaten her.."

Karan: "What!! Are you mad.. You are making things more worst.." he was looking at him with wider eye.. ASR action was unpredictable..

Arnav: "I have no intend to do so.. I don't know what to say when she keep on describing herself with that disgusting word.." gritting his teeth.. "and that was the only way I had to stop her.. But I manhandle her Karan.. I shouldn't do that.. I was so angry and I didn't realize that I was hurting her.." he spoke with a low and repentances voice

Karan: "You manhandle her.." with a shocked expression.. "You.. how can you do like this ASR.. She is so soft and.. You.." he couldn't complete his words.. His words stack on his throat..

Arnav: "I have no intend.. I.. I.. I was angry and my anger have destroyed everything.." he speak with a breaking words

Karan: "Of course your anger is the worst thing in yourself'" He was feeling sorry for Khushi.. This time she must be more hurt and in pain.. Arnav was looking numb. He ask for another bottle and start drinking again..

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Karan have leave, he has an important work.. But before leave he have consoled him by telling him everything will be alright.. Just after karan left.. Aman comes in.. Once Arnav saw Aman, He quickly ask about her..

Arnav: "Where she went??" in rashly

Aman: "ASR.. She.." he shutter

Arnav: "She WHAT!!" he barked

Aman: "ASR.. She left for Paris.." his eye open wider..

Arnav: "What.." almost whisper

Aman: "She went Paris once she reach from Goa.. And she went alone.." Arnav start to gulp from one shot to another.. Aman was sitting quietly beside him.. he didn't say a words and was looking at his Boss.. Who is fully drunk.. All the while he drinks he didn't utter a words.. The only thing he was doing is make his mind to forget everything.. Even it is impossible for him..

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After two hours companion him in the bar.. Aman bring him back and was holding him by his one hand on Arnav's waist and his hand on Aman's neck.. He took him to his apartment and make him sleep on the bed and leaves from there..

Once Aman left.. Arnav slowly open his eye and alone tear rolled from his eye..

"Khushi.." he whisper.. He didn't even thought that she would leaves to Paris by his threat and this time he is angry on himself.. He was feeling helpless and being ASR he can't do anything other than feel guilty by his own create mistake.. He sleep by uttering her name for the rest of the night..

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There weeks passed, but there were no news about Khushi's return. And this three weeks was the terrible day for him.. He thought of going Paris but he stop his wish because he don't want to disturb her and she will be always disturb if he is around her' The last 4 years he missed her a lot but he didn't told anyone.. Only one person know about his state on that time.. He didn't show to people that he cares for her.. He don't want any sympathy from anyone.. He was being cold to everyone whenever they utter her name.. But his heart will always cried by missing her for every second..

He show to the world that he don't care about her.. But how this possible for him.. His heart beat always beat with her name and forgetting her was the impossible thing for him.. For this three weeks he didn't step in AR office nor Raizada Mansion.. He doesn't want to put his step on the place that will always remind him of her and her pain.. Because this is the place where she is been hurt and always in pain.. And the reason behind all this pain and hurt is him.. He told Aakash to handle AR Design while he will handle other works from his Hotel, AK Hotel. He built this hotel 2 years ago and it's a worldwide recognize.. He told his family that he stay at the hotel suite.. because none of them know about his apartment.. He told them that he have a work load and meeting for all the time.. His Di was a bit angry on him but later she allowed him because she know he won't listen to anyone..

Arnav was getting ready in his apartment.. His driver is waiting for him at the entrance.. Once he ready he sat on the back seat and order his driver to drove him to AK Hotel..

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He was checking his mails on his mobile and the driver was driving in full speed.. Once he finish checking he look out from the window.. Where he can clearly see Dehli street and people rushing.. The driver stops the car on the red signal. And he was still looking out of the window.. His eye capture a small little boy.. Who was crossing the road slowly.. He seem losts. His face show that he was scared.. But when he saw his face he feel a kind of belongings and clam.. Something inside him is pulling him to go near that boy and hug him tight.. His feeling is making him weird by his own thought.. Once the light turn to green the driver press the oil paddle and drove but he have to brake rashly when a small boy still crossing the road and by the sudden scream by his boss..

"WATCH OUT..!!!" he shouts..

Once the drive stop the car in rush.. Arnav look at the little boy through in front mirror.. Who was standing lost in his thought and was shivering

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Once he come out of the car in hurry.. The little boy look at him and only utter one word.. "Papa" with trembling lips and fade voice..

To be continued

😆😆How was my surprised😆😆

Sorry i can't make Aarav as their son.. I wanted Aarav to remain in the show.. Don't you think this kid is cute.. He look like ASR a bit.. and his name wont be Arush or something else.. I have decide his name and will be update on next part..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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what did he just do... arnav and his anger... hopeless... but i think it was not only that reason she left to paris right??? ... anyway... i just feel bad for him.. but actually i dont.. what did he mean by mistake... dude wake up and smell the coffee... it was not a mistake... its a crime dammit... you left her in the mandap alone to face others when you left the country and now you want her to hug you and comfort you??? go to hell.. again... i just remembered you are living in there... oh man... i just love this update...
just waiting for more...

Edited by ar_art - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

wow papa

cant wait

update soon
Edited by jothijoe18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res

Unres!!!

Oh my god !!! Oh my god!!!
i waited for this update!!!
the wait was worth it..
the update is such an emoptional one...
Khushi left to paris!! 😭
ASR s having tears... i dont like ASR crying one bit...

Poor Aman he is always at the recieving end.. poor guy... his friend karan seems like such a supportive one...

But the surprise in the end superb!!!
WOW!!! Pappa!!!!

i am now waiting for khushi to come looking for the little one and to see her reaction when she sees that arnav is with the kid!!!

you ended it again on another suspense!!!
loved it!!!

congratulations on the second thread!!

Edited by spuARHI - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update dear..:) at last ttt arnav met his son...:) nd he is sooo cute..:) love him as arnavs son...:) plz update soon..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So khushi went to Paris to get her son..
That first meet between Arnav and his son is so amazing
I love it
But I'm felt sad for Arnav when Khushi just went like that
Is something happen? Khushi should not leave like that
Please continue
Thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the update
Khushi left Arnav and went to paris
Arnav meeting his son for first time
He looks so cute
UPDATE SOON
thanks for pm
Edited by sweet_sanju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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arnav loves khushi very much..
but his anfer is the root of all miseries on khushi n him!!!
khushi came back to india??
n why the lil champ was on the road alone????
w8ng for next!!!
Edited by jisa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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khushi lft fr paris thn wat d liltl 1 dng in india alone
thnx 4 Pm

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