virman os - girl at the panipuri stall

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hey guyzz back wid an os dis tym... uff i dnt beleieve i hav written 2 os in one day *pats ma back*😆
hope u guyz lyk it... njoy reading..

GIRL AT THE PANIPURI STALL

He sat in his car after his office and was driving on the lonely roads. Yes he was Virat Vadhera, the famous businessman. He had everything in life except love. He lost his family at a very young age and had only his brother with him who took care of him all his life. After getting married, he had his bhabhi too who looked after him like a little brother. He always wanted love from people but life was too unfair to him. He had loved Maya with all his heart but only got betrayal in return. But he didn't lose faith in love. He knew he would find his 'true love' soon.

No one was on the roads because it was raining heavily. He loved the rain. The nature looked beautiful when it rained. He was driving away on the empty roads when he saw a humanly figure walking slowly and carefully towards something that looked like a stall. After seeing closely he understood that it was a girl. He could see her walking with an umbrella in her hand towards a stall. 'But where is she going in so much rain' he wondered. He drove towards her as he wanted to help her in this weather. When he reached next to her he slid the window down and said

"aap itni bearish mein kahan ja rahi hain?" he asked her.

She turned towards his car. As soon as he saw her he was mesmerized by her beauty. He could see innocence in her eyes. She was nothing less than a fairy. she hurriedly sat into the passenger seat. Virat was shocked. First because she sat in without asking him and second because he could see a small bump meaning she was pregnant.

"dekhiye please mujhe aage wale pani puri bhaiya ke stall tak chod dijiye phir main aapko tang nahi karungi" she pleaded through her eyes. He couldn't deny those eyes and started his car towards the stall. It was not too far yet not too close.

"aap itni bearish mein pani puri khane aayi hain?" he asked her.

"haan " she replied casually.

He saw her through the mirror. She was beautiful. Brown eyes, with a dusky complexion. Her hair slightly wet due to the rain. She was smiling looking outside and had one hand on her swollen tummy. 'how could her husband leave her in this state all alone' he thought.

Finally he had stopped the car in front of the pani puri stall. He watched her getting excited on seeing it. He helped her getting out of the car and held the umbrella out for her.

"thank you so much. Aapne meri bahut madat ki hai. Aap ja sakte hain ab" she said with a cute smile.

He smiled back and said "koi baat nahi main aapko wapas ghar chod dunga."

She didn't argue further as she was more interested in her pani puris. She ate the delicious pani puris one by one and made sounds to express her enjoyment. He looked at with so much of amusement.

"how can someone be like this" he thought.

She later realized he was with her and offered him too. He shook his head negatively inplying that he didn't want. So she herself completed them, paid the bhaiya and started walking towards the car. He too walked with her and sat in the car. He ignited the engine and drove towards her house as per her directions. He couldn't help but stare at her. She was so pure. She was just so beautiful. He didn't have words to express him self. 'Virat you are already falling for her' he thought. But he controlled himself after seeing her bump. He decided to talk to her for a bit.

Waise aapka naam kya hai? He asked.

"manvi" she answered. 'Manvi, a beautiful girl with a beautiful name' he thought.

"aapko inti raat ko bahar jane kaise diya aapke pati ne?? he asked her.

"aapko kisne kaha ki mere pati hain??" she answered back.

"matlab??" he asked confusedly.

"oh toh aap ne bhi yeh dekh kar soch liya ki main shaadi dhuda hoon" she said pointing towards her belly.

"haan kyun??" he asked again.

"meri shaadi nahi hui hai aur isse pehele ki aap puche ki yeh kahan se aaya main bata doon ki yeh mere ex boyfriend ki wajah se hai. Usne mera istemal kiya aur baad mein dhoka diya. Lekin jab tak mujhe pata chalta der ho chuki thi. Yeh nanhi si jaan mere andar pal rahi thi. Parivaar walon ne bahut samjhaaya par main isse maar nahi sakti thi" she said caressing her belly. He could see tears welling up in her eyes.

"im sorry agar maine aapko hurt kiya toh" he said.

"nahi aap kyun sorry bol rahe hain. Jisne hurt kiya usne toh mudke dekha bhi nahi na. aur jinse ummed thi unhone bhi haath chod diya." She said sadly.

"matlab??" he asked.

"matlab yeh ki mere parivaar ne bhi mera saath chod diya jab mujhe unki sabse zyaada zaroorat thi. Unhe yeh bacha nahi chahiye tha toh maine bhi ghar chod diya." She said.

"aap akeli kaise reh thi hain??" he asked her with concern.

"akeli kahan meri dost hai, actually main ek boutique chalathi hun woh meri partner hain aur sabse zyaada kareeb hai mujhse. Who mera khayal rakhti hai uar yeh bhi toh haina mujhe support karne ke liye" she said looking at her tummy.

He was yet again mesmerized by her behavior. He couldn't believe how a girl could survive with her child all alone. And now she was sharing her problems with a stranger. 'wasn't she scared' he thought..

Reading his thoughts she answered " nahi dar nahi lagta kyunki mujhe aap pe bharosa hai. Jo ladka mujhe dekh kar gadi rok ke meri halat puch sakta hai woh mere saath kuch bura nahi kar saktha."

He smiled at her explanation. He was falling very hard for her. 'is this love at first sight?' he questioned himself. Finally she asked him to stop as her house had come. He stopped the car. Before she could go out he held her wrist.

"Manvi" he called out.

She looked at him.

"I know tum mujhse abhi mili ho aur main tumhare liye ek ajnabi hun. But lagta hai main tumse already pyaar karne laga hoon" he said in one go. He looked at her expecting her to be angry but to his surprise she was smiling.

She kissed his cheek slowly. "bye" she said and went away.

What happened after that was a fairy tale. Virat and Manvi soon married each other and Manvi had given birth to a beautiful baby girl.

Virat watched Muskaan sleeping peacefully. He came out of his thoughts when someone tapped his shoulder. He turned to see Mnvi standing behind him. He slowly wrapped him arms around her waist and pulled closed.

"kya soch rahe ho?" she asked.

"yehi soch raha ha ki agar main uss din woh pani puri ki dukan kea age tumhein na dekhta toh zindagi kitni adhuri hoti."

She smiled at him and placed her head on his chest. He hugged her back.

"I love you Manvi" he said.

"I love you too Virat" she replied.


uff done wid it.. ignore da mistakes... nt proofread..

i knw i hav ma ff left.. will update maybe by sunday...

pms will be sent later..

thnx fr reading😊

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Jannat94 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was amazing and lovely one
such a beautiful stories u recite in a go
well down SHRUTHI
Do write more. . . Love it ❤️
And i'm mistaken i'm the 1st one to comment
Yipee
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow shruthi you write so beautifully.it was a great one shot well done
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow! It was just awesome Shruthi...👏

I just loved it a lot...😛

And this is for writing this fab os...🤗

Thanks for pm...😛

Take care dear...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sacchu tu toh dhokebaaz nnikli yaar i hate yu 😡
but i love virman so padhliya 😛
this OS was sooo sweeet cute and adorable loved it ❤️
two incomplete souls complete together and a happy family with baby muskaan awww shooo shweet
loved the cute adorable funny full of life and positive manvi and virat a gentleman sweet and caring 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS Suchu!! ⭐️ Simple and sweet.. Virat fell for her on the very first meeting .. Manvi is such a strong girl.. Loved her 😊.. Virman and Muskann - Happy family 😃.. Loved it ❤️.. Do write more.. Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What a beautiful OS Ioved it .. moreover I loved the ending it was so beautiful ❤️ The way Manvi and Virat met, the love at first sight, him accepting her baby .. perfect. I can't say anything better in your praise than that, you've left me speechless.

I love this OS. Thank You🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Suoperbly superb...
Awesome..
Like this full of virmaan love..
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwn shruthi This is soo lovely !!~~ awesome os ❤️ i really loved it :D ❤️ such a sweet os !!!❤️ so adorable :D thanx for the pm :D

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