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Posted: 12 years ago

#981

replied here..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86556605

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singh24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#982

Originally posted by: palindrome

day after tomorrow...😊

Itna lamba intzaar...🥱

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#983

Originally posted by: singh24

Itna lamba intzaar...🥱

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#984

wonderful update

right now maan n his mother both r sailing in the same boat difference is that maan didn't deserve that behavior of suta n maan's mother does. but i think its too long for maan's hatred toward his mother.

hope he will understand this point soon

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-jaanleva-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#985

I finally managed to catch up with this story! I'd read a few chapters before but I lost track & then exams etc got in the way

Suta's cheekiness reminds me of Geet's playful attitude before the night when she was attacked... Like mother like daughter...

Maan's affections towards Suta is adorable & so loving & even though she tries to find ways to maintain a hatred for him, his simple fatherly actions can't help but touch her heart...

I'm really enjoying this story, a unique & invoking concept. Update soon :)

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Madhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#986

nice update

loved the trio dadi-mamta-suta...enjoying and mainly forgetting all sorrow and lightening the tense mood created by maan

suta is very joival...loved her lines "This brat son indeed deserves a brat daughter.." and Whole family is in hurry of getting old faster...

maan flt bad for shouting on suta and dadi made him aware of the pain her mother going thru when he ignores her...but stubborn him not accepting his fault...now he wanted to know the reason behind suta's behaviour

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 12 years ago

#987

awesome .. loved the update

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CrabbyEntity

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Posted: 12 years ago

#988

its gud to see daadi giving maan a much needed realiy check and that too with a comparison of wht he z currently feeling and going through is how his mother is been dealt that too for 15 long years where as he has just had it for 15 days...and now i think all the words daadi said wd b lurking around in sum corner of his mind and wd strike his heart at the best possible opportunity to clear the dust that has settled there for his mother...

the battle between suta's heart and mind is natural for the kid she is..she doesn't hv anyone to confide wid her confusions and that has made her a slave btw her heart and mind and being a kid she z fighting the biggest battle of world that is btween heart and mind..she was feeling bad after having seen the fatherly love she has always craved for she couldn't digest his anger even though that luv was frm the last person she had ever expected but still it was weaving its way in her heart unknown to her and why wdn't it she is a luv starved soul who has always pinned for her parents luv and now she was afraid to hv it lost for she has pushed it herself and hearing "beta" wd hav done the job had it not been of the bitter memories always present at the foremost part of her mind...

seeing mamta's pain was heart wrenching she sure is suffering alot being helpless for till now she had tried everythng in her power to make it up for her son but was not enough...

"He would have understood the value of a mother,if God hadn't blessed him with one like her" this line had me in tears for the certain depth the words had in them...for their z no blessing like a 'mother' in this world and only those who hv lost theirs can understand the true value of the 'heaven on earth' called "Mother" ...no one and absolutely no one can even come close to understand the ordeal a child goes through without a mother specially a girl...

enjoyed the light hearted chatter among the ladies of the house and luvd suta for how she understood mamta's pain totally forgetting all of her own confusions and tried to make mamta smile and divert her mind...and wht to say abt dadi she z a rockstar luvd her 'red bull' mantra and that Fb request to "guru ji' was hit wicket...and lastly i liked suta getting all naughty and planning to teach her 'Brat' a gud lesson...wd b eagerly waiting to see it...😊

Thank u sooo much for the update pinu!!!🤗

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#989

update dooo

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palindrome

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Posted: 12 years ago

#990

Teaser...!!!

"and who is their mother???" He asked again.

"Archana .." Dadi replied.

"What???? You mean that young girl,who has just returned from the hospital..." Maan asked with surprise.

"Yes.." Dadi consented.."But why are you so surprised.."

"She is too young for being grandmother of Purvi's daughter..Even she does not look mother of two 25 or 26 years old girls..."

"She has two more sons too..." Dadi exclaimed enjoying Maan's astonishment.

"How is that possible dadi???"

"Actually Archana had adopted four 13 years old kids just like you when she was twenty.." Dadi said biting her cheek to keep herself from laughing.

"Really???" Maan asked innocently.His eyes were surprised to find a story similar to his life on TV.

"No I was kidding..Story has taken 25 years leap.." Savitri devi spoke as she snatched the tiny notebook from Maan's hand.He was using that notebook for writing the information about serials from his grandmother.With much expertise,Savitri devi drew a family tree of Respective families of "Manav" and "Archana",which were male and female protagonists of the serial "Pavitra rishta"...

This teaser is to let all my beloved friends know,that I am trying hard to write this story but frequent ups and downs in my health {not so severe} are not letting me..I would try to finish the update ASAP,till then please bear with this teaser..

love you all...!!!😊