Anayah's Love Note(note2-pg6-01/7) - Page 4

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Congrats on CC... best wishes dear and keep writing ARSHI stories.. 😊

Hey... Hi...

This is soorya...
Congrats ion the cc and waiting for tge sequel...

🤪 mode ON...dunno from where to start..

before that my fav comments last time...

by penny25

I just now one thing nd dat is...
*****

by kuts

Commenting again!

Oye! its so beautiful,I read it twice already..
<3<3<3<3

so beautiful didi.. loving it..
so well written,and not at all vulgar.

plz write more. keep sharing! <3<3<3

*****
by ara_000

oh my goodness dis is simply a mindnumbling update ana darling reading these comments i was literally flying...😳
and thanks everyone for commenting...love you all...😃

Originally posted by: -Anayah-

Note2:

hehehe guys here is the banner for dream filled eyes...uh huh what is dream filled eyes its sequel OS of Morning after sensual encounter...

now enjoy the banner and ride your mind to imagine and guess what would be there in next OS.

thanks momo...momo121 for this cute banner...😳

teasers of FF and SS will hit the thread soon by evening.😃

so...bye I have to write now...bubye😉

Originally posted by: -Anayah-

🤪 mode ON...dunno from where to start..

before that my fav comments last time...

by penny25

I just now one thing nd dat is...

i've one of d bst bhabhi in dis world...!!!!!!!!!

who is so romantic...

nd writes so beautifully...

dat she make every word come alive...

so many gud things u wrote wid dis update dat is dedicated to mah Aman..!!!

who'l b defo happy to have got such gr8 gift...!!!!!!

nd d song...

kitna sai way mein use kiya hai apne is gane ka...

tell me truthfully..were imaginin u'reself wid hia while writing...😉😉😉

mere naughty bhabhi...:P

challo now update d FF pls...!!!!

nd thnk u so much for listening to mah aman nd me requst for d song..!!!!!!!!

by kuts

Commenting again!

Oye! its so beautiful,I read it twice already..
<3<3<3<3

so beautiful didi.. loving it..
so well written,and not at all vulgar.

plz write more. keep sharing! <3<3<3

by ara_000

oh my goodness dis is simply a mindnumbling update ana darling

i love it how u have penned down khuhsi's thoughts nd her each nd evry emotions...

i love it how she was thinking abt the last night nd was blushing herslf remebering her hubby's sweet torture...

loved it how she was thinking dat her life is no less than a fairy tale nd she is thankful to her devi maiyaa for giving her such a lovable hubby...

loved it how u have showed that last night they do have a passionate encounter nd he has again marked her as his nd she is not happy to b marked by his again nd again...

his shirt on her was giving her dis feeling dat she is indeed his nd his nly nd her xsistance is meaningless witout him nd he is made to b his nly...

nd den wen she came out aftr bathing nd her gaze fall on her awake hubby already gave her goosebumps thnking abt their last night love making nd as xpected he came to her nd hugged her from behing nd started giving open mouthed kisses on her shoulder as if to take away the pain he has given her last night...but the fact is dis pain nd soreness is nothng to her as she willingly submitted herslf to him again nd he again all set to amrk her his nd his nly...

ana darling,u nailed it up 👍🏼

i love it to bits deary...

awsum simply awsum 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

love ya ❤️

hugs 🤗

by renee.bee

Hi i read the note n i dnt find anythng vulgar abt this or the previous os. infact it takes of creativity n imagination to write somethng so intimate as love making so beautiful n sensual without making u cringe. I love how u write this its done beautifully there's a difference bet sensuality n vulgarity n love making n sex.

2nd OS.

I loved this song as i hve heard it ages bck bt don't remember the picturization. its good however coz with every line of the song u have described khushi's emotions matching the lyrics n how she feels fr rnav. this os continuing frm the previous one where khushi turned into a seductress

The way she opens her eyes n closes them along with her dreams , her thoughts n her longing to be with arnav blends with the lyrics of the song.

Also when she goes to the bath tub letting water run over her body with words coincinding wth it

When she comes out n arnav is waiting to take her n then putting her on the bed n kissing her passionately ws so amazing.

Guess i m speechless no words to explain wht i wnt to sy coz somethng jus cnt b explained in wrds. like this os of ur ws without any dialogues bt. u waeved the whole update around this song.

by iris_iris2

Wonderful writing. I'm surprised writers of IPKKND forum have still kept the story alive in a beautiful way. So show or no show, ASR& KHUSHI are alive on this forum😊

reading these comments i was literally flying...😳

Originally posted by: ara_000

OMG AM I DREAMING?????????

SUMONE PLZ PINCH ME 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

pinch karu kya...😳