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** CHAPTER 1 **
** we were meant to be **

early morning, 10 am, delhi...
"btameez dil... btameez dil... btameez dil maane na... "
switch it off...
why dont u do it...???
oh shut up viren... please alarm band kar do... i wanna sleep man...
i also wanna sleep... you switch it off jaan...
arghhh... do it na jaan...
okkk
viren looked at his mobile and sighed " itni jaldi kyun baj jata hai ye...?? its 10 am... i hate getting up early morning..."
" get up u lazy ass... " viren nudged her...
" arghh... Lemme sleep... " she replied in a sleepy tone...
" i m giving u a last warning... Warna... " he leaned towards her.
" viren... " she irritatedly whispered.
Viren smirked n get back into bed snuggling close to her.
" umm"
" ur punishment as i said before... " viren whispered into her ear.
" no... Viren..." she said still not ready to open her eyes.
But next moment she felt his lip against hers. Soon he started nibbling her lower lip waiting for her to respond. But viren singh vadera hates waiting so he clutched her slim waist and pulled her towards him. She knew what his action spoke, so she started responding n started moving her lips against his. Soon the kiss gained speed and their tongues were fighting for dominance, while viren rubbed his hand on her waist making her loose her senses even more. She adjusted herself in his embrace while his moved inside her top moving upwards, downwards n sideways. He pinched her waist n she moaned giving viren a chance to enter his tongue in her mouth and his tongue expertly exploring her mouth. His warmth melting her every minute and drowning her more n more in his passion.
" I .. love' you.. " viren whispered between the kiss n she pulled him even more closer and whispered " love u too viren' ". His chocolaty brown eyes looking at her features closely and admiring her beauty while her fingers running in his hair n pulling him towards her. His hands made way to her assets n he smiled in the kiss thinking that she never wore bra at night n this delighted him every morning. She bite his lips n he teased her by slowly rolling his thumb on her already hardened nipple, elongating it. She pushed him away n broke the kiss'.
" why did u spoiled it manvi'.??? " viren asked.
" because I cant resist it anymore'. " she replied blushing.
" come here' " he opened his arms.
manvi shifted a little n hugged him smiling'
" why this sudden smiling n all'.?? " viren asked her'
" because I fit so perfectly in your arms'. " manvi replied kissing his cheek.
" waise who was that guy yesterday night in the pub'.??? " viren asked' his possessive side taking over him.
" who'.?? " manvi asked rubbing her cheek on his chest.
" the one in the black shirt' " viren said.
"you know he was asking me if he could buy me a drink'. " manvi giggled..
" then what did u say' ??? " viren asked getting jealous.
" I said I can buy u the whole pub sweetheart n he went away' poor guy.. haha " manvi replied.
" I shouldn't have left you alone baby... "viren said
" ohh hello' I can take care of myself... "she said proudly.
" but I love protecting you... " viren said as a matter of fact.
" I know baby' " manvi replied...

"Mundeyan nu chardi thaari thaari thaari ohdi heat te
Marjani paundi bhangra
Angrezi beat te... "

Viren growled n said : lo baj gaya... Meri love life pe shani banke baitha rehta hai...
Manvi : its just my phone' relax...
Manvi picked up the phone n whispered "tornado..."
Viren : now why is he calling up...?? tumhare dad ko kuch kaam nahi hai kya...??
Manvi : kaam hi hoga that's why he called up (manvi said with a sad expression on her face' she is dying for her dad's love n attention but alas he is way too busy managing his business empire n making money' god knows for whom.. when he cant concentrate on his only daughter )
Viren : cmon babes' talk to him...
Manvi picked up the phone.
Manvi : hello'.. dad
Vivek : manvi I want u home in next one hour...
Manvi : so u are in india...?? Welcome dad
Vivek : yes I am for few hours... n I want to introduce u to somebody...
Manvi : dad I already told u that I am in a relationship...
Vivek : a relationship which has no future... See u at home...
Manvi : I am not coming,,,
Vivek : be on time'. You need to see that boy for marriage... wear some decent clothes ms. Singhania
Manvi : I am not coming dad...
Vivek : see u doll' bye...
Manvi threw her phone on the floor breaking it into pieces...
Viren : manvi'. What is wrong'.???
Manvi sat down on the bed with an expressionless face...
Viren : baby...
Manvi : dad is here... wants me to meet a guy...
Viren : what do u mean by "meet a guy"...??
Manvi : dad wants me to get married... Its just a business deal for him' viren am I nothing more than piece of furniture which he can sell for money...
Viren : shh' don't think like that'. U aren't going anywhere babes'. I love u sweetheart...
Manvi : dad wants me to get married'. Its just a business deal for him' viren am I nothing more than piece of furniture which he can sell for money...
Viren : shh' don't think like that'. U aren't going anywhere babes'. I love u sweetheart...
Manvi : no... U dont worry jaan... I will go there for the last time n tell my dad thats is enough...
Viren : then i m coming with you too...
Manvi : u dnt need to... Manvi singhania will handle everything...
Viren : babes... I m coming dats it... Aaj mr. Singhania will get a piece of my mind...
Manvi : whats the bloody use...??? Tell me... Dad will ask u to marry me n i know u wouldnt...
Viren : marriage...?? Now from where does this come from...???
Manvi : my dad is not finding a son-in-law sweetheart... He is looking out for a good business proposal that would help him make more money...
Viren : i can give him that without any marriage thing...
Manvi : yeah u surely can... But in the process of all this, you both shall treat me as a commodity n u know what i would feel as if i am some kind of a s**t...
Viren : how dare u say that...??? How dare u manvi...???
Manvi : because its like this only... We are living in viren... Living in isnt our culture...
Viren : what has gotten into u manvi...??? I told you in the starting itself that I am ready for this marriage thing n will never be because I don't believe in it.
Manvi : I know but I still I am with you in your house... I live with you because I love u n want to be with you... you are the best thing that would ever happen to me... Now do u realize that I wouldn't marry any nutshell out there...
Viren : u do have your own way with me... made me understand everything with lots of efficiency...
Manvi : yes true... I have a way with you... Now lemme go n get ready to face the tornado...
Viren : go... Mr. tornado singhania you will enjoy this... how I wish I could see your face...
Manvi : I can hear you... He is my father...
Viren : yeah yeah... I know...

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so how was it...??? good.. okk... bad... worst.. amazing.. superb... out of the world... me n sanu are waiting for your response... because after the response only, we will start woking on the next chapter...

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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***unres****
finally!!!!! a Manvir ff!!!!! lolzzz nd have to say quite hot!!!!! awww manvi wants a stable relationship bt viren doesnt!!!!!! meko ye story bahut achchi lagi! Manvir k liye main KaVira ko b jhel lungi!!!!!
Edited by abbay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved it
really liked viren nd manvi's jodi
plz plz plz update next prt soon
nd i have a feeling that that guy is virat which came with manvi's dad
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oye hoye its manvi and viren m loving this FF loving this couple my fav 😃but only after virman kya karun loyal virman fan ya 😉
subah subah romance shuru hogaya inka 😳😳 naughty naughty couple haan and they are in live in relationship coz viren doesnt believe in marriage so manvi's dad wants her to get married to someone else for some business deal...feeling bad for manvi she is feeling soo helpless in between the love of her life and her dad even though she shows tht she hates him but she cant afterall he is her dad...
waiting for the next update its gonna be really exciting and the chap of this FF is just awesome nainu and sanu ki jodi kamal 👍🏼👍🏼
next part jaldi update kariyo ok 😊
Edited by kulsum_virman - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay

res

***unres****
finally!!!!! a Manvir ff!!!!! lolzzz nd have to say quite hot!!!!! awww manvi wants a stable relationship bt viren doesnt!!!!!! meko ye story bahut achchi lagi! Manvir k liye main KaVira ko b jhel lungi!!!!!

yes...finally... 😉
meko tera comment bahut chota laging 😛
KaVira sounds kabira... 😆 isnt it...???
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

i loved it
really liked viren nd manvi's jodi
plz plz plz update next prt soon
nd i have a feeling that that guy is virat which came with manvi's dad

glad that u liked it 😊
next part ki bhi shart wohi hai 😉 😛
lets see... stay tuned
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

yes...finally... 😉
meko tera comment bahut chota laging 😛
KaVira sounds kabira... 😆 isnt it...???



I knw !!!isiliye to bnaya jaan bujh k! i hate both!Linfa mein kabira and yahan KaVira
Edited by abbay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay



I knw !!!isiliye to bnaya jaan bujh k! i hate both!Linfa mein kabira and yahan KaVira

ohhh... in gyaan guru avatar again 😉 argghh... never happy... huh...??? 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927

ohhh... in gyaan guru avatar again 😉 argghh... never happy... huh...??? 😳



lolzzz yup!!!! kalka yan yaad h na ****oppa Jeetu ji ishtyle****
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update is dedicated to jalebi *runs off* 🤣

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