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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: renee.bee

Superb update.. bt the dubai trip is over so soon.. This ws so nice arshi getting to spend time with each other without any disturbance.

Khushi seemed to enjoy herself a lot at the water park.

Their dinner at the restaurant n the belly dancer trying to dance near arnav seeking his attention. tho the manager spl greeted them n the dancer performed she ws doing her job of going around spl guests. bt khushi ws totally fuming cudnt see her eyeing her husband. this ws khushi at her craziest.
Luckily arnav reigned her in otherwise there wud be a scene n poor girl wud hve lost her job as well..

Finally when they went on the cruise khushi sd tho she wud like to travel bt she wnts a baby soon. arnav tried to dissuade her frm thinking abt a babay bt went khushi really wnted one he ended up saying he does nt wnt kids nt now or never this is wht she feared the most n tht she dint wnt 2 hear.

Btw please don't end it so soon there's so much more. I hoped arnav n khushi had spend time having more communication with each other spl arnav shud hve spoken to her since so much hs chnged in her life finding her bro n losing her baby.
They needed to have a talk n tht hppn yet on their honeymoon tho i think the last part of the update is headed towards it. arnav needs to assure khushi tht he loves her n make her feel special coz she's misunderstanding tht he does nt like kids while he is just thinking abt her health n he needs to be open with her reg tht.

I dnt knw why bt there's somethng missin bet arshi they seem distant even on the honeymoon tho they had their moments bt it dint bring them closer spl given their surroundings.


Thanks for your comments!! Yes the much awaited talk is coming as well, not exactly sure as far as timeline but maybe between 2-3 chapters. I appreciate your suggestions and feedback and will take into consideration for sure.

Glad you enjoyed the belly dancing 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bkamber

Thanks for the PM.

End of vacation...aww 😔.
Atlantis Dubai...reminded me of my visit to Atlantis Paradise Island Bahamas.
Baby...I do hope there is a Arshi baby in this story. 😊
Have a good day.


I have promised a pregnancy track for sure but it may be shortened as I'm ending the story.. But Arshi baby for sure before it ends..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: avikasharma

wow update! 😊
do you realise how much you make me crave for Dubai??!! nuh uh! you dont!
you describe things so well!

coming back to the story,
khushi doesnt need to feel jealous or angry coz no matter what LG is all hers! it was cute though 😛
and i also want a baby...umm, dont take it literally, i meant arshi's baby! 😆 why does arnav not want one??!! atleast when khushi wants so...that would take story to another level and would be fun reading it, not that it isnt right now.. 😉
atlast they'll return to India..lets see what you have in store for us !
looking forward to next one...
tc.


Thanks for your comments! I do find jealous Khushi quite adorable 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
Just finished reading chap 62 loved it left it as a clif hanger can't wait for the next update :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey girls m back after exm...
all updates were superb...
this honeymoon perfect...
their hot sessions...travelling...sight seeing so lovely...
i loved tht swim scene...😳
arnav fear about babies...
khushi wants baby asap...
arnav refused...
khushi will be hurt..
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishiksg

Arnav's dislike for kids is quite evident.. he didn't even show a bit of remorse when he lost his baby.. :(

here khushi is stuck in a situation where she wants to have a baby and arnav doesn't..
and if arnav continues to be stuck up like this then its better they don't have a kid or even adopt one for that matter.. coz arnav will be indifferent to it & no child deserves that... in reality its not every time that people's opinion and likings change in the matter of kids..
But in such a situation what shall one do..? Will khushi drop the idea of trying for a child or will she do as arnav says.. :/ ?

Mood became a bit off reading the last paragraph.. :(
Waiting for the next update..:) want to know how you proceed with this track..


I appreciate your honest feedback. I am trying to portray the same Arnav that was in the original show (before the Aarav track), who was not fond of babies. It should be an interesting track...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkly


Nice update… wow… it was a beautiful trip. Hmm
it is ending. I am also feeling bad just like Arnav and Khushi…

Good song
selection for the ballet dance. That is a serious argument… Khushi wants to be
a mom soon and Arnav does not want any complications for Khushi…

Will wait
for new twists in the coming chapters… Oh no, you are going to end the story in
10 chapters? I wish you can continue it for a long time :-)… Did I tell you it
is an awesome story? It is.



Thank you :) It may take me 15 parts to actually finish up let's see how it flows. Thank for sticking with the story and I appreciate your mind words. I don't want to drag out the story as I feel people start to lose interest.
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update! I was really looking forward to this conversation.

I'm glad they talked about their feelings without fighting. I can understand Arnav's fears but Khushi is absolutely right as well.

I'm looking forward to seeing how they will work this out, as having children is a very important decision.

At least Arnav is willing to meet with a specialist.

Finally after ages I got the first spot on this story!!! 🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update!!!

Khushi was hurt to that Arnav didn't want to have kids, but after Arnav that he wiling to think about about it after seeing the specialist.. They met a middle ground, but still doesn't like the idea, and he hope that Khushi is willing to wait a few years so they can enjoy their time together.. I think Khushi should wait a while rather pushing this subject and wait till Arnav understand a little better.. Enjoy their time together alone..but Lets see what the specialist say..

Loved each every part of the Dubai trip and the way you wrote it made it more exciting!!!
Anjali and her Pooja ki taal...😆

NK is eager to get married, can't wait for that..

Oh wow what's in the camcorder?? Can't wait to find out.. What new thing are going to be revealed, I hope,nothing bad...

Will be waiting for the next chapter...

I just want to thank you for all the lovely updates you have given us this week, such an outstanding job...👏

Edited by Hawa1997 - 12 years ago

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