The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 46

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Read chapter 24. Shukar hai! 😃

Loved the songs you used in here. Actually, Bheegi Bheegi reminds of GC's performance in JDJ but it suited here too.That was an awesome performance. I did not think of that at all..😕 actually was having a hard time for this song. I tried so many but none was working .. at last this sort of fit...😊

So the weather has started conspiring against Dev and Naintara and testing their restraints too! 😆

The picture that a laughing and smiling Naintara presented as she danced to the rain's tunes made me wonder how old she actually is. Has it been mentioned earlier?They are all within the same age group with Maan Dev elder to them, Adi Pinky one yr younger and one more character 3 yrs younger...while another new character 2 yrs older than them.

So not only the shy and silent Maan but also the flamboyant and lively Dev as well adores kids. I like that! 😃

A little of how these two had come face to face earlier has been revealed but is that all there is to it? I have a few questions regarding them but I won't pester you with them, rather I'll wait for the story to unfold.It is a moment thing when you fall for someone, whether a crush or a love. So that was it. They had not met after that until the elevator.

I like the way these two are getting to discover the real person each of them is under their names. He is seeing the new Naintara who smiles and who laughs while she is seeing a side of his of which she already knows yet she couldn't help but be softened up by that sight. Her thought about the picture perfect family when she saw him at the airport for the first time was something that surprised me a bit. I guess I was putting her on a different plane altogether but she's just a young girl who has dreams and desires for her future. I sincerely hope (and I know!) her dreams and what she saw in that reflected picture becomes her reality.

One question. Dev was going to fly if they had reached Delhi just the way it was planned but he only had one track and one shirt in that bag? Was he just going wherever to touch the ground and come back? 😆 No offence intended of course!None taken. He had to meet a client out of town, so a change of clothes and night clothes is all a businessman needed. Besides he is the talker so he would not even have too many documents either.👏 attention to detail.

I felt sad for Naintara when she whimpered in her sleep. True, we can be the toughest of mankind when we're awake and our thoughts and our bodies are in our control but the real hurt and the real vulnerability that we have in ourselves only comes out when we're asleep... I'm glad that Dev was there to witness this moment but Naintara won't be glad about that. She won't be glad about him seeing her vulnerable or him being there on the same bed as her or about him kissing her like that. He's already got his reward for it. 😆

Now it's going to be AWKWARD between them! 😆Let's see.. The next chapters title is Fallout...😆

And last but not the least, the first song you used became prophetic for Dev. He will never forget this barsaat ki raat when he met an anjaan haseena. 😳

I can't believe you updated twice in just four days! Will get back with my views on the next chapter as soon as I read it. 😊

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

SOL address tho woh bhol gayi hai

Originally posted by: prettyji

omg

Originally posted by: heytal

Congrats for the Silver Jubilee

🥳

Thanks Heytal...I think after the 3rd update I wanted to end it but all of you stuck by me and made me write it..😃

Absolutely dreamy update

😳

Na kaha jaaye aur na saha jaaye

Geet bechaari boori phasi

Geet's self thoughts are always a treat to hear and an additional advantage when Maan overhears her

Dil ki baat direct pohuch jaati hain😉

Now that madam is missing looking in his eyes 😎

poor Maan's eye infection took some other direction but madams wish is his command😳

Madam is realizing how he probably feels when she does the same thing so she will slowly start overcoming her shyness.

Pinky actually confronted Maan😲

Had it been The MSK toh pinky gayi🤢😆

but loved the concern which she has for Geet plus somewhere it did give her a insight to Maan's take on the note issue and Geet😊

Aadi's surprise party and Maaneet unofficial date😳

Loved the chori chori chupke chupke nihaarna

He lost in her beauty and she having a tough time to distract her thoughts😛

Finally Maan's wish to have dinner with Geet and she serving him and they spending quality time together all realized though not the way he wanted but still

These small moments will always be memories to be cherished all your life😳

Maan has become too cheeky keeping safe distance from her still has his way out

Loved the how he deliberately took initiative to make this evening special, having her near him, fulfilling all his small wishes and Geet too was at ease today, she too didn't deny him being around her 😃

A ride back home on a bike☺️

Avi fantastic update yaara

just loved every part of it

It was so naturally weaved nothing seemed out of place

Typical college moments and romance

But now I'm curious about the MU

Abhi time hai to get there

Superb song selection on of my fav songs again😳

I love it too..

I'm sorry but past few days all is going wrong and I comment late

Sowwieee😕

Thanks for the dreamy date

Love u

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Originally posted by: impoojaverma

Pt-24

superb update. Both of them NT n Dev got stuck due to rain n dev who was controlling his emotions from so long for NT got carried away with the flow

Pt-25

maan n geet n their silent talk through their eyes n gestures. Love it

awesome update

Originally posted by: mayyo13

First of all, congratulations on the 25th chapter! Up until this chapter, the story has been such an enjoyable read that I want the number of chapters to go much beyond the double of the mark it has reached. 😳 Na ji! not happening!😃

What a lovely chapter! It had me smiling through and through!

The tiny steps that Geet is taking towards accepting her feelings, the way she has started to consider how she is feeling and why and how Maan must feel when she won't look at him, it feels so natural. It feels real. And the credit for that goes to you, Avi! 👏

Thank you!

Waise how ajeeb she must have felt - embarrassed probably - if she had known that behind those dark glasses, he was observing her sneaking glances at him. 😆

I'm glad that at least Pinky now knows it was Maan who had sent the notes to Geet. Even though I did not like the way she was being all negative while questioning Maan, I do know that it was her sisterly worry for Geet that was speaking. Since she has clarified it from Maan and hopefully satisfied her concerns, she might even be helpful in making Geet befriend Maan. 😳

What really had me loving this Maan even more was his thought of walking with her on her path. He is so selfless, not expecting much from her yet he is ready to give her his all. Love him! ❤️

The song is nice. I've heard it before and I like the emotions it holds...

Finally one of his wishes has come true! But I can bet this is just one of the many that are to follow. 😳Two wishes came true. Having dinner with her and her feeding him...After all Maan hai... whatever he wishes, right?😉

Even when Geet has apparently been ignorant towards him, she has noticed the way he dresses, the way he looks like, the way he behaves and now it has been confirmed that no matter what Maan feels, no matter that he believes he is just another person in the crowd for her, she has accepted to herself that he stands out.

The dinner was a treat, to say the least! Maan thoda toh chaalu ho hi gaya hai, with all that waiting out for her to serve him. And she didn't disappoint him. 😳Chalu techniques hubby se sikhi hai Maan ne. 😆

It is definitely some progress in the one-sided 'hi' bond they share that she didn't protest to him dropping her, rather she sat with him in silent acceptance. Like Maan, I too hope for this time to never end but I'll believe that this day which gave Maan so many memories to cherish, will end to give way to a new day and even more memories to be made.

Loved it Avi! Eagerly waiting for more! 😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

@Crabby Entity:Gitu 🤗Oh my!

What a wonderful treat!

I thought you have left my story...😕

It took me back to the earlier updates reading your comment.

I am so glad you are sticking around...

I missed your comments..

Glad you are enjoying the story...

Thanks so much for making my day...😃