married to u? really so nice -p94pg147

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married to u? really? so nice..

this story starts when jai accuse bani for the money stolen in the office and insults her and bani and rano leaves wm…

2 yrs later

bani was walking in the street wearing pink colour saree in the rain and she was enjoying it and was playing in the rain. suddenly a car come s in front of her and stops.the car door open and some one gets down from the car and comes near bani it is none other than mr.walia .he just lift bani and put her inside the car and he also get inside the car and drives away and we see bani saying no mr.walia don't come near to me… next line she says stop it don't do that to me… as bani saying that suddenly a bell ringsand she gets up from her dreams and think it was only a dream thank god (it was third time she was seeing this dream) she was thinking after 2 yrs also u come in my dream and spoilt it mr.walia.(yes it has been two yrs since she left the house ) (present situation is like rano has left to shimla as she got scholarship for studying pia and puskar have left Mumbai and shifted to delhi and bani was in jaipur doing the job .she was helped by a friend called janvi..) she gets up from the bed and move to take a shower .few mins later she was in the dinning table with her friend janvi eating her breakfast she has shared her most of life experience with janvi so she new about mr.walia .bani was quite on janvi ashking her the matter she replied nothing. onforcing she says about the dream .janvi just laugh saying u left him before 2 yrs and u also send him the divorce paper and got divorced but stil u dream of him that to like a triller movie .she replys very funny. janvi says relax bani and says nothing like that will happen since it was only a dream ,most importantly mr.walia din't even know where she was.. after finishing their breakfast they clean the table.today was 31st december last day of the year and bani and janvi have to attend one of their friend's sister marriage so their new yr will be there…

now a days bani is staying in jaipur due to her work .there they met another friend who's sis marriage their going to attend .it was a grand function .

preview : what is stored for bani in the new year? what will happen in the wedding?

hey thanks for the reply for my previous story preview love sweet .it is in progress so i will write this one this coming more to me than that story so i will continue this. for all the reader pls reply whether story was good or bad or should i continue it..

davia

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kripa0521 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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lovely start, please do continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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do cont soon
it is really gud 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing start 👏 ...really enjoyed it

Cheers! 😳
Radha
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i hope jai and bani meet 😛
do continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for all ur reply .kindly bear with my spelling mistakes .both positive and negative commands are welcomed.new ideas and suggestion are always welcomed.

in hotel xxxxx room no 123 .knock knock come in .. sir ur coffee the waiter place the coffee on the table and moves away someone takes the coffee the mobile rings he pick ups seeing the beautiful lake as a view in front of him from the windows and sipping his coffee thinkng about something and he answers the phone it is non other than mohan kanderwal jai answers the call mohan say jai have u reached jaipur he replied yes . mohan says that he is soo happy that his best friend has come to his wedding(for his fourth wedding) .jai says how can he miss his friend wedding(actually jai was not in the mood to attend but was forced by adi so that he will have change of mind and forget the past..
.he kept the phone after ending the conversation.he slowly turned to the mirror and saw his reflection , he felt how unhappy he was,how lonely he was.(do u all no what happen after bani left wm? Keep guessing that whether jai knew the truth or not?) he then walked to his cubbord and took his dress and layout in the bed and moved to take shower (because he has reached jaipur few minutes before) but suddenly remembered that bani used to keep his clothes ready for him.(does he miss her or not?) so the story further moves for few hours.


in the evening around 5 ,in bani's house ,bani shouted janvi saying she needs help in tieing the knots for the choli .bani comes in wearing a pink salwar kameez saying she can't do any work without her and help her out..
they both leave the house after their last touch up. the wedding place:-
here enter's the great jai walia the press shout and go towards his car and click photos but somehow jai manages to go in.few min later bani and janvi enter (jai is from dulha side and bani is from dulhan side .) the wedding starts still bani and jai din't meet .the wedding get finished after all the rituals are done( mohan is getting married to bani's friend 's sister as he met her and fell in love and thought she was his miss.perfect) all were eating ,bani after finishing having dinner was having ice cream with her friend janvi and chatting was so busy ,(they were standing near a table water table) suddenly janvi started to couch ,immediately bani placed her ic-cup on the table and took some water and start to feed janvi asking whether she was alright? (time was 11;55 means in 5 min new yr will come )jai was just standing back of bani both their backs where facing each other .he had a message received so he also placed his ic-cup on the same table near bani's one after both doing their respective works both took the alternative cups without realizing.(exchanged cups –unknowningly) they also ate it and janvi left for seeing something ,both bani and jai turned together at the same time ,something happen while turning and bani was about to fall jai caught her and bani was holding his shirt tightly.then correctly clock hitted 12:00o clock and straightly to them was the fire work was done in the sky which was wishing them a happry new year( wish u all a very happy new year ) and another one came which was written married with a heart surrounded it(fire works wali). so atlast both met their eyes were looking each other (jai was in the black and dresses neatly no scarfs but a tie and bani was wearing a dark pink salwar kameez with chamki worked not fully, light make-up and simple pink hanging a little hearings and a pink sweet necklace)jai caught bani by her waist she was not only holding his shirt and coat also her arms around his arms holding it tightly.

what u all want to be done ?because i want the readers suggestions also although i have a idea.but yet i want ur feed back.i also want to see how much my idea will work after the readres reply that's why

davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
HayeSiyaapa thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww dat part is soo cuteee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh that was so sweet.. it shows that the new year is going to make j & b come together atleast in ff
who knows what is going to happen in Ks


nirali
Edited by usa30172 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was so sweet and so romantic, just loved it.
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey davia that was good please cont soon cant wait yaar please 👏 👏 👏
Edited by perveen - 18 years ago

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