ArHi OS: To Reach Home

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Chaitalee Ghosalkar

@Eccentrica

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Liked the concept of reaching home and how different it was for both of them.

P.S. this OS completed 700 likes👏

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#242

This was sooo touching... you can really write serious , emotional stuff just as good as you write comedy and fantasy... you are like jack of all trades , master of ALL!

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#243

Emotional , heart touching os

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#244

👏 Beautiful. I loved Khushi and babuji's relationship. It was so strong and the love was so overwhelming. Although I'm sad that babuji died in this OS, your talent with writing emotions is (add synonyms for awesome).

You and your sister are two of my favorite authors on IF. Please grace this forum with more of your stories.

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#245

Wow ! That was...so...emotional and your words brought the scene out so clearly, it made me cry too 👏

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parjay

@parjay

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#246

the pain, the trust, the undying love, the longing...it was a beautiful piece of writting..simple amazing...

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Camlin

@Camlin

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#247

Oh how I wish something like this happened in our show. This piece has the Arshi chemistry and the connection they shared at its fullest and truest.

The whole world conspiring against him to meet her soon, his desperation, his pain for her.

I loved Angali in this one. Have always wished her to be something like this. She had so much potential, then again, their were many things we wanted but never happened.

You have brought this to us so wonderfully and I love it through and through.

'To reach Home' is to reach the other and you have crafted this beautifully. 👏