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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys dis is the first OS im trying...😛
dis is on the current track...and on the ydays party...
no chappals...its the first time i m writing...😆
here it is😳



DON'T LEAVE ME

actually the situation is when taani went off...rey was left astonished...so sharon was trying to leave swayams hand for consoling rey

sharon:swayam i will just come in a minute
swayam:pls sharon pls dont go ...pls dont go...
sharon:but swayam
swayam:pls sharon stay with me...i need u

actually all are going one by one...rey went off from there sharon dint notice dat...simmi is left over

simmi:sharon i am leaving
sharon:no simmi ...i m alone here ...wait i will also come
simmi:sharon just take care of him...dont try to hide ...i can understand bye
sharon:she was feeling shy and ...she was admiring swayam face ...he slept like dat only holding sharons hand tighty
swayam: in sleep ...dont leave me sharon please...dis time i cant bear it...please dont leav me
sharon:hearing swayam saying all those...there wree tears in her eyes...she felt sooo sad for what she did in the past ...she kept her two hands on swayams face...and said
"i m really sorry swayam for the past for what ever had happend...trust me i wont hurt u again...dis is my promis swayam...i will giv all the happiness for u dat u want...u want me to be ur side ...yes i will be on ur side always...i will always be with u forever and ever swayam..."
saying these she kissed on swayam's cheek very sweetlyy
after she kissed swayam smiled...when he was sleeping...thinking it as his dream

sharon made swayam wake up so dat...she can drop swayam at his house...bt swayam was busy in saying pls dont leav me sharon...and he is not leaving her hand
sharon:shouted at her peak...swayam lets go
swayam:noo sharon ...lets be here like dis ...holding eachothers hand...
sharon:please swayam get up
swayam:making a cute puppy face got up...
sharon was holding him and supporting hm by shoulder

swayam:sharon i love u ...i love u sooo much sharon
sharon:i know swayam
she is taking swayam into the car...suddenly swayam stopped and began to say dis

swayam:noo shraon i hav to tell u sooo much...wanna share soo much
"we wre like frnds after we broke up
bt i cant digest dat we both are frnds...behaving like frnds...i m a fool actually i dint notice the changes in u...i was sooo busy with my depression bcoz of my dad dat i dint notice ur change in bhavr...ur caring...u talking againest my dad just for me...u takking care of me at the hospital...how can i forget that incident...i pushed u away at dat time...bt what to do...i dont know i was just keeping my promis...after dat also u gave many indications...bt i m nt able to notice all those until u itself confessed ur love in front of my dad...i pushed u away when u came for me...danced wit me so dat i can be leaving my depression...bt i like a mad pushed u away...i m really sorry for doing dat sharon...i know how much u r hurted...i m sorry sharon ...i m sorry...sorry...sorry...and he hugged sharon tightly...and he was crying and sayin "dont leav me sharon...please dont leav me and i wont show my intensity"

sharon hugged him back...and kissed his forehead rubbed his tears...bt swayam is sayin he is feeling tired ...sooo sharon made him to sit in the car...she was admiring him with tears in her eyes...

sharon thinking
"swayam u wouuldnt hav said all these if u r normal i know...swayam i will make u realise dat dis time i wont leav u at all...and i wil make ur dad realise how much lucky he is to have a son like u
dis is my promis...i will try to make u happy...with all my efforts..."

saying dat she drove off to swayams home...kaka came they both went to swaaym room and made him to sleep on swayams room

when sharon was abt to go...swayam catched her hand and said dont leav me in his sleep...she rubbed his hair lovinngly and kissed him...after sometime she left from there

sharon left from there thinking abt swayma nd smiling
after she went home...she messaged swayam to meet her at abandon corridor in the morning after reharsals

the next day

swayam woke up...and he was shocked to see himself in his home...he was thinking what happnd last nite...how i came here...he called kaka
swayam:kaka what happnd how i m here
kaka:baba sharon brought u here...yday nite...u were nt in a state to come home by urself
swayam:he was shockes and said sharon!!!!!!!!
he immediately took his phone to call her
he read the msg and he is tensed...he was saying to himself
'"omg what happnd last nite...what did i do...i m stupid...wt did i say her...y did she ask to meet me...omg swayam u promised her to be a good boyfrnd ..."

he called her immediately...bt she is cutting the call wantedly...dis made swayam more tensed
he got ready and went to reharsals and found sharon there...she is nt at all looking at him
dis is making sayam more tensed and angry...he just cant control...

swayam:sharon i shud talk to u
sharon:after reharsals
swayam:no now...saying dat he went off from there
sharon:she also went from there
team is shocked by their bhavr...except simmi

in abandoned corridor
swayam was standing...
sharon came swayams back is facing her
without looking at her sensing her dat she came...
swayam:i m really sorry for yesterday...if i did anything stupid...i m really sorry pls dont be angry on me
dis time i jus dont want any misunderstanding between us

when swayam was saying all these...sharon hugged tightly him from the back and said
"i love uuu sooo much swayam...i dont leav uuu...i will be with u forever and ever its my promis"
swayam was shocked
swayam:sharon what happpnd i thot u r angry wit me
sharon:no i m nt and i dis dat wantedly
yaday nite ...i got to know how much hurted stilll u r ...and u still think dat i m feared of ur intensity...u feel dat if u touch me i will shout at u...pls swayam dont think like dat...now i want my intense swayam...i want ur love always i want u to treat me specaial...and make me feel special like bfore...pls dont take adviced to impress me from rey...u need not impress me swayam...i fell for u for ur char...for ur cuteness...and u r a lover boy...u need not take advices from others...pls just be the way u r...love me with the same intensity as before...i want my old swayam...and u are the only person who have right to touch me...dont feel i may be angry for dat...i want my romantic swayam...i just want the way u r swayam ok"

swayam was hearin all these and smiling and was very happy not speaking anything hugged her tightly kissed her on her cheek...

sharon u will get ur old swayam back...he said dat ...sharon felt ver happy...they were like dat for some time...


sooo here it is guys...i know its not good...bt just tried i want the post confession to be like dis...but what we got

thanks for reading guys...if u like please comment and share ur views and sorry for grammatical mistakes...😃






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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
YAYYY FIEST ONE TO READ AND COMMENT
AWESOME OS
LOVED IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited 😊

Chandu 🤗 🤗

Firstly big big big sorry itna late comment karne ke liye.. Kaan pakding mein 😛
Mujhe lag hee raha tha ke mera koi res hai on ur os but kahan hai woh din know..
Finally i found out n have read ur os..

Ur first os n mein itna late ho gayi*slaps myself*
Coming back to d os..
I loved it 😊 it was so beautifully written 👏 👏
D way u penned both swayam.s n sharon.s part Wen dey shared der feelings was beautifully done perfectly written 👏
It was cute swayam in drunk mode was cute 😉 😉
Tera first os n itna beautifully written amazing dear u did a great work 👏 👏 👏
Mujhe bahot aacha laga felt nice reading dis...
U have a long way to go as a writer keep writing more n do pm me ok 😊 😊
Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww...cute OS dear...

loved the way sharon spoke her hidden feelings...n how she took care of him...

keep writing 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
awww it was just extremly adorable.. 😳
the way Swayam said everything and hugged her was simply awesome.. aww I loved it ❤️
plz do write more.. 😃
thank u for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well you write everything which we want to see in the show
Lovely os
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really nyc os
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u sooo much guys...😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Beautiful and cute OS! Love it when SwaRon fans write something wrt the current track! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanha29

Beautiful and cute OS! Love it when SwaRon fans write something wrt the current track! 😳

i hoped something like dis will happen bt😭

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