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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Shabnam94

thanks for adding kapil...but tum to koi kahani khatam nehi karti...pehle gaushi,then khatarnak khel aab this 1

You're right!! I am also thinking the same! Mai kya karu??? Daily mere dimaag mei ek ek naye ideas ate hai... I can't stop myself from thinking new ideas!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Tarza

You're right!! I am also thinking the same! Mai kya karu??? Daily mere dimaag mei ek ek naye ideas ate hai... I can't stop myself from thinking new ideas!

ideas ana gud thing hai..btw tumhe agar itne ideas aate hai ..then stdies meon dhyan kab deti hoo??and tumko toh i think tv ke saab stars ke naam pata hai...kitne serials dekhti hoo tum??

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shabnam94

ideas ana gud thing hai..btw tumhe agar itne ideas aate hai ..then stdies meon dhyan kab deti hoo??and tumko toh i think tv ke saab stars ke naam pata hai...kitne serials dekhti hoo tum??

You knowna...the education system is nowCREATIVE! So I need to be good in Creativity and writing helps me in it. Idon't watch much serials.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

New characters:

Divakar Desai- Father of Mayank. A Businessman. Very close to Mayank.

Sonarika Desai- Mother of Mayank. A housewife.

Manjusha Desai- Paternal aunt of Mayank. Unmarried. Cunning lady, always brainwashes Sonarika's mind.

Next day(14th June,2013)

12:39pm

Roshni's village

Roshni is walking in her village. Suddenly someone comes shouting "Gaon walo yaha par tinlog zakhmi huye hai! Jaldi ao!" Roshni with some villagers runs at the accident spot. They see two women and a man are injured badly are unconscious, in a car.

Roshni: Oh God! Inki halat bohot kharab hai. Chacha inhe aap mere ghar pe leke aiye.

Villagers take them to Roshni's house.

1:48pm

Roshni's house

Roshni is aiding a woman who's injured. Mayank calls her but she isn't able to pick it up.

Roshni: (looking at her ringing cell)Sorry Mayank. Mai iss waqt baat nehi kar sakti. Sorry!

Roshni continues aiding the woman.

On the other side, in Mumbai, Mayank is tensed about why Roshni isn't picking up his calls.

Mayank: Roshni ko kya hogaya? Phone kyun nehi utha rahi hai.

Kavi and Kashish comes to him.

Kashish: Any problem Mayank?

Mayank: Ma'am, Roshni call nehi le rahi hai.

Kavi: Are bhai, itni si baat! Busy hogi!

Mayank: Hmmm... Shayad...

Kavi: Bhai ab chal kaam pe lag nehito ACP sir teri band baja denge.

Kashish: Mayank tumhe patrolling ke liye jana hai. Jaldi jana aur jaldi wapas ana. You know na aaj bohot kaam hai.

Mayank: Yes ma'am!

Mayank leaves. Kashish and Kavi gets back to work.

2:00pm
Roshni's house
Roshni is coming downstairs with her cellphone in her hand.
Roshni: Kabse Mayank ko call kar rahi hu! Mayank utha kyu nehi raha?! Aabha se puchti hu.
Roshni calls Aabha. Aabha doesn't pick the call.
Roshni: Are inn sabko ho kya gaya hai? Koi mera call hi nehi utha raha hai! Bulbul ma'am ko zarur pata hoga.
Roshni calls Bulbul.

Mumbai
ACP Diler's house
Anjali and Bulbul are laughing about something. Bulbul's phone rings.
Bulbul: Roshni. Anjali ma'am Roshni ka call hai.
Anjali: Uthao.
Bulbul picks up the call.
Bulbul: Hi Roshni! Kaisi ho?
Roshni: Mai thik hu. Aap kaisi hai?
Bulbul: Bohot bariya. Anjali ma'am ke saath hu unke ghar mei hu. Batao kaise call kia?
Roshni: Vo...ma'am actually...kya aap ko pata hai ki Mayank, Aabha, Kavi sir aur baki sab ko kya hua hai?
Bulbul: Kya hua hai?
Roshni: Mai Mayank ko call kar rahi thi par vo utha nehi raha ha aur Aabha ne phone katt dia...iss liye...
Bulbul: Achcha? Mujhe kuch nehi pata. Ek minute mai Anjali ma'am se puchti hu.
Bulbul to Anjali: Ma'am kya aapko pata hai ki iss waqt Police Headquarters mei kya chal raha hai? Koi bhi phone nehi utha raha hai.
Anjali: Haan...vo kal Diler bata rahe the ki...aaj vo sab bohot busy honge... Shayad usi wajah se...
Bulbul to Anjali: Oh okay.
Roshni heard what Anjali said.
Roshni: Bulbul ma'am maine sunn lia hai. Thik hai to mai baad mei baat karungi.
Bulbul: Hey Roshni. Aaj mai aur Anjali ma'am dono free hai to hum soch rahe the ki shopping ke liye chale. Akangsha aur Druv(ACP Diler and Anjali's kids) wapas arahe hai to unke kuch kharidna chahti thi ma'am aur mujhe bhi kuch shopping karni thi. Kya tum hume join karogi?
Roshni: No ma'am. I can't vo actually(tells what happened this morning) So i can't come. Aap dono jaiye.
Bulbul: Okay thik hai. Bye.
Roshni: Bye ma'am.
Bulbul hangs up.
Anjali: Kya Roshni arahi hai?
Bulbul: Nehi ma'am aaj vo bohot busy hai.
Anjali: Oh! To chalo shopping ke liye chalte hai.
Bulbul: Chaliye.
Bulbul and Anjali gets up for going to shopping.

Next day(15th June, 2013)

9:30am

Mumbai

Mayank's house

Mayank's room

Mayank is sleeping peacefully on his bed. His sleeps breaks with the ringing of his phone.

Mayank: (waking up and looking at his phone)Uffo!! Iss phone ko bhi abhi bajna tha!

Mayank takes his cell in his hand.

Mayank: (seeing Roshni's name flashing on the mobile screen)Oh Roshni!

He picks up the call.

Mayank: Good morning!

Roshni: Good morning?!! Tum iss waqt "good morning" bol rahe ho?! Inspector sahab aapko ho kya gaya hai? Subha k sare nau baj rahe hai aur aap ab uth rahe ho?

Mayank: Haan. Vo...(rubbing his eyes)actually...kal bohot kaam tha...ghar ate ate tin baj gaye the. To aaj ACP sir ne chutti di hai. Kal tum phone kyun nehi utha rahi thi?

Roshni: Baat aisi haiki...(Roshni tells Mayank the whole story)

Mayank: Do you my need my help?

Roshni: Nope...abhi zarurat nehi hai.

Mayank: Aur bataon...Mumbai kab arahi ho?
Roshni: Mumbai...dekhte hai...(hears one of the injured women's sound)Mayank mai tumse baad mei baat karti hu. Bye.
Mayank: Okay. Bye.
Mayank cuts the call. Mayank keeps his cell on the bed-side-table and goes back to sleep.

Roshni's house
After talking with Mayank, Roshni goes to the room(where the two injured women are). After reaching the room, she sees that one of the women has gaines consciousness. Roshni helps the woman to ait on the bed.
Woman: Mai kaha hu? Ye konsi jagah hai? Kiska ghar hai?
Roshni: Aunty, ye mera ghar hai. Aap Songara gaon mei hai. Actually, aapka accident hogaya tha.
Woman: Accident?
Roshni: Haan. Ab aap kaisa feel kar rahi hai?
Woman: Better feel kar rahi hu. Ao beta, idhar ao. Mere pas batho.
Roshni sits beside the woman.
Woman: Beta, tumhara nam kya hai?
Roshni: Roshni...
Woman: Roshni...wah bohot sundar nam hai. Mera nam Sonarika hai. Aur ye dusri aurat meri nanand hai. Aur woh aadmi mere husband hai, Divakar Desai.
Roshni: Oh. Aap sab kaha k rehne wale hai?
Sonarika: Mere husband Businessman hai. Hum Rajaathan se lout rahe the to tab accident hogaya.
Roshni: Aap thaki hongi. Aap araam kijiye. Mai breakfast ki taiyari karti hu.
Sonarika: Mai tumhari kuch madat karu?
Roshni: Nehi nehi aunty. Mai khud karlungi. Aap araam kijiye.
Sonarika: (cupping Roshni's face)Tum bohot achchi ho. God bless you!
Roshni smiles and leaves the room.

11:30am
Manjusha and Divakar gaines consciousness 1hour back. Now, Roshni is placing food in the dining table. She goes upstairs and calls them for food. Everyone comes down and sits in the table. Roshni serves them food.
Sonarika: Roshni, ao batho humare saath.
Roshni: No aunty. Aaplog khaiye, mai baad mei khaungi.
Divakar: Beta ao. Humare saath khane batho.
Roshni: Aap doni otna keh rahe ho to thik hai.
Roshni joins them. All start eating breakfast.
Sonarika: Beta tum aapne bare mei kuch batao.
Roshni: Aunty, mai kuch din pehle hi aapna college khatam karke yaha wapas ayi hu.
Sonarika: Aur tumhare parivaar wale kaha hai?
Roshni gets sad. She gets up and goes near her family's photo, takes the garland(which fell on the ground, from the floor) and puts it around the photo. Manjusha, Divakar and Sonarika understands what this means.
Sonarika: I am really sorry! Mujhe pata nehi tha ki...
Roshni: Its okay aunty. Shayad yehi mere kismat mei hai.
Divakar: Bhagwan jo bhi karta hai kisi wajah se karta hai. Iss ke piche bhi koi karan hoga.
Roshni: You're right uncle. Ye sab baatein choriye. Ab sab khana khaiye na.
Everyone continues eating breakfast.
Manjusha: (in her mind)Ye gaon ke larkiyan bhi na! Chance chahiye inhe sheher walo ko lott ne ka... Ye larki mujhe thik nehi lag rahi hai. Bhaiya se baat karni paregi.

Hope you all enjoyed it!
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Edited by Tarza - 12 years ago

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Priya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Thank you for the PM.

The update is absolutely thrilling.

Excellent work as always.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: determination

Thank you for the PM.

The update is absolutely thrilling.

Excellent work as always.

Thanks for reading!

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Evil Dramebaaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Lovely update Zari.Can't wait for the next update.

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Udhay only

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Fantastic update 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Next day(16 June, 2013)
8:30am
Roshni's house
Kitchen
Roshni is making breakfast. Her cellphone rings. With right hand she is making breakfast and with left hand she picks up her call.
Roshni: Good morning, inspector sahab!
Mayank: Good morning. Kya kar rahi ho?
Roshni: Breakfast bana rahi hu. Aur tum kya kar rahe ho?
Mayank: Taiyar ho raha hu. Aur...age ka kya socha hai?
Roshni: Age ka? Matlab?
Mayank: Matlab Mumbai kab aogi?
Roshni: Dekhte hai...
Mayank: Tumse milne ka bohot mann kar raha hai. Please ajao na!
Roshni: Mai koshish karungi. Okay?
Mayank: Okay...
Roshni: Ab aap apne kaam pe bhi thora dhyan dijiye aur mujhe bhi kuch karne dijiye. Baad mei baat karenge.
Mayank: Thik hai. Bye.
Roshni: Bye.
Mayank hangs up. Roshni keeps her cellphone back on the kitchen-counter and pours tea into three cups, places the cups in a tray and takes them upstairs for Divakar, Manjusha and Sonarika.

Upstairs
Divakar, Sonarika and Manjusha are sitting together in a room. Roshni comes with a tray.
Roshni: May i come in?
Divakar: Ya sure. Come in.
Roshni enters and keeps the tray in front of them, and serves them.
Roshni: Aaplog chay pijiye, mai nashte ki taiyari karti hu.
Sonarika: Thik hai beta.
Roshni leaves the room. Divakar and Sonarika takes their cups in hands.
Manjusha: Bhaiya, mujhe ye larki kuch thik nehi lag rahi hai.
Divakar: Aisa kyun lagta hai tumhe?
Manjusha: Bhaiya, aap inn gaon ke larkiyon ko jante nehi. Humare jaise sheher walon ko lutt lete hai.
Sonarika: Didi, mujhe nehi lagta Roshni aisi larki hai.
Manjusha: Bhabhi, ye larkiyan na...(stops as Roshni enters)
Roshni: Sorry to interrupt. Nashta lag gaya hai. Aaplog khana khane ajaiye.
Sonarika: Thik hai beta. Hum arahe hai. Tum jao.
Roshni leaves.
Sonarika: Kitni pyaari bachchi hai Roshni. Pata nehi bhagwan ne usske saath hi aisa kyun kia...shayad usske nasib mei koi achcha insaan ana likkha hai. Aur didi, aapki Roshni ke bare mei aoch galat hai. Roshni bohot achchi larki hai. Aapko bhi jald hi mere baat pe yakin ajayega.
Manjusha: Par bhabhi...
Divakar: Manju, mai Sonarika se bilkul sehmat hu. Tumhe jalf hi hum pe yakin ajayega.
Sonarika and Divakar leaves.
Manjusha: Bhaiya to meri baat kabhi nehi sunenge. Mujhe bhabhi ko hi samjhana hoga.
Manjusha also leaves.

1:47pm
Mumbai
Police Headquarters'
Aabha is sitting n her cabin. Anurag brings two cups of coffee. He gives one to Aabha and keeps one for himself. Both drinks coffee and talks about something.
Mayank and Varun are discussing about a murder case with Ranveer and ACP Diler.
Abhigyan is working alone, sitting in his cabin. Kashish is working on some files with Meghna and Aditya.
Kashish: Meghna, Aditya tum doni samajh gaye na kya karna hai?
Meghna: Yes ma'am.
Kashish: Good. (looks at Abhigyan and thinks something)Abhigyan ki problem kya hai...
Aditya: Ma'am kehna kya chahti hai?
Kashish: Matlab ki, Abhigyan bohot chup-chup sa rehta hai, kisi kaam ke ilava aur koi baat nehi karta...aur to aur uss din Mayank ke ghar pe Mayank-Roshni ko dance karta dekh thora emotional hogaya tha. Is there any problem?
Meghna: Ma'am you're right. Maine bhi notice kia hai, Abhigyan sir kisi zyaada baat nehi karte, chup-chup se rehte hai.
Aditya: Ye to hona hi tha. Abhigyan sir ne apne 'khaas dosto' ko jo khoya hai.
Kashish: Khaas dost? Matlab?
Aditya: Ma'am, actually...(before he can say anything Ranveer and Varun joins them)
Ranveer gives Kashish and Aditya their coffee-cups. And Varun gives Meghna her coffee-cup.
Meghna to Varun: Thanks.
Varun: You're welcome.
Meghna and Varun shares an eye-lock. Ranveer, Aditya and Kashish clears their throats to break Varun-Meghna's eye-lock.
Meghna: (blushing and shy)Excuse me.
Meghna leaves. Kashish, Ranveer and Aditya starts teasing Varun.
Kashish: To...Mr. Varun Kashyap kya chal raha hai? Hmmm?
Varun: (shy-smile)Ku...kuch bhi to nehi ma'am.
Ranveer: Achcha bhai, ab tu humse chupayga?!
Varun: Sir kuch hoga to bataunga na...
All laughs.
Mayank is trying to call Divakar but he isn't picking up as he went for lunch leaving his cellphone in the room.
Mayank: Dad phone nehi utha rahe hai?!!
Mayank joins Kashish and others. ACP Diler, Meghna, Anurag and Aabha too joins them.
Aabha: Aaj Kavi sir dikhai nehi de rahe?
ACP Diler: Mai tumlogoko batana bhul gaya, aaj Kavi ne chutti li hai.
Kashish: Haan mujhe pata hai. Bulbul bata rahi thi use shopping karni hai.
Anurag: Kuch din baad unki shaadi hai, to shopping karna to banta hai.
ACP Diler: Waise aaj yaha ke do purane officers wapas ayenge.
Aditya: Purane officers? Kaun sir?
ACP Diler: Wait. Sab pata chal jayega.
ACP Diler calls Abhigyan to join them. He joins them.
Varun: Sir, aur kitni der wait karna parega?
ACP Diler: Thori si...(a voice interrupts)
Voice: Hum agaye sir!
All turns to see. Vikas and Aastha are standing there! Aditya and Mayank are very happy to see their friends back.
Ranveer: Sir kya ye naye officers hai?
ACP Diler: Nehi Ranveer. Actually tumhari galti nehi hai. Tum sab naye hona iss liye tum inhe nehi jante. Ye dono pehle yehi kaam karte the, baad mei inki posting Delhi Crime Branch mei hogaya. Aur ab inki posting wapas yaha hogaya hai. Ye hai Sub-Inspector Vikas aur Sub-Inspector Aastha. Inhe Aditya, Mayank aur Abhigyan bohot achchi tarha se jante hai.
ACP Diler introduces all of them.
Vikas: Abhigyan sir, Gautam sir kaha hai?
Abhigyan turns sad.
Abhigyan: Please excuse me.
Abhigyan leaves.
Aabha: (in her mind)Gautam sir ke bare mei sunte hi Abhigyan sir chale kyun gaye?...Akhir baat kya hai?

11:50pm
Mumbai
Mayank's house
Mayank's room
Mayank comes in his room, lies in the bed, takes his cellphone in hand. He messages Roshni.
Mayank: (message)Soo gayi kya?
On the other hand, Roshni is lying in her bed, trying to sleep. Hearing the sound of her phone, immediately takes the phone in her hand. She replies Mayank.
Roshni: (reply) Nehi. Mera phone kyun nehi uthaya?
Mayank-Roshni's message conversation:-
Mayank: Kyun ki...tumhara message parna bohot achcha lagta hai.
Roshni: Kyun meri awaaz sunna achcha nehi lagta?
Mayank: Kyun ki tumhari awaaz meri dil mei basi hui hai...aaj shabdo ke bhasha mei baat karna achcha lagta hai.

Roshni: Achcha...toh ek kaam karti hu. Mai Mumbai ane ka plan cancel kar deti hu. Okay?

Mayank: Tumse mile bina to mai marr hi jaunga...waise kab arahi ho?

Roshni: Pata nehi... Bohot raat ho chuki hai. Ab tumhe sona chahiye, subha jaldi jo uthoge. Good night!

Mayank: Good night!

Both keeps their phones aside and goes to sleep.

Precap:

After the SmokeMan case...

Edited by Tarza - 12 years ago