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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome part.

Could savour Abhigyan after so many days.

Eagerly waiting for update 4.

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Originally posted by: determination

Awesome part.

Could savour Abhigyan after so many days.

Eagerly waiting for update 4.

Thanks!
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Update 4 coming very soon. But it will be posted by my friend.

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Good going Zari. Can't wait for the next update!

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Next day(17 June, 2013)
12:27pm
Roshni's house
After completing the household chores and teaching students, she is standing near the railings of terrace, looking at the village. She remembers the moments with Mayank in this village- how they met, how Mayank cared for her, how Mayank saved her, how they started liking each-other, with a smile she is remembering all this. Roshni's thinking breaks with the ringtone of her cellphone.
Mayank: Mujhe yaad kar rahi thi na?
Roshni: Tumhe kaise pata chala?
Mayank: Bas pata chal gaya...
Roshni: Tumne mujhe call kaise kia?
Mayank: Kyun? Mai tumhe call nehi kar sakta kya? Ya phir kisi aur ka call anewala tha...
Roshni: Tumne hi to kal kaha tha tumhe shabdo ke bhasha mei baat karna achcha lagta hai.
Mayank: Par iss waqt tumhari awaaz sunne ka mann kia...
Roshni: Tumhare mom-dad agaye?
Mayank: Nehi abhitak nehi. Tumhare guests chalegaye?
Roshni: Nope. Ek-do din mei chale jayenge.
Mayank: Uff! Tumhare guests jaye kyun nehi?! Unke wajah se mai tumse mil nehi pa raha hu. I just hope tumhare guests jaldi apne ghar chale jaye aur tum Mumbai asakho.
Roshni: Don't worry. Mai jald se jald ane ki koshish karungi.
Sonarika comes from behind.
Sonarika: Roshni beta, tum mujhe batao lunch ke liye kya banana hai.
Roshni turns to Sonarika. Sonarika sees Roshni talking with someone over phone.
Sonarika: I'm sorry. Mujhe pata nehi tha tum phone pe baat kar rahi ho. Mai baad mei ati hu.
Roshni to Sonarika: No aunty it's okay. Aur aapko khana banane ki zarurat nehi hai. Mai khud banalungi.
Sonarika: Achcha thik hai tum hi banana. At least, mai tumhari madat to kar sakti hu na?
Roshni: But aunty...
Sonarika: Mai tumhari baat nehi sunungi. Tumne humari itni sevah ki to kya mai tumhari itni si madat nehi kar sakti?
Roshni: Okay aunty.
Sonarika: Good girl. Tum baat khatam karke ao, mai chalti hu.
Roshni: Okay aunty.
Sonarika leaves. Mayank heard Sonarika's voice and gets suspicious.
Mayank: (thinking)Ye to mom ki awaaz lag rahi thi... Iss ka matlab mom-dad-bua Roshni ke ghar pe... Nehi nehi. Aisa kaise ho sakta hai. Mujhe galatfehmi hua hoga.
Roshni to Mayank: Tumne suna na mujhe jana hoga.
Mayank: Ufff... Humesha koi-na-koi bich mei ajata hai. Sab ke sab pyaar ke dushman hai.
Roshni: (laughs)Baad mei baat karenge. Bye.
Mayank: Bye.
Roshni hangs up.

9:00pm
Mumbai
Mayank's house
Today, Mayank has invited Kavi, Bulbul, Kashish, Ranveer, Aditya, Varun, Meghna, Vikas, Aastha, Aabha and Anurag to his home. Abhigyan didn't come. ACP Diler and Anjali couldn't attend as Akangsha and Druv are coming back.
All are enjoying, gossiping.
Bulbul: Kavi, tujhe nehi lagta ab humare shaadi mei aue bhi zyaada mazaa ayega.
Kavi: Aisa kyun? Mereko kuch samajh nehi araha...
Kashish: Bulbul kya kehna chahti hai mai samajh gayi.
Mayank: Kashish ma'am hume bhi to bata dijiye ki Bulbu lka matlab kya hai.
Kashish: Bulbul ka matlab hai ki ab shaadi ke shopping mei aur bhi mazaa ayega. Right Bulbul?
Bulbul: Kashish yaar! Tu to meri harr baat samajh jati hai! Ise kehte hai dosti! Wah!!
Aabha: Shopping mei mazaa ayega??
Kashish: Haan. Because larkiyan pehle se zyaada hai. Pehle sirf Bulbul, mai, Aabha aur Anjali ma'am thi. Par ab Roshni, Akangsha, Meghna aur Aastha bhi hai. More girls means more fun!!
Bulbul: Yaar tune to meri muh ki baat chin li! Ise kehte hai sachcha dost! Love you Kashish yaar!!(in excitement hugs Kashish)
Kashish: (breaking the hug)Are bas bas. Bohot hogaya. Bas bhi kar 'Chulbul Bulbul!
All laughs.
Vikas: Ek minute ek minute. Baki sab to thik hai par ye Roshni kaun hai?
Aastha: Exactly! Ye Roshni hai kaun?
Ranveer: Good question!
Varun: Isska jawaab to Mayank sir se behtaar aur koi de hi nehi sakta. Kyun sir?
Kavi: Mayank, de de jawaab! Akhir Vikas aur Aastha ko bhi pata chale ki tere zindagi mei chal kya raha hai...
This actions of them makes Mayank shy. Vikas and Aastha understood the matter.
Vikas: (teasing Mayank)Samajh gaya. Aastha lagta hai humare absence mei bohot kuch badal gaya hai.
Aastha: Haan Vikas. Lagta hai humne bohot kuch miss kardia.
Meghna: Thora bohot hi miss kia hai. Ab bhi bohot kuch baki hai.
Aditya: Mai to kahunga. Aastha aur Vikas ekdam correct time pe wapas aye hai.
Anurag: Love-story abhi abhi shuru hui hai...puri picture to abhi baki hai!
All laughs again.
Bulbul: Mayank, Roshni Mumbai kab arahi hai? Kuch bataya ussne?
Mayank: Roshni ne kaha hai ek-do din baad vo Mumbai ane ke liye try karegi. Bulbul tumhe kuch kaam tha?
Bulbul: Vo shaadi ke shopping karni thi. Usse kehna jaldi ane ko.
Mayank: Don't worry. I'll inform her.
Aastha: Mayank, tumhe hume bataya nehi tumhare zindagi ka naya chapter kab aut kaise shuru hua. Hmmm?
Mayank: Kahani bohto lambi hai. Dinner karne chalte hai, dinner karte karte batata hu.
Aastha: Okay...
All walks to the dinner table.

Precap:
Begins after the end of Smoke Man case...

Edited by Tarza - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awsome update,cant wait for next update ...

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Awsome update,cant wait for next update

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Evil Dramebaaz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Another lovely update. Do continue soon!

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Below are the videos of the Smoke Man case:

Smoke Man case- Part 1

Smoke Man case- Part 2

Smoke Man case- Part 3

[Begins with the end of Smoke Man case]
Aditya, Ranveer with the help of some constables takes away the box(where Amit, the Smoke Man has been trapped). ACP Diler guides them. Kashish consoles Amit's mother, Shruti. Mayank comes near Roshni.
Mayank: Humari pehli date kharab hogayi. Sorry.
Roshni: Ek date hi to thi, age aur bhi dates pe jayenge. Aur dates pe leke jaoge na?
Mayank: Of course!
Roshni: Aur tum sorry kyun bol rahe ho? Tum jaise cops ki wajah se hi to aise criminals salakho ke piche hai. Thanks Inspector Mayank Desai for saving us from these dangerous criminals.
Kashish comes.
Kashish: Sorry to disturb. But bohot raat ho chuki hai. Roshni hume ghar chalna chahiye.
Mayank: Haan. Aaplog ghar jaiye.
Roshni: Par Mayank tum iss ghar mei kaise rahoge? I mean tumhare ghar ki halat dekho(pointing to Mayank's damaged house)Pura tehes-nehes hogaya hai. How will you stay here?
Ranveer comes.
Ranveer: Roshni tumhe chinta karne ki zarurat nehi hai. Jab tak Mayank ka ghar thik nehi ho jata Mayank mere saath mere ghar pe rahega.
Mayank: But sir...
Ranveer: Mayank don't take this as a suggestion, it's an order! I am your senior and you have to follow my orders!
Mayank: Okay sir...
Kashish: To hum chale?
Ranveer: To Mayank chal chalte hai?
Mayank: Yes sir. (turns to Roshni)Good night.
Roshni: Good night.
Ranveer: (teasing Mayank amd Roshni)Kashish mujhe lagta hai hum kabab mei haddi ban rahe hai. Chalo thora ghum ke ate hai aur inn 'love-birds' ko good night wish karne dete hai.
Mayank: No sir. Isski zarurat nehi hai. Chaliye hum chalte hai.
Ranveer: Thik hai. Bye Kashish. Bye Roshni.
Kashish: Bye.
Mayank: Bye...
Roshni and Mayank smiles looking at each-other. Kashish and Ranveer takes them their homes.

Next day(21 June, 2013)
10:00am
Mumbai
Kashish's house
Kashish and Roshni are drinking coffee, sitting in the dining table.
Kashish: So...Roshni...Mumbai kaisa lag raha hai?
Roshni: Bohot achcha. Maine jaisa socha tha usse bhi achcha.
Door bell rings.
Kashish: Lagta hai Bulbul agayi.
Kashish opens the door. Bulbul is standing.
Bulbul: Areh! Kashish meri jaan!(hugs)Kaisi hai tu?
Kashish: Ab tak to achchi thi. Tu itni 'over-reaction' kyun deti hai?
Bulbul: (entering inside)Mai Bulbul hu! Bulbul! Aur Bulbul sabse alag hai... Mera style hi ekdam hatke hai! Meri baat hi kuch aur hai...
Kashish: (closing the door and coming beside Bulbul)Samajh gayi meri maa!! Bulbul mata ki jai!! Achcha ye baat itni der kaha thi? Itna late kyun kia?
Bulbul: Uss Kavi ke wajah se.
Kashish: Kavi ne kya kia?
Bulbul: Aaj ek ghanta late utha. Iss liye use nashta dete dete late hogayi.
Kashish: Oh. Coffee piyegi?
Bulbul: Agar meri jaanemann banaygi to piungi.
Kashish: Mai abhi bana ke lati hu.
Bulbul: (sees a coffee mug on the table)Ye rahi coffee. Banane ki kya zarurat hai?(drinks coffee from that mug)
Kashish: Are are vo meri coffee hai. Tune meri coffee pili!
Bulbul: Are koi baat nehi. Share karne se pyaar barta hai! Isse hum doni ka pyaar double hojayega.
Kashish: Bulbul sach mei...tu duniya mei ek hi piece hai! Jisska match sirf Kavi ke saath hi ho sakta hai.
Bulbul keeps one hand around Kashish's neck and squeezes Kashish's face with another hand lovingly. Roshni bursts into laughter seeing all this.
Bulbul: Roshni, tu hans kyun rahi hai? Hum kya tujhe joker dikhte hai?!
Roshni: (controlling her laugh)Nehi nehi. Actually, aap dono ki dosti dekh ke meri hansi ruki hi nehi. You both are just awesome!
Bulbul: (removing her hand from Kashish's shoulder)Vo to hona hi hai, because i am Bulbul!
Now all bursts into laughter.
Kashish: (controlling her laugh)Ab chalo bhi, jaldi nikal te hai. Anjali ma'am wait kar rahi hongi.
Roshni: Haan hume chalna chahiye. Hum waise bhi bohot late ho chuke hai.
Bulbul, Roshni and Kashish leaves to go to ACP Diler's house.

11:12am
ACP Diler's house
Akangsha and Anjali are waiting for Bulbul, Kashish and Roshni, sitting in the living area.
Akangsha: Mumma, kab ayenge volog?
Anjali: Abtak to unhe ajana chahiye tha. Pata nehi kaha reh gaye.
Door bell rings.
Anjali: Lagta hai agaye.
Anjali gets up and opens the door. Kashish, Bulbul and Roshni are standing.
Anjali: Kitni der kardi. Kabse wait kar rahe hai.
Kashish: Sorry ma'am.
Anjali: It's okay. Andar ao.
Kashish, Bulbul and Roshni enters.
Anjali: Let me introduce you all to my lovely daughter, Akangsha.
Akangsha: Hi!
Roshni: Hi.
Bulbul: Hello ji.
Kashish: Hi Akangsha.
Anjali: Akangsha ye hai Roshni, Bulbul and Kashish.
Druv comes.
Druv: Maa, mai jaa raha h...(sees Kashish)Kashish!
Kashish turns to Druv. Kashish and Druv are college friends, and had a crush on Kashish.
Kashish: Druv! Hum kitne saalo baad mil rahe hai na...
Druv: Mujhe yakin nehi ho raha! Tum bilkul bhi nehi badli, ab bhi waisi ki waisi hi ho!
Bulbul: Looks like, Kashish aur Druv ek-dusre ko jante hai.
Anjali: Kitne dino baad ye dost ek-dusre se mil rahe hai.
Bulbul: Ma'am, lagta hai humara aajka plan cancel karna parega.
Anjali: Hmmm. Mujhe bhi yehi lagta hai.
Druv: By the way Kashish tum mere ghar mei kaise?
Anjali: Druv beta, Kashish tumhare dad ki junior hai.
Druv: Really?!!
Kashish: Yes! And i'm a senior-inspector.
Druv: Wow! That's great! And i'm COU(Civil Officers' Unit) Chief.
Kashish: Superb!
Druv: Kashish, i have to go. Will catch you later. Bye.
Kashish: Okay bye.
Druv: Bye maa. Bye Akangsha.
Anjali: Bye beta.
Akangsha: Bye bhaiya.
Druv leaves.
Anjali: Aabha, Meghna aur Aastha kaha hai?
Kashish: Ma'am, aaj unn tino ki duty hai. Ao they can't come.
Roshni: So who's the Super Villain today?
Kashish: Archer, who can kill his target from anywhere.
Anjali: Oh. Shall we leave?
Bulbul: Sure!
All leaves.

11:30am
Mumbai
Police Headquarters'
Kavi, Aabha, Anurag, Vikas, Aastha, Aditya, Varun, Meghna and Mayank are busy with the 'Archer' case. All are discussing th case with ACP Diler. ACP Diler informs them about the plan to trap Karan, the super villain archer.
Mayank: Excuse me sir.
ACP Diler: Bolo Mayank.
Mayank: Sir mujhe ek important call karna tha.
ACP Diler: Achcha thik hai jao. Officers get to work!
Everyone together: Yes sir!
Everyone starts working according to the plan. Mayank goes to a corner, takes out his cellphone and dials Divakar's number. Divakar picks up the call.
Divakar: Hi bete. Kaise ho?
Mayank: Dad! Mai kabse pareshaan ho raha tha. Aap phone nehi utha rahe the na mom ka phone lag raha tha. Aaplog kaha ho? Aaplog abtak Mumbai kyun nehi aye? Abtak Rajasthan mei ho kya?
Divakar: Are beta wait wait. Ek saath kitne sawaal puchoge.
Mayank: To aap jawaab kyun nehi dete.
Divakar: De raha hu. Tum mujhse Inspector banke sawaal puchoge to mujhe bhi to criminal banke dhire dhirw jawaab dena parega na.
Mayank: Dad mazaak nehi.
Divakar: Okay okay. Actually humara accident hogaya tha.
Mayank: (worried)Accident? Kaise? Ab aapsab kaise hai?
Divakar: Ab hum thik hai. Aur sorry beta. Hum Mumbai nehi apayenge.
Mayank: Kyun dad?
Divakar: Mujhe urgently Dubai jana par raha hai. So we can't come Mumbai.
Mayank: Dad mai aap sabse kitne dino se nehi mila. This is not fair.
Divakar: Sorry beta. Mai aur Sonarika Dubai ja rahe hai. Hum kuch din baad ayenge par Manjusha arahi hai.
Mayank: Thik hai dad. Aap to mere rokne se rukne nehi wale. Thik hai jaiye.
Divakar: Sorry. Kaam khatam hote hi hum wapas ayenge. Talk to you later. Bye beta.
Mayank: Bye dad.
Mayank hangs up and joins his work.

11:30pm
Mumbai
Kashish's house
Roshni's room
Roshni is talking with Mayank over phone from the past 28minutes.
Roshni: Tumhare mom-dad agaye?
Mayank: Mom-Dad Dubai gaye hai aur kal bua ayegi.
Roshni: Oh! Mayank bohot raat ho chuki hai, tumhe soo jana chahiye. Aur mujhe bhi bohot nind arahi hai.
Mayank: As you say. Aur kal mai tumhe pick karne ajaunga.
Roshni: Okay.
Mayank: Good night.
Roshni: Good night.
Hangs up.

Precap:
Mayank takes Roshni for shopping. Roshni wants to buy something but Mayank disagrees.

Edited by Tarza - 12 years ago