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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Akorshi

hey dear u r back wid new ff...

like the concept...
sorry fr late...
exm was going...
waiting fr part 2...

IPK is back...so am i :)))) dont worry, gud luck for ur exams...soon...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NidhiNev

Manorama Mamiji wants to go to her friends village for a wedding ?

Did she say ' NANDANI ' ??
Lets c Nandani that too in a village ... In Tabu's (khushi) village also there is a lady ' NANDANI ' !
Am i reading too much into this.. Putting 2 n 2 together...!?!?

Lets see what happens !!
Now toh completely waiting for next update !

Sooon plzzz !!!!!!

😊ur not reading too much...u r going where i want u to go...😉 to khushis village-wa...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

FF:IPK:When truth hits them all.Teaser Pt 10 on 78 Teaser Added... enjoy :))

Part 1 85976353


Part 2..

Dai ji had got Tabu enrolled in the school...She didnt want her wondering alone here n there and some more schooling would do her good...Khushi quickly started catching up and was good in Hindi but needed little more help in English language...She was in a different class than her friends...but it was ok...she was with them most of the time...


Tabu might have forgotten everything...but how can she forget at being Khushi...soon the whole school was in love with her...and her antics...she was ready to help everyone... all her teachers were very happy with her...although she was older than other kids...but she soon mingled with them easily... There was only one problem... In her English class she use to use words like WHAT THE N DAMMIT and What Crap...a lot... Once her teacher even said...do you even know what comes after what the???


Tabu had blushed and said no... And she did wonder why she used these two particular words so often...Well...now the teacher was using these words often...lol


Early in the morning she would go to the fields with her friends and then walk to school...this was her daily routine...One day she was walking home from school..along with her friends..thinking... 35 days had passed and yet no sign of her memory returning...and no one had come forward to look for her...what will become of her...she sighed...


She walked on and looked up...The sky was clear and it was sunny...she could hardly keep her eyes open... What is up there that makes me want to look up again and again...It hurts my eyes...


Arvind..looking up said...what are you searching for, in the sky??


Tabu didnt reply...She wanted to ask her friends...share with them...but then they might think she's crazy...so she remain shut...who should I ask all this...all the questions that come in my mind??? Dai ji...she wondered...then..no she will worry and I dont want to worry her...


She passed by Nandani ji's house...her daughter was getting married soon and the house was being decorated...


Nandani ji came out shouting to the decorators and saw Tabu and said...Come in, ur Dai ji is also inside...we are sorting out clothes for Avni...come come...


Tabu hesitated but walked in...somehow she didnt like weddings...and she didnt want to take part in one...she wish she could avoid it all...


Avni and her friends were trying out heavily embroidered dupattas on each other...Tabu looked at them and smiled and went and sat by Dai ji...trying to ignore them... One of Avnis friend pulled Tabu towards them '.she resisted but to no avail...and she put the red colored dupatta on her...and made her face the mirror...


The min Tabu saw herself in red dupatta...she froze... Avni and the girls started praising Tabu...wow..u look so beautiful...im sure you must have been a beautiful bride...


Tabu closed her eyes...she couldnt hear the girls...all she could hear was silence...and a strange feeling...she pulled the scarf off her head and ran to Dai ji and said... IM tired...im going home...and she ran out...


Dai ji hadnt noticed Tabus reaction to it all...She didnt realize that wearing a red scarf and a wedding disturbed Tabu...


Tabu ran home and went in her room and threw herself on the bed and cried her eyes out...she was hurting so much...her head had started throbbing too...but she didnt know why it all was happening to her...she couldnt understand why she was feeling like this...


Raizada House...


Nani ji... Anjali..any news of chotey?? I dont know what to do? How will chotey survive this trauma...


Anjali...Nani ji..plz dont loose hope...we will find khushi ji...and as for chotey, im making sure he eats and takes his medicines on time...I have told him, if you get sick, how will you find Khushi...


Just then shyam walked down and said...I think its useless to look for her any more...


Naniji looked at him angrily and then at Anjali and said...dont repeat this ever in my house... And she walked away...


Shyam smirked and said... Did you hear that Rani Sahiba...Nanaiji said its her house...i have no position in this house...i dont know why im here...if it werent for you...i would have left long time back...


Anjali just stared at him and said nothing... She was also getting tired of Shyam...lately he was throwing lots of his weight around and was trying to act as if he owned the house and was trying to run everyones life...Anjali wasnt happy with this... Arnav was busy so that didnt mean Shyam would act as if he was the master of this house...Chotey...she sighed and went up stairs...praying...I pray you find your khushi soon...


Shyam...Im sure shes dead...and I hope Arnav realizes it soon and starts putting money in his sisters account...why am I being punished for it...huh...



Chotey...Was roaming round the city...aimlessly...going to all her favorite places, trying to look for her...but all in vain...he drove and he drove and came to a stop...


He checked to see where he was...and he realized that he had come by buaji's house...Khushis parents house...he had come there automatically...he was clueless how he had reached here...From a distant he could hear this song...


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZ4tYiiRThQ[/YOUTUBE]

DIRhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pZ4tYiiRThQ



[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cz8PQVSWoxY[/YOUTUBE]

Lyrics, plus Dir...https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cz8PQVSWoxY



The song hitting him hard...Khushis words coming back...PLz Arnav ji, dont let me wait for too long...


Then... His nightmare...the words that woke him from deep sleep...I will slip from ur hands just like the sand slips from the fingers...And you will never be able to find me...


He sat up...Khushiii...dont punish me...plz come back...Beating the steering wheel with his clenched fist...


Happy ji was watching him from a distance and he ran in Gupta's house and informed Buaji...She came out running and saw him sitting in the car banging the steering wheel with his fist again and again... Buaji could feel his pain...she ran forward and knocked on his window and his fist stopped in mid air and he turned to see who had disturbed him...Buaji...


He sucked in air and tried to control his anger and his state and rolled down the window and said...Buaji???


Buaji...Arnav bitwa...plz come inside...


Arnav... No buaji, im fine, I better go...


Buaji knew how he was hurting, they all were suffering. She insisted that he comes in...He hasnt set foot in their house since their haldi rasam...


Arnav hesitated and said...How can you forgive me Buaji? I have hurt all of you...


Buaji...Bitwa, we all know it was NOT your fault, the circumstances were against you...plz come inside, it will give us some strength and hope that our Khushi has come home...plz...


Hearing Buaji say all that He got off the car and went in...Buaji made him sit and called...Garima heat the food and make puris... Arnav bitwa is here...


Arnav...no buaji, im not hungry...


Buaji..eat with us..so we will also have some food...


Arnav realizing that he was not the only one who was suffering...they were also worried about Khushi...


Arnav sat with Buaji, Garima n Babu ji and had some lunch...After lunch...he went to Garima and said... How can you forgive me? I...I...


Garima caught his hand in hers and said...Its not your fault...its just destiny...PLz dont blame yourself...try and forgive yourself and keep on looking for her...But look after yourself too or you will get sick...


Buaji...Bitwa, do come visit us again...


Arnav nodded and took his leave...


Arnav sat in the car and called the detectives...but...no news...it was if she had just disappeared...


RH...

Anjali going towards her room...she was fuming...angry at Shyam ji...hope Arnav never hears it, HE will throw Shyam out of the house... She was passing mamijis room, and she could hear mamijis voice..all excited but also sad... Oh congrats...im so happy for you...whose the boy...what his name??? Oh good... Oh nooo...i cant come... I mean...ill try...wish I could come...Sure ill try... She hung up and Anjali entered...whos getting married mami ji?


Mamiji... woh...My best friend Nandani...the one in my village...her daughter is getting married...and she wants me to go. She knows im rich and so important-wa person, so she wants me there...But, how can I go? If mother in law hears it... and Arnav bitwa??? No no, I cant hurt Arnav bitwa...Just forget about it...


Mamiji looked at Anjali and said...what is troubling you? I said im not going...


Anjali... no mami ji...im not worried about the wedding...Shyam says the most hurtful things sometimes...he has become so insensitive...And she told mamiji what he had said about Khushi...


Mamiji...hmmm... im sorry but your husband is not a trusting person any more, he has lost all respect-wa in this house...And what if?? N she stopped...


Anjali..What mami ji??


Mamiji... you wont like it, but you know im big mouth...but ill still say it... I think Shyam is involved in khushi's disappearance... I know I know...hes your husband...but...remember he might have kidnapped Arnav bitwa too... That case is not yet solved...


Anjali tried to disagree but mamiji was adamant... and continued... Tell me what is Phati sari like? YOU think she would be just sitting somewhere and crying? OH no...she walked out of the wedding hall...but she would have come here early in the morning and blasted Arnav off not for herself, but surly for her mother...she would have fought with Arnav, and would have tried to clear her mother's name, she is not the one to hide away and just disappear or be silent... This is not right-wa...something is very wrong here...dont you see...


Anjali had paled...Was mamiji right...has she been wrong in understanding shyam ji???


Mamiji continued... ya I know, I dont like Phati sari very much, but Arnav bitwa, Akash and you are very important to me...Tears in her eyes...i cant see Arnav bitwa like this...i cant see him suffering like this...I wish I can go and find Khushi...i wish I can do something for him...I know Khushi is a good girl, I know she loves Arnav a lot, I saw that when I saw her suffering when Arnav was kidnapped...i have seen her sufferings...and as she was searching for him, she didnt care if she was in danger or if she would get hurt, all she cared was finding him...alive...and she did...she was the one who brought him home...safe and sound... and what did I do??? Tears flowing...i blamed her...how could I? All cause of Shyam...hes a master con...plz be careful...maybe hes taking revenge... OH God...what will we do???


Anjali heard everything, but didnt react...dazed she walked in her room... Worrying...has my wrong decision hurt my chotey and now Khushi ji ...She was very worried now... Mamijis words echoing in her ears... Shyam is a con... you be careful...


Nani ji came and asked...Did you call Chotey?


Anjali...no, I was talking to Mamiji, she has been invited to a wedding in her village... OH...suddenly realizing she wasnt suppose to tell Naniji this...


Naniji...hmmm so Manoorma wants to go and attend a wedding in her village, while we are suffering here?


Anjali... no Naniji she refused her friend Nandani ji...and said she wont be able to come, I heard it myself...


Naniji...ok good...


Anjali looked at Naniji, n saw how pale she had gone, all worried about Khushi... May be a trip to the village will do them all good...fresh air and calm environment...


She will talk to chotey about it... Maybe she can send Shyam ji too...then she can do some investigations on her own...


She has to take some action...she must search for Khushi ji on her own...and for that she needs Shyam to be out of her way...and some help...

She dialed a number... Hello...yes...this is Anjali Singh Raizada...and I need your help...and i want to meet you immediately...


Part 3 87016067


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Posted: 12 years ago
Excellent update, keep writing, really missed your works!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update
Well written
Especially Mami's part
Loved loved mami today in this
Loved how she warns Anjali to be careful regarding Shyam
At last Anjali using her brains and wants to look for Khushi
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fuzzy dear thanks for the comment...
i will come with long comment afterwards dear...
but liked the update very much...
take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lazy n Angel13... thanks... :))

Divyahet ill be waiting :))) thx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update. thanks for giving it to us on Friday as promised. These days I always worry that writers may suddenly disappear so I feel specially happy when a story is continued.

I am guessing that the village wedding is in the same village as the one Kushi is in and I am hoping Arnav-Kushi meet there. Cant wait for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
haha khushi did used wht the and dammit in the class...😆 haha even the teacher too? wah.. ASR ka jadu hai ji...😳
aww poor khushi.. red color the weddings hurt her..but um glad somwewhr between all these she still looks up for her parents in the sky..
finally the tube light is abt to b lit on top of anji bitwa's headwa..😆 piliz realise the creep is not worth nything hello hi bye bye..
felt really bad for arnav too..😭 Can't see ASR like tht but u r kinda giving us the redemption track. so 🤗
mamiji was just too gud..🤗🤗
now whom did anji called?? Aman? Now tht asr is not in his asrish mood aman must b getting bored na..😉 imagine no one to yell at him..must b new for him..😆
ahan so may b next update the rabba ves r abt to b started.. excited..😃

Edited by simi58 - 12 years ago

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