Rewrite ADHM! - Page 2

Aha ! the party's in full swing ,Yes Jojo I must admit original idea to Gaurav ka hi tha I just elaborated it more 😉 .Eik scene to main discuss ker hi chuki huun ,ab aap log karein. Teena the scene you chose is good we could improve it further especially the dialogues. Let's see what you ppl have in mind. 😊

Originally posted by: superbike

my dear Muneeza, Gul, jojo and Maria
I have one idea. What about the scene when Samamy asks Rusty, " At what point did she fall in love with him", at Taj on their Honeymoon and she explains his qualities as a brother and a son and a human being.
Don't you think we have better ideas to make it more interesting?

..Me think ke in this scene first of all they should have mentioned their first encounter outside gurdwara...how samay felt when he saw her drying her hair?...and why he behaved like shakti kapoor while shaking hands with her that day?...Infact during their entire honeymoon trip they should have mentioned all their previous hostile acts one by one,with flashbacks.Though this would have been termed as dragging...But i think romantic dragging is not dragging at all😳...we all would have loved it😃...

Teena s idea of this Taj Mahal good enough to discuss...
In my opinion in that scene when Samay asks Rusty in exactly in what point... she could have explained it the exact moment, place where she fell in love in a more romantic style but Rusty .... But I am still confused in which scene she really fell for him 😕 ....I know everybody we ll say after he was diagnosed of brain tumor but I strongly think she already felt it for him before his sickness .In a way she did justify herself by saying that she fell for him was because he is a good human being and then spoke about his looks ...if we think properly she always had a bad impression about Samay as bad guy...She never understood him....So she clarified but thoda bahut passion dikha na tha...her face was lacking of passion even that scene at Taj.

Well, jojo and shabnam , your inputs helped me to think little further.

Well at that point, Rusty could have said, that I could see in your eyes, that they love truly , I loved the honesty in your eyes.

She could have said that I was wrong because she thought this marriage was for *** only,and later she realised that he loves her truly and wants and emotional bonding other than anything else.

Aur bhi ideas hain, will write later, give your inputs

Your deep voice which can make every one fall for you, your million dollar cute smile..your eyes which is filled with love for me, your every thing..I love you for your every thing you have and also for what I feel when I am with you.. ❤️ 🤗

ok guys this is my ans hope u like my ans..actually iam not a good writer..is liye zada kuch nahi likha