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Kays94

@Kays94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

omg didn't expect my one of my favoritest person ever to write a story ❤️

sooo excited you're writing and what a beginning 😳

Can't wait to read more from you love!!!!

Continue Soon

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Riddhi

@Riddhi_S

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Kays94
omg didn't expect my one of my favoritest person ever to write a story ❤️
sooo excited you're writing and what a beginning 😳
Can't wait to read more from you love!!!!
Continue Soon

Karina!! 😳 ❤️ Not As Good As You Baby!! 😉 😆

And I'll Be Ending It Up Soon!! 😊 Coz My Brain Just Don't Work At Times!! I Have No Idea How Will I Continue It!! 😆 😭 😭 😭

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Riddhi

@Riddhi_S

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

So Here I Continue With The Next Part!! 😊

Chp : 2

There Was A Awkward Silence...Everything That Could Be Heard Was The Music Played In The Party...In The Minds Of The Two Soul-mates (Virika) Ran Thousands Of Questions They Needed To Ask Each Other...But Jeevika's Questions Were More Impt...He Eyes Were Still Flooding With Tears...She Just So Wanted To Be In His Arms...Par Something Stopped Her...And That Was...The Past..It Was He Who Ignored And Left!! She Wiped Her Tears...While Viren Was Noticing Her And Staring At Her Continuously...His Heart Was Pinching Him..He Didn't Knew The Exact Reason...But He Couldn't See His Life Crying!
Jeevika Was The One To Break The Silence...

J - Manan..Chalo Andar Der Hon Rahi Hain...! (She Said Ignoring To What Just Happened! Or Actually Ignoring HIM!!)

They Went Inside The Hotel For The Party...

Viren Was Now Not In A State To Join The Party So He Thought Going Away From There!! Par Where Would He Go...?!?!? It's Definitely A Special Place...THE BEACH! It Was Their Place Where They Spent Weekend Times Sharing Their Thoughts...Happiness...Sorrows...They Were Not Just Friends...But Something More Than It...!

Viren Parks His Car...And Gets Out Of It...Lost In His Thoughts...Staring At The Waves...It Has Been An Hour Or So..He So Much Needed His Jeevika To Be Near Him...He Missed Her So Much... 😭

Here In The Party...Jeevs Was Not At All Actually In The Party...She Thought Of Leaving...She Said Manan She'll Leave You Enjoy...

The Beach Wasn't Much Far From The Beach So She Thought Of Walking There...

It Was #2AM In The Morning And They Both Were Still On The Beach...Walking Towards Each Other...Not Knowing They Would Confront EachOther Again The Very Same Day...They Both Are Freezed To See Each Other!!

Before Jeevs Could Say Anything...Viren Left The Placing Leaving A Shattered Jeevs Behind...

Silly one!! 🤪 Chappals Are The Most Welcomed Today!! 😳 And Honestly...My Story Seems Some Kind Of Movie That Has No Dialogues In It LOL!! 🤣 #Crazy Me..Insulting My Self!! 🤣

Sorryy If It's Annoying!! 😭

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Charu

@-Charu-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

res

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Superb Update Riddhu 😳

I love it to the core

They both are longing for each other... Awww

Hope you unite them soon or else 😆

Continue soon my love ❤️

Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago

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Charu

@-Charu-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Kays94
omg didn't expect my one of my favoritest person ever to write a story ❤️
sooo excited you're writing and what a beginning 😳
Can't wait to read more from you love!!!!
Continue Soon

You retard 😡

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808226

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

RES!

UNRES!!!!

OMG riddhi...such an emotional story...LOVING it...

the dilemma was so well portrayed..

Simply FAB!

was truly shocking that Viren left the beach...

can't really wait to read more...

UPDATE SOON...

and don't worry if its a story with or without dialogues...its AWESOME !!!

CONTINUE SOON!!!!!

and plsss a long update 😃

Edited by nimiksham - 12 years ago

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Riddhi

@Riddhi_S

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Charucrazy
res

#edited

Superb Update Riddhu 😳
I love it to the core
They both are longing for each other... Awww
Hope you unite them soon or else 😆
Continue soon my love ❤️

Yeah I'll Be Uniting THem Soon And Ending My Not So Good Story SooN!! 😆 😃

LOVE YOU TOO MUMMA!! 😳 ❤️ 🤗 😆 😆

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komalkryan

@komalkryan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Amazing update... <3 it
story becoming more intresting after this part..virika's pain n past...waiting for next part..do continue soon

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kamu_zainaddict

@kamu_zainaddict

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

👏 👏 first of all welcme to IF sweets. Ur 1st attempt, and its mindblowing. 😉 Nothing cud b btter dan dis.

Love d way u hve introduce virika, par shuruwat mein hi, saddy saddy.

Hpe it bcmes happy shappy and romantic aage chal k

Cntinue soon. And do PM me. 😊

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millee18

@millee18

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

hey riddhi...
really a grt update!!!!! 😉
luved how u expressed their feelings... 😛
this is wht u r writing fr the first time...thn i would love to read more stories written by u!!!!❤️
omg...
they confront each other...
me waiting...
cont soon!!!!!

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