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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ohhkkk!! So Hello Guyz!! I'm Just Gonna Write A Story For THe First Time Have No Idea Whether You'll Like It Or No...!! And Sorry As Being In The NewBie Group I Cant Send You Guyzz PMs!! 😭 In Case If You Like My Idiotic Story!! 😆 😊

Here I Start!! 😊

Chp : 1

It Was A Beautiful Ni8...In The Month Of June Here In Mumbai It's Almost Cloudy Here...Par Aaj Mausaam Bada Hi Mastaana Tha...

The Moon Was Something Different Then Ever! Staring At The Moon Through The Car Window...Jeevika Is Lost In Her Own Thoughts...The Reflection Of Moon In Her Eyes Was So Clear...Looking At Her..Any One Would Get Lost In Her Beauty...She Was In India After Almost 3 Years...

As She Was Adoring The Moon...SomeOne Tapped Her Shoulder...The Person Who Was Sitting Next To Her...

Scene Shift To Viren's Entry!!

He Was Driving His Red Audi And Glancing Once In A While At The Moon...He Was Actually Missing Something To His Core...Or SomOne In Particular...He Had Some Tear Drops In His Eyes...Par Then As He Reached The Hotel For His Friends Party...He Parked His Car..Got Out Of It...And Was Walking Adoring The Moon Again...Lost In Thoughts...

Just Than A BANG...The Lady And Viren Fall Down...Viren On Her Top Supporting Her With His One Hand So That She Wont Get Hurt...They Both Get Up Making Up Their Dresses...Viren Was The First To See Lady...

In His Mind 😛

Viren : Ye Toh Bikul Nahi Badli..Abhi Bhi Thik Waisi Hi Hain...Just The Same!! Socha Tha Teen Saal Baad Toh Kuch Badli Hogi Par Nahi...Wahi Khubsurat Aankhein, Ghane Baal...And Before He Thinks Something More..He hears SomeOne Calling The Lady...

Manan : Jeevika...!?!? Tum Thik Toh Hon..? Zyada Lagi Toh Nahi..??

Jeevika : Haa Who Main...She Glances At Viren And Her Eyes Wellup...Tears Roll Down Through Her Beautiful Big Grey Eyes 😭

Viren Is Not Surprised To See Manan With Her...But He's Shattered For Sure As He Thought He's Love Was SomeBody Else's Now...

Lemme Know Should I Continue Or Not!! Suggestions Welcomed...And Even Tomatoes!! 😆

Thank You Charu Di For The Title!! 😃 ❤️


Index!!
Chp 1 : Page 1
Chp 2 : Page 2
Chp 3 : Page 6
A short note : Page 7
Chp 4 : Page 9
Last Chp 5 : Page 11
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
A great beginning...
Welcum to the forum...!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
superbbb bignning... 😊
just love the way you started with night...and viren's entry in red audi
story is intresting...waiting for next part.. please continue it soon buddy
love it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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luved ur update...
a grt begining!!!!
awsome work..
cont soon!!!
wlcm to the forum!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Your di welcomes you to the forum my babyy 🤗

I think you should start calling me Mom instead of di 😆

I wanted to be the first 😭

But its okay! 😊

I told u to post it here so I don't need to read it 😆

Awesum baby, Continue Soon 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice
Loved it
Update soon please
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Fantastic beginning Riddhi...
superb job in your first attempt...Im Impressed 😃
Loved it and the way it proceeded...
Amazing...
Can't wait to read more and unfold the suspense...

Do tag me on FB whn ur done with the next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Charucrazy

Your di welcomes you to the forum my babyy 🤗

I think you should start calling me Mom instead of di 😆

I wanted to be the first 😭

But its okay! 😊

I told u to post it here so I don't need to read it 😆

Awesum baby, Continue Soon 😳


Sure Mummy!! 😆 😳 🤗 LOVE YOU ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please please continue I need to read this and quickly

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing concept Riddhi
Can't wait to read more
Please continue soon

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