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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Kryanian08

After two awesome updates, please don't take too long to update chapter 3!!!!!! Waiting waiting waiting waiting!!!!!!!


Yeah Writing It!! 😆 Will Be Posting It Soon...May Be Today In The Afternoon Itself!!! A Long Update!! 😭 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Helloo Guyzz And Sorryy For The Delay In Updating My Story!!

So Here It Goes Like This! :)

New Characters –

Vanshikha Vadhera - Viren's Mom

Vikram Vadhera – Viren's Dad

Virat Vadhera – Viren's Younger Brother

Anita Chaudhary – Jeevika's Mom

Anil Chaudhary – Jeevika's Dad

Viren And Jeevika's Dad Were Best Friends And Partners In Business! :)


Chp : 3

Viren Drove Back To His Home. Entered The House With A Thud! Mom Wasn't Surprised Seeing Him So As He Would Often Do This When He Missed Jeevika To His Core! Par This Time It Wasn't The Case Of Missing Her But Something Else That Vanshikha Sensed Easily! Virat Was Sitting In The Family Room Too Working On His Files! He Knew This Would Happen!


Viren Entered His Room Banging The Door And Locking It Not Letting Anyone Enter It...


After A While When Vanshika Thought Of Calling Him For Dinner...She Heard Some Noises Before She Could Knock His Door! The Noises Were Of Things Been Crashed On The Ground...It Eventually Stopped And Viren's Sobbing Noise Could Be Heard To The Two Standing Outside His Room! They Gradually Grew Louder And Louder...Vanshikha Started To Panic As She Never Saw Or Heard Him This Bad In Past Three Years...She Was Assured By Virat...And She Went To Her Room Just To Take A Nap As She May Get Sick Thinking And Stressing To Much! Virat Knocks At The Door...But He Gets No Response...He Once Again Does The Same...Finally Viren Unlocks The Door...Let Virat In And He Himself Goes And Sits On The French Window Looking Out The Window With Few Tears Still In His Eyes...


Virat Taps His Shoulder From Behind..And Viren Crashes In His Arms And Starts Crying Even Louder!


Virat Didn't Need Any Explanations To His Cries And His This Weird Behaviour Of putting His Room All In A Mess! His Room Was All Scattered..The Gifts Given To Him By Jeevs Were Lying Here And There Too...They Weren't Broken As He Would Never Want Then To Get Destroyed...


Virat Knew EveryThing What Happened As He Had Just Called Jeevs When He Was On His Way Back Home...


Virat Tried Comforting His Brother..He Was Successful..And Here Viren Spills Out What And How He's Feeling At This Moment!


V – "Tujhe Pata Hain Aaj Main Kiss Se Mila..??


Jeevika Se...Woh Uss Manan Ke Saath Thi...In The Same Party Where I Went!


Woh Bilkul Nahi badly...Abhi Bhi Waisi Hi Hain...(He Said Having A Smile On His Face But Still Crying)


Aur Main Uss Se Ek baar Nahi Do Baar Mila..Ek baar Before Going To The Party..& Doosri baar On The Beach!


Par Phir Iss Se Pehli Ki Who Kuch Bolti..My Anger Took Over On Me Aur Main Wahan Se Nikal Aaya...


Mujhe Uski Koi Baat nahi Sunni Hain...Teen Saal Pehle...Woh Mujhe Chor Ke Chali Gayi US! Aur Ab Jaa Kar Wapas Aayi hain! I'm Not Just Gonna Forgive Her So Easily!!" (He Said Getting Angry Again...)


Before Virat Could Say Anything He Left The Room And Entered The Balcony That Was Attached To His Room...Viren Knew That There Was Some MisUnderstandings Between The Two...Par He Never Gave A Chance To Clear It Out..He Also Knew That His Brother Knew What The Truth Was...But Viren Never Let Virat Speak A Word About It! What Made Him Do So..? He Himself Knew It Or Maybe He Himself Wasn't Knowing It!


It Was Raining OutSide...Jeevika Entered Her House All Wet From Top To Toe...


Her Mom Rushed To Her With A Towel...Wiped Her Hairs First...Making Her Sit On The Couch


Jeevika Is Still Not Speaking A Word Just Listening To Her Mom!


Jeev's Mom – "How Are You All Wet..?? Where is Manan..?? Did You Came Home All Alone..? Where Were You..??"


Jeevs – "Mom...I Don't Feel Like Answering Any Of Your Questions Right Now! I'm Going To Change And Will Doze Off As My Head Is Hurting!"


Jeev's Mom – "What's Wrong With This Girl Today!?!? She Wasn't Like This Three Years Before When She Left For US!" (Her Mom Said Getting A Little Worried..)


Jeev's Dad – "Just Give Her, Her Own Time! She'll be Fine! And Let Her Rest now She's Up Since Today Morning And Then She's Gonna Be Working Here From Tomorrow It Self! Well I Talked To Vikram About Letting Our Children Into Our Business Now!! They'll Be Working Together On Few Projects First! Then We Two Have Decided To Retire Together! And Then Get This Two Love Birds!"


They Were Talking To Each Other While Jeevs Was Hearing All Of It! She Was Happy But Sad At The Same Time! She Was Happy As She Knew They Were Destined To Be Together...But Sad As Viren Was Just Not Letting Her To Clear The Differences Between Them!


Jeevs – "And Now As We Are Gonna Be Working Together MR.VIREN VADHERA!! I'll Get You Back!!" (She Said Tears in Her Eyes But Still Smiling!! Saying So She Retired To Her Bed!)


The Next Day Morning on The Dining Table In The Vadhera House


Viren's Dad – "Viren Beta Aaj Se Tum Aur Jeevika Ek Saath Kaam Kar Rahe Hon! Aur Agle Hafte Tum Dono Ko Chandigarh Bhi Jana Hain For The Project Work!"


Viren Was Left Stunned That EveryOne In The House Knew Jeevika Was Back Here In Mumbai! He Had Mixed Feelings! He Was Angry,Sad,Confused,Shattered!

He Was About To Say Something When His Dad Stopped Him And Said – "That's Final Decision By me And Anil! You Can't Deny It!"


Viren Had To Agree And They both Left For The Office Soon!


Thank You So Much For Handling My Not So Good Story!! And Please Keep Handling It Till I Wrap It Up!! LOL!! 😆 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
RES!

UNRES!
Lemme just do the victory dance..im NO.1
woohooo!!!

To the update...
IT WAS SUPERBBB!!!!
Loveed it...
wish the misunderstandings are cleared out soon..nViren listens to Jeevika...
want to see them together...
and i can't bear them sad 😔
But its great they are gonna be working together...
Can't wait to read more!

UPDATE SOON!!!!
LOVE U RIDDHI ❤️
Edited by nimiksham - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
finally!finally i got time to read this wonder <3
riddhuu <3
ur such a fantastic writer <3 <3
omg!this was just another concept which i loved <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
amazinggg updateee..eagerly waiting to read moreee..hope virika's misunderstandings gets cleared off soon... :D <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
awesomeee
loveddd ittt
cant wait fr the next one
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Aww
awsome...
Update soon..and waiting for some virika sence...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
That was brilliant
Update soon and a long one please
N pm me if possible
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
m sorry dear i couldnt comment on previous parts coz i missed ur story bt finallly got it nd loved it
wow virika r gonna work together...!!!!!
hope their misunderstandings clear soon !!
updt nxt prt soon nd do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
1stly sorry for late...
superbbb upadate...
awww viren..!! 😔
bt yeah virika working together... <3
its awesome...waiting for next part... 😃

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