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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Saru...


un res..wah wah jaan..kya likha tune..loved it.. well done

ur version is far better than the serial one..😳😳🤗

ILU jaan..keep rocking🤗🤗

Thank you so much jaan 🤗

Sorry, was damn busy and tired, couldn't comment on the replies😭

Missed you, love you too🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi4evr16

Reswa!
Yay ! New OS !
Azu di ! 🤗
feeling sry for myself.. internet connection in my mobile is damn slow.. Will unres it asap !
Keep writing !
Love you ! 🤗


Unres:

Di you rock as usual !! 👏
Your's is way better than what they showed !!

I seriously wanted a hug
but you fulfilled my wishes !! 😳
The way you write is so real ! I felt as if I was seeing the hug !

Hats off di ! 🤗
You are amazing !!
Thanks for the PM !
Love you !! 🤗

P.s: sorry for being late !


Thanks a lot Manju 🤗
No worries sweetie, you can always take your time

You have commented, means a lot to me...love you too sweetie🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Res. Will edit once I read!!
See u Zu

Unres!! Well a hug was missing in that farewell !! That was so obvious n I am happy u put that in ur version.
Very nice one Zu!! Really beautiful!!
Keep it up


Thank you so much jaan
your comment does count always...means a lot to me...sorry for the late reply, was so busy
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Posted: 12 years ago

Taste of your love


Kumud dressed herself in the red sari Saras gave her before leaving to Dubai. She felt a bit uncomfortable while getting dressed like a newly wedded bride. She felt her stomach growl due to hunger, but she has to be strong and brave as she was fasting for her would-be-husband's well being and long life. Dugba, being her badima, escorted her to the other ladies waiting outside to do the puja before breaking their fasts. All the ladies gave their blessings to her including her parents as she stood before them. She excused herself as the women headed outside of the house to break their fasts knowing that her partner could not come to her for this ritual.


Kumud took the sieve with a trembling hand as soon as she got the picture of Saras ready with her left hand and looked at the moon through the transparent net. To her surprise before she could look at the picture on her left hand, she caught a very familiar hand on top the picture. She widened her eyes as she saw his face and put the sieve down to look at him straight. Ignoring the shock on her face he offered her the very first sip of water, but she refused to have the first morsel and hence insisted him to have it first.

'I'll have it when you call me by name' Saras reminded her of her promise of calling him by name when she sees him face-to-face.

'Ji...mein'...woh... mein...'' Kumud tried but failed, opened her mouth but like a fish out of water needing air to keep her alive.

'Saras' she whispered, keeping her voice low but he could hear her.

'Yes, Kumud!' his face was only a couple of inches away from hers as he murmured her name.


She opened her mouth to say 'S' but he took her mouth and the word with it eating it up as she told his name in his mouth making it reach deep inside him. He kissed her gently then and there, putting his arms around her and pulling her to him, enveloping her with his arms and almost lifting her off the ground. She responded to his kiss being unable to hold her. The kiss deepened as her hands reached through his hair and she moaned letting him know her pleasure. But he did not want to take this beyond the point of no return and hence he slowly pushed away and released her.


'Now have some food'I brought something for you' he reached his pocket and took a Cad-bury silk chocolate, removed one bar and held it to her lips. She initially hesitated but then parted her lips, wet them and took the silky creamy chocolate in her mouth. She closed her eyes to relish the sweetness and tilted her head to counter the taste, making a small trickle of the melted chocolate escaped from the corner of her lips.


Saras could not stop himself from flicking a finger at the corner of her mouth to take the escaped chocolate and licking his finger while holding her with his free hand. He gave a crooked smile as she opened her eyes, but took his finger into her mouth this time.


Transfixed, Kumud parted her mouth helping Saras to place his finger on her lips. She ran her tongue tentatively on it and then closed her lips to suck the soft pad of the finger into her mouth.He closed his eyes giving into the moment and saw as his eyes opened that she too was experiencing the same as he was; a moment of sheer wantonness.


Just then they heard a crashing sound right behind the wall they were facing. Kumud caught a glimpse of Kumari's dupatta there and they heard Danny saying 'I love you' to Kumari.


'K' Saras covered Kumud's mouth by his hand as she tried to call Kumari. He shook his head and asked her not disturb the newly found lovebirds in the village and pulled her into his arms.

Edited by hunnybunch - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago



I will never eat cadbury's again with an innocent mind...Zu...😉

"Kiss me" "miss me..."...lala laal laaa😆

Ur the one helluva writer...always make me blush and khush 😊

Karwachauth vrath ko nonveg kaake thoda...🤣

Modern vrath hai...did break with a kiss and cadbury's...wow wow...👏

Lekin...I am angry why did saras use his fingers...to clean the chocolate from her lips...***I hate fingers*** 😡

Danny bhi..."gap mey goal" 😲 😆

chalo...let everyone be khush...

loved it Zu...meri chaddi buddy...i am not gonna be happier than this...I know I cant see this ever in my screen...and thanks for this cadbury treat..😊
Edited by lakhy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res
ur os n tat too on monday😲
unres
sorry for being late😳

aah di its sooo chocolaty..i love chocolate specially cabbury fruits n nuts..yummyyy..😳 😳
wish we cud get this type of chocolaty epi too its only possible in our wishful thinking right😉
so here goes a chocolate for u from me..😳



Edited by -bornalee- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

res 😛


☺️ ☺️ ☺️

sorry for being late .. i went to get cadbury ...

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M i the only one who can see the similarity here 🤔

why would she eat him 😕 is that some code zuu ...🤔

u r great writer and awesome OS ...u know that but all i know that cadbury wont be diff for me from today ... i love u sasu ma ...

i m so so so so so so so so jealous of kumud 😭😭😭

Edited by -B.N.K- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee such a "delicious" OS..😉...very romantic..n kya baat hai samud ke saath danny-kumari free?😆...

plz show mein i hv to c all others...bt in one shots lik this i DNT want to c nyone EXCEPT SaMud..😆...

so plz ONLY SAMUDilcious os plz(if u dnt mind)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow amazing...
Hum to blush kr kr k hi mar Gaye... Aapne humey mar dala :p
Aisa karwachaut sab ko miley ;)
Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kumud looking damn hot in red Saree❤️. I really love kumud and saras. I am eagerly waiting for the episode. Danny and kumari's love will be blossom after this. Everything is going good. Let's hope for the best. But be watchful for Guman😡. He may be create some big thing. But at last Sarawatichandra rocks.

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