SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14* - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Shivam 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update:-):-):-)
Shivam is Disgusting:-X:-X Hate him:-X:-X
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Thank god swayam ko sab pata chal gaya:-):-):-)...
loved it<3<3<3
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amazing POst Sisyyy 😆😆loved it ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesomeee👏
dat shivam🤬😡
poor sharon😭
i'll kill this shivam😡😡
swayam worried for sharon😳
waiting for d nxt part😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing FF loved it
please continue soon
read it all in one go..
amazing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing yaar..
Shivam..._____Arggghhh

Sharon...poor she...

Swayam n Khushi bond is awesum...
but HOSPITAL...??????

Reveal it soon
PS- sorry for late comment,.
Sammy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mujhe nahi karna ispe comment.Shivam kitni galiyan du utna kam hai
Last part
Khushi n swayam ka accident ayee to khushi ko kyu maar rahi hai I like her.She can help swaron*sniff* khushi se swayam ko vada karwana ke sharon ke sath rahe..:(
Update next part ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
this one was good.. but it wasnt that impactful maybe because of the filmy sequences *sorry. but i personally dont like it much*

I dont have any hatred kind of feeling for Shivam.. infact you wrote it in such an impactful manner.. that i loved the depiction.. outstanding job..

but I felt bit confused and disconnected.. anyways that might be something because of my lack of interest in reading these days...

next time better make it long update.

PS. sorry for the late comment.. and thanks for the scrap..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..!!🤗
fabulous os sakshi...!!😛
just loved it...!!😆
marvelous concept.😊..
beautiful banner ...😉
splendid writeup...beautifully penned down...!!😳
u just rock ..!!👏
keep writing...!!🤗
and update soon..!!👍🏼
m so excited..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks for the Response...
The next Chapter !!
Sorry for the grammatical mistakes'


Recap- Sharon Shivam'Swayam Khushi in car'Someone in hospital'.



Doctor decided that the 2 persons should get admitted to Nagpur's Hospital so they were taken there and the Nurse also had informed the Family of them'

After some time'
On Reception Counter:
A lady and a man came running there'.and asked the Receptionist'.
Lady- Mam'ye Swayam Shekhawat and Khushi Shekhawat Kaha admitted hai ?
Receptionist- Mam..vo'2nd Floor'ICU'
They both reached where Swayam n Khushi were there'.
They viewd inside'by the glass but could see only Swayam's head bandaged..
In the next one..where Khushi was there they could see 2 Doctors and nurses still operating her'.

After hours'
Doctor- Mr. Shekhawat ?
Rajeev- Doctor, how are they ? (in a shaking voice)
Nandini was in a devasted state'
Doctor- See..Swayam Shekhawat is now out of danger'no need to worry..

Nandini n Rajeev let a sigh'but the very next moment'
Nandini- And Khushi ? Doctor..hows she , is there any danger ?
Doctor- She is little weak'and the injuries are very major'we are still operating her'

Saying this he went'.
Rajeev and Nandini were hell tensed'they asked the Nurse if they can meet Swayam'

Nandini(caressing his hairs)- Swayam..tu..tum thik to ho na..? Ye sab kaise hua'? aurr..
(Tears flowed )
Swayam- Ma..maa' I am..fiine'aap yee baat-ao'ki Khh..Khushi kaise hai..auur..vo'
Nandini looked at Rajeev'
Rajeev- Beta..uski haalat abhi bhi thik nahi hai'still Doctors are treating her'
Swayam looked tensed'.He tried getting up'
Nandini- Swayam'kya kar rahe ho'tum utho mat , kyaaa..hua ?
Swayam- Mujhe Khushi ko dekhna hai Maa..vo.. aah !! (cried in pain)
Nandini- Swyam abhi nahi..please'
Swayam- Par Maa'
He unfortunately had to obey her mother'
Nandini gave a peck on his Forehead'

They talked for a while and then came outside'
Swayam- Khushi'vo..thik to hogi na'mujhe usse milna hai..par'
Then his eyes made a way outside through the glass'.n saw that the Doctors were talking to his Parents'
He could see that they were moving to Khushi's Room where she was treated'

Nandini- Khushi'
Khushi placed a light smile'
Nandini- Ye..sab'
(teras made her way through her eyes)
Khushi- Pl..eaase.. don't c-r-y'
Rajeev- Yeh sab tumhare saath hi kyon..
He was cursing himself for this as he only had made them go..
Khushi- Papa..jo ho gaya use'to h-u-m na..nahi taal sak..te na'aur..Sw..ayam..kai-sa , kahaan hai..?
She looked here and there'
Nandini- Beta vo dusre room mein hai'
Swayam (from back)- Mein yahaa..hoon'
NAndini Rajeev turned around'n Khushi also looked him coming with the help of a Nurse'.
Nandini stood and made up him sit!
Nandini- Tum yahan Kyon..aur'?
Swayam- Nurse..kke sath aaya na'it..its ok..

Nandini n Rajeev felt that Swayam n Khushi should be given some time to talk alone..so they left'

Swayam- Sab..m-eri..galti hai'
Khushi- D..don't blaa..mee'your-se-lf'. (don't blame urself)
Swayam- Par'
He made a guilty face'
Khushi- Mujhe..tu-mse kuch..za-ru-ri baat kar..karni hai'
Swayam- Haan bolo'

She tried getting up'and Nurse made her..get up'she was in pain'
Swayam- Tum..utho mat..
(Imagine Swayam n Khushi's voice sometimes cracking..n trembeling..)
Khushi- Swayam'I know ki meri yeh injuries will lead to nothing good'
Swayam- Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho'?
Khushi- I'll tell you everything but please pehle meri baat suno'
Swayam nodded'
Khushi- Swayam..please..save..her'
Swayam- Khushi..kis ki baat kar rahi ho'?
Khushi- Sharon !
Swayam- What ? Yeh kya keh rahi ho ?
Khushi- Tumhe bhi pata hai Shivam ki story and I feel ki Shivam is torturing her to the most'and will..continue..
Swayam- Tum..abhi Sharon ki chinta kar rahi ho'tu..
Khushi- Vo..
(She was leacking breaths'but still she spoke)
Swayam got tensed and was getting up..when'
Khushi(held his hands)- Stop..! Mein thik hun'please..
Swayam- Nahi..Khushi..
Khushi- Mere..liye..!
Swayam sat..
Khushi- Tumhe'Sharon ki care karni padegi..
Swayam- Kh'
Khushi- Tumhe mujhe ek Promise karna hoga'
Swayam- Kaisa.?
Khushi asked him to placed his hand on her as sign of Promise'
Khushi- Tum..use us Shivam se bachaoge'Sharon k liye'nahi to hamari friendship ke liye'
Swayam- Par..kaise'
Khushi- Yeh tumpe hai..but u'u have to.karoge na ?
He placed his hand on her'
Khushi- Thank..you'
Khushi smiled'
Tears were out to come from both of their eyes'and then Swayam found her hand shivering'and her breaths raising'

Next moment the Doctor was here'
Doctor- Aap bahaar jaiye'
Sayam was not to left his hand but he had to'.
Swayam- Maa'Khushi'!
Nandini- Kuch nahi hoga use'sambhalo'

Doctor came and informed them that Khushi 's health is stable but she has only few days left'ONLY FEW DAYS.!
Doctor- She is very brave'and knows that she may'.
Swayam- Nothing will happen to her..I know..!

[Guys..note for Present n Future- ..I am not showing the Role of Khushi's family and Swayam/Sharon's Family will also be shown less'only at important places..]
Doctor patted his shoulder and left'
Day or two after Khushi n Swayam were back Home..!
***


Sharon was in a worst state.. all dull , all pale'.
She opened her eyes'
She saw Shivam standing near her..She shifted a little back..
He came close to her'.
Shivam- Hey hey'daro mat mujhse'kuch nahi karunga mein'.bas ek kaam kar do mera'
Saying this he came more close to her'She was trembeling'

Sharon- K..kyaa..?
Shivam- Mujhe'.breakfast de do'Office jaana hai'.

And he headed back..and laughed'
Shivam- Kitna darr gayi meri Jaan'aww..
Sharon- Vo..
Shivam- koi bahana nahi'jaldi karo..

And left from there'.
Sharon tried walking but her legs were trembeling'
She even fell on the ground once..
But after having a shower she composed herself and wore her Saree and came out'Her Saree was little different'it was not at all netted'the blouse..full sleeves..no nearings nothing.! Even Mangalsutra was not there..! She was looking simple..yet her injury on head was paining ! She was not able to digest that Shivam'used her'like that'

She entered the Kitchen'.and found all Kitchen in a mess'
She cleaned it'with heavy pain'
She made breakfast'but Shivam was only to torture her..
When she gave him the Tiffin'
He showed that he had bought sandwiches from shop before only'
Shivam- Par Sharon..mere paas tiffin hai'.Ab na tum hi ise kha lo'
and Khana taiyaar rakhna'aur ab College jaana to chahogi nahi na tum'so padi raho aisehi ghar me'

He headed towards the door'but turned to her'
Shivam- Aur haan..tum aise achhi nahi lagti'naye dress pehno..Rich hone ka kuch to fayda uthao'

He came to her'and was to touch her shoulder'
Shivam- Ye..yahan nahi'w..
Beforehe could complete she went a little back'
Shivam- Ohho'tumhe kuch nahi karunga'chill jaan'mazaa to baad mein ayega !
He winked and left'!

She dropped the tiffin and ran to her room'and locked it
She sat on the floor all collapsed'.she cried her heart out'.

***

Swayam Khushi were in room'.
Khushi- Swayam'.mujhe please ek glass paani de doge'?
Swayam- Haan haan sure..wait'.
He gave a glass of water to her'..and sat beside her..
Khushi- Swayam'aage ka kya socha hai ?
Swayam knew what she was talking'.
Swayam- Hmm'see abhi mein Simmi ki help lene walaa hoon..abhi hum usse Vedio Chat karte hai'

He opened the laptop'but didn't found Simmi available'..
Swayam- She is not there..to acha..Mein use call karke pouchta hoon'
Then he called her'Fortunately she picked up phone'.

Simmi- Haan Swayam'.
Swayam- Can you please come to Vedio chat , please..
Simmi- You seem serious..okay I am'

At Vedio Chat:
Simmi- Say !
Swayam- Umm'I need your help Simmi'
Simmi- Tell na kya hua ?
Swayam- Tumhe India aana padega !
Simmi- What ! Aisa kya ho gaya ?
Swayam- Abhi tum kuch bhi mat pucho.its a bit serious..
Simmi- But aise kaise..means kab ?
Swayam- Within 2 days !
Simmi- Swayam..! Itna important hai ?
Swayam- Sharon!
Simmi- Sharon..?!!? Use kya hua , vo thik hai , please..tell'.
Swayam- Umm..haan vo thik hai..but kuch serious matter hai..please'I need ur help !
Simmi- Ohkay fine..mujhe jaise hi koi Flight available milti hai.I'll be there.!
Swayam- Thank you.!
Simmi- Hey hey ! wait'
Swayam- Yeah ?
Simmi- Yeh tumhare forehead pe ?
Swayam- I and Khushi had accident'
Simmi- What ! KAise..? And Khushi kaisi hai ?
Swayam- Mein thik hoon'aur Khushi'.
Simmi- Khushi ? Swayam'vo thik hai na ?
Swayam just nodded in disagreement'
Simmi was about to speak when she saw Khushi..resting..eyes closed'.
(Khushi is resting and Swayam is sitting ahead of her)
Swayam- Vo..abhi stable hai'but'
Simmi- But what ? Tell me yaar'I could see the injuries and all..
Swayam- Doctor..said ki'she has few days left only'.!
Simmi(eyes widened)- What !! And..she'..
Swayam- She only told me about Sharon.and all'and ye baat use pata hai..
please..come India as soon as possible'
Simmi had tears in her eyes..she just nodded'and said take care to them'
He shut off his Laptop'!

In was Night time'after Dinner'both Swayam and Khushi slept'

***

Here Shivam did not do anything to Sharon'he just came back had Dinner and slept'.
Sharon had sleepless Night'

***
Morinng:

Swayam received a call..
Swayam- Ohkay ya'good..

Swayam was happy ki Simi will be coming today itself..but he was internally sad that Khushi's health was not taking her side..Her injury let her suffer in pain'
Still Khushi was enjoying her last few moments'of Life'

Sayam had called Doctor as she was inimmense pain'and was not able to talk'
Doctor checked her'he gave her injection'.

Outside:
Doctor- Swayam'uski health aur bigad rahi hai..use please Hospital me admit karwa do'
Swayam- Doctor..meine bohot samjhaya use but vo ghar par hi rehna chahti hai..Family ke saath'
Doctor- But..
Swayam- I know , I am also helpless'.
Doctor- What I can say..Okay Take care of her and you also'
Swayam nodded..!

***

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Love,
Sakshi..

Edited by sakshibshah - 10 years ago

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