SwaRon FF- KiSmAt CoNnEcTiOn NOTE (Pg145) CH-43 Pg 143 *Aug11, 14*

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Sakshi Shah

@sakshibshah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

res fr Charger :)
unres

Awesome update!!😃

😲Kya twist laayi yaar tu!!😲

Swayam n khushi ka accident..!!

Poor khushi!!😭

But luvd her yaar..!! Aisi condition me bhi she is so much concerned about sharon!

I hope jaldi se swayam does something n that chee-vam disappears!😡

Now that he has also called simi for help then i hope they succeed fast!!😳

simi is an amzaing friend i must say!!😳

goshh!!dis shivam is so so so cheap!!

poor sharon...kitna darr rhi thi!!😭😭

i hate the shivam more wid every update!!😡😡

bichari sharon kitna ro rhi h!!😭😭

pls jaldi kuch kar!!

hata iss chee-vam ko idd FF se!!

n jaldi se swayam ko saath me laa!!😳😳😳

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jasleen

@jas_ArSha_MaNan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

yipeee me second👏
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yipee wase toh main ssecond honi chahiye thi but kyunki reserve aagaye so
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cuming to the update
kya mindblowing updaye likha di
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truly amzing
just luvd it u describd it really very well
gr8 work di
kudos to u for it
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sachi di baht amzing tha
just fanyabulous
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keep up the gud work di
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next part bhi jaldi se upadte kardena

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veronica

@SwaRon_rocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Heya..pehle toh a big sry for not commenting regularly..hpe maine koi res nhi rakha ho..:(

Comments for chapter 7 and 8-

LOved the way u have twisted the story..shivam ka truth sharon suffering khushi's accident:( nicely penned

still m curious to read about what swayam will do..waiting to read further

PS- i knw most of my comments r lame and small and frm nw on i myself m not sure about being able to come online..sry di..pls understand m a bit busy..but remember ki m waiting to read ur updates. n will surely try to cmment or like:(

-veronica