Arhi FF (Collab):Dire Consequences Thread 2 Pg 141 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting story.
Curious to see where you take this concept.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
Loved how Khushi's one move has made Arnav all the more determined to not let anything come in between his relationship and how he shooed Sheetal away at breakfast and also before work without making it obvious at all
and how he pulled Khushi down and served them both
awww Aarav you cutie..now Khushi has some good information..investigation by Detective Phatti Saree😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ayshaomar

<font color="#ff0000">Awesome</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Loved how Khushi's one move has made Arnav all the more determined to not let anything come in between his relationship and how he shooed Sheetal away at breakfast and also before work without making it obvious at all</font>
<font color="#ff0000">and how he pulled Khushi down and served them both</font>
<font color="#ff0000">awww Aarav you cutie..now Khushi has some good information..investigation by Detective Phatti Saree😉</font>



Thanks ! Lets see what is Arnav and Khushi's next move :)

-DC Team
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Abyan

<font size="2">Another wonderful update... loved the longing arnav who got useto his wife'sgently woke him up with sweet murmurings as she stroked his hair...</font>
<font size="2">So good to see him in ASR mode and he is unleashing that anger on Sheetal..loved the way he has decided to keep his khushi close to him and shows sheetal where she stands...awesome...</font><font size="2">he will surely give sheetal a hard time coz now because of her entry in his life his and khushi's relation is at stake with their new found truth...and hedoesn't like it...once again loved how khushi didn't leave him instead she assure him that she will always be with him but she hurts inside as she has right to back away a little as it must be so hard for her to digest that her husband has a son and not with her...</font>
<font size="2">wonder what would arnav do with all this mess...and how he plans to settle all this... Cant wait to read more...</font>
<font size="2">it was awesome update ... and well written...loved it</font>





Thank you for your detailed thoughts..

-DC Team
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel2001

This is an awesome FF guys!!
I always wanted to see ASR showing that sheetal's rightful place, which Anjani wrote. Well done all of you! :)

I'm excited to read more



Thanks so much!! We are all excited about providing a different view ..

-DC Team
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: renee.bee

Nice update.. i actually thought khushi left him n then realized tht she dint wake him coz she's a little wthdrawn obviously. bt then khushi cnt stop worrying abt him either. i m glad khushi did tht coz Arnav needed a wake up call coz his constant attention to shitall was hurting khushi n he needed to knw he wud lose khushi if sheetal gets any more encouragement.


I think Arnav has to tell sheetal to find her own place to stay even Aarav is their son she hs no right to Arnav or stay in his house. Secondly before she came here she ws managing as a single mother so she cn do so staying in her own place besides its nt like she's struggling with finances to look after Aarav she herself is well maintained.

All of this of course if Aarav is Arnav's son bt if he is nt tht as much as Aarav is cute boy he is nt Arnav okhushi's responsibility as Arnav had said on IPK when khushi asked him to go for aarav school as his dad.

Finally sheetal's behavior towards aarav showed she is nt d mother or even if she is he's jus a pawn in her game to get Arnav n his money. So khushi keep faith in Arnav n be with him thts wht will provoke sheetal into doing a mistake.

I really hope ur ff does nt get Arshi tied to Aarav let them hve happy married life with their own kids.



Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. We really appreciate detailed feedback.

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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nidhi you did total justice to this chapter! I loved her emotions and really connected with her pain that you portrayed.

My heart bled for Arnav as well , and his attempt to get her to go out to dinner with him. He so desperately wants her to open up to him. I loved how he respects her wishes and gives her space, a reminder that he is Arnav for her and not ASR.

I hope I can do justice to next chapter ..
Edited by ssyahoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated!

Sorry for the very very late response...completely forgot I never updated my res!

I love the way you portrayed Khushi's emotions. It's not a small issue she's facing, it's a big deal...and she does need time to process it and figure out how she feels about it.

I like that you have Arnav trying to make her feel better by coming home early, wanting to take her out to dinner...but unfortunately, she's hurt and needs space. I'm glad that he's willing to give it to her instead of erupting in anger.

Loved the chapter...knew you would do an amazing job😊
Edited by A_BA - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I could feel their sense of pain and suffering ...both feeling as much anguish and hurt...Arnav s fears of her leaving him and their relationship breaking down compounded by her indifference.
And Khushi trying to come to terms with another woman in his life...even if if before she knows him...another woman having shared with the intimacy with him that she feels were just her rights as a wife...and not so much that as just that she feels that the bond both emotional and physical that they share could once have been shared by another woman and she the mother of his first child, that too her is the most painful truth to have to bear...but she has given him her word, she values him and their relationship but she needs time to heal...from within ...and needs to find inner peace with this situation...

I loved how she say asks him that he cannot tolerate her indifference ? It sort of explained exactly what she felt...her sense of disbelief that after all what has happened...he cannot tolerate it...?
I loved that line...it summed up the entire update!

I loved that she being who she is...will never let her feelings come in the way of her behaviour with Arav.

I loved how he gives her the space...and also hope they communicate soon...before it takes a toll on their relationships...

I loved it Nidhi...


Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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