Arhi FF (Collab):Dire Consequences Thread 2 Pg 141

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#851

thx for the note - will wait for the next chapter

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#852

awesome part...

its good khushi took nani's advise seriously...

ArShi mu n distance pulled off...

sheetals all plan back fired...

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#853

Link to thread 2!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3723357/completed-arhi-collab-dire-consequences-epilogue-pg76-5-12

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Akhila

@slowsun93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#854

Awesome story.

Love the way you are depicting emotions

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#855

Hello you talented writers, I finished thread 1 and have to say what a great story this is. Like many I hate sheetal in our beloved series, and likewise I hate her here.
I love the way Khushi is handling this, and that no matter what thay are in this together and that it is bringing them closer still.

Loved the way he held Khushi in his arms when sheetal appeared, and how he had called her name and sensing that our superwomen appears in time to get rid of sheetal and tell her where she stands. This is the clincher- both telling sheetal that they are one. LOVELY 👏

Great wruting all of you, this FF has brought tears to my eyes, especially how Khushi fealt about not being able to give Arnav his first child, then Arnavs dream where she had left him - only good writing can evoke such feelings in the reader. WELL DONE. Onto thread2 x 👏