Zara...I finally read it...๐
Sorry for being really late in unreservng๐
n now wen I've read it, I feel like u hav ended it too quick...it cud hav been so much more...I wanted to read more about how he ignores her for her own gud n how she gets more n more attracted towards him!! ๐
But i knw 2 stories wud've been too much for u at same time๐
I loved it...Especially Abhay's parts...how he follows her everywhere n still manages to hide his emotions n talks to him so casually n even gets jealous wen he sees her wid sum1 else๐
I loved how Pya accepted him the way he is n even initiated the kiss๐ณ
n the DESIRES n KISSโบ๏ธ
there were so many hawwwt kisses in this part...too hot to handleโบ๏ธ๐
I loved Abhay's dialogues n u knw wat, I cud actually visualize ur VD๐
Aweeesommee Writing yet again n I absolutely loved itโค๏ธ๐ค
Edited by nupsie - 10 years ago
comment:
p_commentcount