MG SS ~DILRUBA~ {BY:NELU} COMPLETED

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: spvd
part 8
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u add the update number and page number and date in the title?

dear maine page 1 main tittle ke sath link nd page number add kar diya hain...
AS i'm newbie link direct nahi open hoge so page num bhi add ker diya hain...😊😊

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

thnkss guys for all ur support...😊

but like aur comment bohot kam hote jaa rahe hai... kya main itn bura likhti hu???😭 IF U ALL WANT,, I CAN STOP MY WRITING...???
BUT THEN i thought aap main se jitne log parte ho main unke liye yeh SS jarur complete karunge...😊

SO HERE IS PART 9:

mg ss ~DILRUBA~
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~~~~~~part 9~~~~
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In morning MAAN was in great mood as all night he was dreaming about his Dream girl...
he was waiting for geet thinking...

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maan {thought} : 2 din main to designs complete ho jayenge to phir main geet se kese milunga??? uss pyari aawaj kese sununga??? agar 2/3 din main geet ko realise nahi hu ke woh mujhe pyar karte hain to main kya karunga???.
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idea main he usse propose kar dunga!!! right woh nahi bolte to kya hua? main hoo na!!
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.but agar usne naa bol diya toh main kya karunga??? par woh naa kyun bole ge?? par dad se puche bina haa kese bol dege??? woh toh mere bare main kuch jante bhi nahi hain na??? main kya karu???
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.ek kaam karta hu... direct geet se puch lunga!!! baas woh aa jaye...

MAAN WAS GETTING ANGRY AS GEET WAS GETTING LATE
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.AFTER SOMETIME GEET CAME...
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MAAN: itne der kaha laga di tumne??? kab se tumhara wait kar raha hu... tumhe toh mere koi fikar hi nahi hain... assa bhi koi karta hain?? ek phone to kar sakte thi

geet: sir main sirf half hour late hu... aur mere pass apka number thore hain ke main apko phn karu??
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.maan: toh num le nahi sakte thi... Yehlo mera mobile aur apna num save karo!!
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geet take mobile & save her num & give a miss call in her mobile... { so that she can also get his number😳😳}
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geet: yeh lijiye kar diya!!! itna chilla ne ki koi jarurat nahi thi... half hour koi dharti ulte nahi ho jate...
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maan: half hour!! meri office main koi half second bhi late hota hain toh uske job chali jate hain... samjhe??
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geet: toh mujhe kyun nahi nikal rahe aap??
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maan: CUZ I NEED YOU.
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{ MAHII MAAHII EYELOCK}
I mean 2 say mujhe designs ke liye tumhare halp chahiye...
aab jaldi se kaam shuru karo...

geet: {dust danav😉}
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MAAN: dad ke reports???
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geet give him reports..: yeh lijiye...

maan: main room main jaa raha hu mail karke tumhare designs dekunga...

geet: ok!!!
GEET was doing her work...

after sometime...

MAAN COME!!!!
MAAN: GEET chalo!!!

geet: par kaha sir??
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maan: hospital jana hain!!

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geet: kyun sir??.
. apko kahe chot lage hain?? mujhe bata ya bhi nahi?? assa koi karta hain... chaliye jaldi doc ke pass!!!
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maan come closer to geet

maan: mujhe kuch nahi hua hain princess!!! just YAHA ke doctors se dad ke bare main kuch baat karne hain...
{{ whenever MAAN-geet become close geet forget everything}}
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geet: toh pehle nahi bool sakte the... main litna paresan ho gaye thi... agar apko kuch hota toh mera kya hota?? DAD bhi bimar hain aur agar aap bhi ho jate toh mera toh jinna hi muskil ho jata!! aap plz apna khayal rakhye... plzz mere khatir!! boliye na rakhenge na??

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maan: tum bolne he toh nahi de rahe ho..
{ geet back to her sense}
geet: woh main
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she was about to leave thn maan touch his waist nd geet fell on his chest!!!
{{{ mahi ve mahi mahi ve}} mahiii

maan: main apne princess ke liye apna khayal jarur rakhunga... sirf tumhare liye...

geet blushes: aab chale??

maan: chalo!!

... both was in MAAN'S jeep
maan was driving nd drooling on geet!! but then he notice geet is looking out in a gollgape stall... so he decide to stop the car...

geet: sir apne gari kyun roke??

maan: mujhe bhuk lage hai...

geet: par yaha to golgape ke si wa kuch bhi nahi hain?? aap khayenge???

maan: haa !! main nahi kha sakhta??

geet: haa kyun nahi!!

maan: toh utro!! tum jake order do main car side karke aata hu!!!

geet: ok sir!!

geet was crosing the road without notice that a bus was coming with full speed...
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the bus is about to hit the the geet...😭😭. and

tooo be continued...

precap: hospital...😲

...more likes nd comments plz...

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago

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sandymg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

wow... me first😊

nice update!!!👏

Edited by sandymg - 12 years ago

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dhakdhak22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

nice dear😊

both r care fr each other👏

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Nice update
geet also loves maan
maan stop car at gol gappa stall for geet
hope geet is safe

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aditimaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

wow it was lovely.maaneet scenes were amazing.i know maan will save his princess

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nelufar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

THNKSS GUYSS FOR UR SUPPORT...

MG SS ~DILRUBA~~
PART 10

GEET WAS SHOCKED TO SEE THE BUS COMING TOWARDS HER...
SHE STOOD LIKE A FREEZE BODY...
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THE BUS JUST ABOUT TO HIT GEET & MAAN SAW THIS...

MAAN RUN LIKE A MAD GUY ND PUSH GEET HARDLY.
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& THE BUS HIT MAAN...

~~~~~~~~BLOOD BLOOD BLOOD~~~~~~
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GEET JUST TURN HER FACE & SCREAM :MMAAANNN

SHE RUN TO MAAN... SHE TOOK HIS HEAD IN HER LAP
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GEET: MAAN UTHO NAA PLZZ WAKE UP... MAAN PLZZ JAWAB DO MUJHE PLZZ UTHOO...somebody plzz help..😭 { she was crying bitterly}
someman came & help geet to take maan hospital...
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hospital::: doc take maan to I.C.U.

GEET SIT OUTSIDE TH I.C.U-- KYUN kiya apne assa??? mere liye apne life ko kyun katre main dala?? kyun maan kyun??
kon hu main aapke??/ itna kuch lyun kar rahe ho???
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.babaji plzz unhe thik kar do... main unka bohot kayal rakhunga I PROMISE...plzz aap unhe thik kar do... main unhe bohot pyar karunge ... unke pass humesa rahunge... ek pal ke liye unse dur nahi jaunge... but plzzz aab unhe mere pass lota do... i love him babaji... main unke bina nahi jii paunge... plzzz unhe thik kar dooo plzzz... { she was crying & prying}

after an hour later doc came out...

doc: excuse me !!!

geet: yes doc!!! woh kese hain.??? unhe kuch nahi hua na????

doc: woh khatre se bahar hain but unke sar or pair pe bohot gehre chot lage hain... .
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lekin woh iss halat main bhi kise geet ka naam le rahe... kya aap ho geet???

geet : jee haa main he hu...
thn she start crying: asse halat main bhi mere bare main kyun soch rahe hain aap??? kyun mere itni fikar karte ho aap??

doc: sambhaliye miss geet>... i think apko unke pass jana chahiye... iss se unko thore relieffeel hoga... hum unhe thore der main wordmain sift karte hain,... aap unse wahi mill lena...

geet: ok doctor!!!!

precap: geet is taking care of maan

~~~~note~~~
sorry 4 short update...
like nd comments plz...

Edited by nelufar10 - 12 years ago