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Posted: 12 years ago
can understand, Yash's problem. Yes they are friends but it all about his child's safety and he cannot choose Geet over that...this incident will off course shake him up a lot...
guys, please update this regularly. It is a very good story but infrequent updates make it very hard to emotionally connect with the updates...so please it is a request.
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Posted: 12 years ago
update is very late sweeties 😳
Loved the chapter but heart broke reading Meera falling, both the girls alone n yash asking Geet to leave đŸ„ș
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice FF..bringing forward the main issue women facing even in this century..and its really well written..enjoying a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for next part dear
cont soon
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me just read all the parts.

It is awesome.

Poor geet, suffering for no fault of hers.

But her family is so ruthless.

Aww! maan loves geet and calls the babies as princesses!

And dadi maa is the most adorable character.

Meera and yash are good too, but yash is now concerned for meera's safety.

Still, I hope maan is back in time and takes geet away soon.

Me new to india-forums

please add me in buddy list and om when you come online!

me will wait for ur answer.

regards,

treasuretrowel
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Posted: 12 years ago
mujhe bhi update chahiye :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
hinal roopali and kawaii,
where r u gals.. please update this ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Firstly, to aishu (roopali), hinal and kawaii, let me congratulate you all for touching on such a sensitive topic.

It is really necessary to spread awareness in the indian society in order to eradicate this evil from the entire world.

You know guys, i have just completed my L.L.B and am about to start my practice, and i just hope that i come across at least one case like this one.

Poor geet's turmoil, that despicable woman pammi, her equally devilish son and geet's whole family, gosh, they are soo crazy.

I was surprised that even geet's parents refused to help her out.

Good thing she got married to maan, now her little baby gals getting dada and par daadi's love too.

Please update whenever you'r free guys, i will add all of u to my buddy list, please accept my request okay?
Edited by turbulence - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Together...Forever...

PART 16


As Meera saw it she started struggling but the men who had held her slapped her n she was about to fall but she didnt care for her the only thought came of her baby n she held her stomach so as to protect her baby. Meanwhile Geet who was also struggling to free herself n had looked back to ensure that Meera was safe but when she saw her falling she shouted, "MEERAAA" n finally freed herself from the struggle n ran to Meera.

Geet was having difficulty with her baby bump and body ache but then seeing her friend she forgot all the trouble and ran to her. Geet reached at the right time and saved Meera from falling n both hugged each other in fear. The men had by then called their boss that they had finally caught Geet

Geet, "Meera tu theek hai na? Kahi lagi toh nahi tujhe?"

Meera nodded, "Main theek hu Geet. Par mujhe bohut dar lag raha hai."

Though Geet herself was afraid but right now she knew that she had to save Meera at least, "Kuch nahi hoga Meera tu dar mat main hu na"

Meera nodded softly and as Geet was about to say anything the men pulled Geet away.

Geet shouted, "Tum yeh kyu kar rahe ho? Chod do hume"


Man 1, "Tujhe nahi chod sakta hum. Itne din se tere wajhe se hum tadap rahe the ab aur nahi..."

Geet, "Aap log mujhe chahte hain na lekin Meera ne toh kuch nahi kiya usse chod dijye plz. Main aapke samne haath jod ti hu"

Man 2 slapped her hard, "Chup. Ab jab tak boss nahi ajate agar tum chup nahi rahi toh...", he went to Meera and kept a knife on her stomach, "Toh iske saath saath iska bacha bhi marega"

Geet screamed in horror, "Nahiii. Plz use kuch mat kariye. Main chup rahungi aur aap jo kahenge woh karungi plz usse chod dijye plz", tears rolled out of her eyes.


Meera had gone numb when the man kept knife on her stomach and closed her eyes, praying, "Babaji plz hume bacha lijye.Main apne bache ko nahi kho sakti aur na hi Geet ko. Plz babaji hume shakti do ke hum in logo se ladh sake"

Geet kept whimpering while the men kept rounding them. few men held Geet and Meera separately.

One of the men who was eyeing Geet said, "Yaar kya maal hai yeh..." he came to her and touched her face, "sachi main agar mera bas chala toh abhi tujhe bistar main le jaata aur..."and left it hanging there while Geet and Meera felt disgusted with his words. How cheap were they? They could see geet pregnant very clearly.

another man told looking at Meera, "Yeh bhi ekdum mast maal hai... kash boss inse kaam nikane ke baad hume de de"

As they were talking their boss came to the park. Geet shivered seeing him while Meera started seething in anger

Men, "Boss yeh rahi Geet..."


Boss, "Toh Geet maine tujhe pakad hi liya. Ab kaha bhaag ke jayegi tu aur yaha koi aur hai bhi nahi tujhe bachane ke liye."

Meera who was already seething in anger just started struggling with the hold and shouted, "Chup karo Brij. Mere hote huve tum Geet ko kuch nahi kar sakte samjhe tum."

Brij walked upto Meera and slapped her n said, "Yeh uss din thapad marne ke liye. Phele main Geet se nipat lu uske baad tumhe bhi theek se sabak sikhata hu."


He went back to where Geet was. He then removed the knife he had hid and inched close to her. Geet was shivering thinking if anything happened to her babies. She had fought so muchit just couldn't end like this!!! then she saw Meera in a vulnerable stateher face was red with the slap and the corners of her lips , bleeding. she forgot about herself and her babies and closed her eyes for a bit, thinking about how happy Yash and Meera were. if something happened to them would she be able to forgive herself? the answer was a big NO...she had taken previous miscarriages she'd be able to take this one too. She will anyways have nothing to lose.

She then decided she had to save Meera and her baby and for that if she had to sacrifice herself she would do it happily...after all for whom would she live? Her babies but she knew if she sacrificed herself she and her babies would be in a better and safer place than they were now where there was no pain or grief only happiness


Finally after telling sorry to babies that she was going to take this step she said to Brij, "Veerji aapko mujhe marna hai na toh mar dijye par plz Meera ko chod dijye. Aap mujhe Meera ki bhi sazaa mujhe de dijye par plz usey ko chod dijye usne kuch nahi kiya plz Veerji plz. Main aapke pao padti hu" she literally fell on his legs begging him to leave Meera.

Brij laughed seeing her begging falling on his feet. He then held her hair and pulled upwards. his eyes were red with anger. Geet started shivering seeing his red eyes and she knew that now no one would be able to save her.

"Bacha mujhe maaf kar dena. Maine aap dono ko sab se bachne ka wada kiya tha lekin aaj mumma apna wada pura nahi kar payi par aap chinta mat kijye kuch pal hume dard hoga lekin uske baad hum hamesha ke liye yeh dard bhari duniya se dur honge. Mumma ko plz maaf kar dena ko woh aap dono ko yeh khubsoorat duniya nahi dikha payi par main babaji se yahi prathana karti hu ke agle janam main bhi mujhe aapki hi mumma banaye."

As Geet got ready to engulf death she was suddenly pushed and heard 2 screams,
"MEERAAA"
"GEETTT"
and the darkness engulfed her.

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prev: PART 15

Next: PART 17


update courtesy: hinal



Edited by sweet_aishu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update brij and his are B***** ...ooops hope both meera-geet n their babies are fine ...
waiting for next update please update soon

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