Lettre D'amour-SwaRon Os - Page 4

Amazzinggg os!!!👏

Nice wok Payal. Why would you want to scrap such a beautiful piece of work? Thanks to Deepika for convincing you to post this. And the song you have chosen, listening to that song alone gives me goosebumps and reading this story along with this song, i couldn't stop my tears... This seriously is brilliant...

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

haha..m posting here😛

broom se marogi..haha..try try😆😆😆


smartyy will edit my comment tomo...pakka...

u dont have any idea how much i love this OS..m so glad u pmed me..😊😳

wait till i comment...😛

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Hey Smarty🤗🤗

I love the lively bond we share..but here i need to get serious...its about SWARON ...the fairytale couple who made me fall in love with LOVE again..and the OS...its written by one of my favorite writers on IF...i wish could give some adjective to describe this work of urs ...i wish...sigh..i don't have much words to describe this,...watever i will write will fall short to convey my feelings...for this wonderful creation of urs...

Will start from the very beginning of ur beautiful OS...i was in love with this piece ...since the first few lines...

"We are not US Vihaan...it's you and me" Anjali warned him with attitude. She was Rey & Kria's daughter.

Sharon giggled at Vihaan's gobbly eyes going sad but still he smiled at her.

"She will be yours someday. Even your uncle and I used to be just like you both. When he comes back, later during the day, you can ask him for some tips." she winked at the little one who ran away happily.

Ouch..that reminded me of something very special..Kya tum aur me hum nehi ho sakte sharon...ahh...all i can say is this the most beautiful metaphor ever..u reflected their pure love in vehaan -anjali's cute conversation...

So beautifully u portrayed her fear ...even the thought of loosing him..scared her..

"What about the Lieutenant General who..uhm..." Sharon fumbled for the right words.

"He passed away. Last evening. Name not yet revealed." Neha spoke and looked at the other two.

It was HIM...goshhh...i was already having tear when i read this...dont worry ur readers will find out it much later

The fear of loosing him..made her say things she never meant..he knew she loved him..and never wanted to do anything without her approval..as her life was connected to him now..awww...the relationship is just heavenly..loved the way u described their bond...

Sharon looked down, embarrassed at being caught. She kept fidgeting with the wedding ring that rested on her finger. It was a Solitaire ring set in Platinum. Just like she'd warned him she'd wanted.

The moment she gave the news about her pregnancy..his reaction....awww...i loved the way u showed her WAIT...the wait..which was never going to get over ...the excitement..to meet her love..her husband..the pain of staying away from him for so many days and during the crucial period of her life ...u depicted her love..pain..wait..all ..so flawlessly

her behavior that surprised everyone. She didn't cry. She just kept looking at the body in front of her, staring probably. Her whole being felt like a vacuum and her voice deceited her as it refused to come out. So did her expressions which were just plain blank.

She staggered a little as she walked inside the house but then managed to hold her balance. It was as if her mind was sending shock waves to her. It was in concussion. She wanted to scream but she couldn't. She wanted to cry but her tear glands seemed to have dried up.

More i tried to write few words about these lines i failed..miserably ...u portrayed HER love..pain...so beautifully..effortlessly..her tears refused to support her in releasing the piled up grief ...poor soul...

After this the part came where i literally cried..her reaction..her actions..to the letter...

Now that you are smiling, let me get back to talking sense. I miss you, sweetheart, I really do. It's going to be almost three months now since I am here, and the situation seems to be getting into control. I hope I can get back to you soon. I swear, if you were here, I would probably cuddle you up in my arms and never let you go. I know you would hate me for doing that, but who cares, huh! Yeah Yeah I know I can get super cheesy at times! Ok, I correct myself, Most of the times. But when it's got to do, cheesy seems to be so in.

Awww...the letter was so HIM..every word of the letter reflected SWAYAM...it screamed his love..loud...

The dance...m spell bound..the way u molded those beautiful verses with her pain..her love..her grief...salute to u girl..for penning down something so beautifully..so heavenly ...

"Anjali, Why do you run away from me?" he asked her.

"Cause I am Anjali. Anjali Reyaansh Singhania. Get it?" she spoke with a sense of pride.

"But you will be mine someday, I promise you" he spoke and ran off from there dejected.

Anjali looked around guiltily and ran behind him. In all this they hadn't realised that their behaviour had affected someone.

I just loved the way u reminded her their story of love through the innocent kids...lovely ...a master stroke ...loved this ..''

"I know all this isn't easy for you' my heart and soul will always be with you.. , life moves on Sharon, and you will learn to accept the change that is to come in our life and will learn to move on as well..i will be away from you.. your happiness matters to me the most. And it would make me sad to know that you are sad, no matter where I am.

Her promise to him forced her to smile..at least try to smile..that the magic of love...u live even after u leave this mortal world..u live through ur love..her love will keep him alive..in her and in their sign of love

Take a bow girl...u r A-M-A-Z-I-N-G...enough said...😳 ...keep showering ur beautiful works on us..

PS- i could imagine only sneha as Sharon..😳

Luv

Deep

that is a really touch story...😭😭😭😭😭

u r an amazing writer... believe me! I actually had tears in my eyes while reading the OS... aapne toh dil touch kar diya... Awesome OS! and i would like to add, i actually don't happen to like d stories in which either of them die or has a sad ending but this one touched me and i love it! keep writing 👏 and pls do PM me wenever u post some other work!

Sorry for the indefinite delay!

wow loved it to core..it's really hearttouching..
i literally cry :(
i never ever like sad ending n esp on swaron but this one is really something ;)
thank u very much for posting this one :)
do write more on swaron n plz happy one ok ;)