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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

OMG this was so beautiful..after months i have read something on SwaRon which made me cry A LOT.

Beautifully penned down..emotions Sharon were going through when she was missing Swayam. When she slapped Vicky and Rey and what she was feeling when she read the letter. The letter was so beautiful one could imagine Swayam sitting right in front of Sharon and saying this. Sharon dancing in RH and looking at Kriya and Neha's kid and controlling her tears. I can't express what i felt..all i can is very done. Hats off to the soldiers who do this so that we can sleep peacefully.

You asked whom i imagined as Sharon..well that for won't be tough. I was/am and always will be an ardent Sneha Kapoor and TanHa fan and for me no one can portray Sharon the way Sneha did. No matter what i feel for them today, for me SwaRon is a big nothing without TanHa together which is why D3 is happily over for me. 😊

Edited by AmRiTa_S - 12 years ago

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Reserved.

EDIT -

First of all, I am really really very sorry! Humble apologies for my delay, but I had been on an indefinite hiatus, and whenever I came online, it was through my cellular services.

Anyhow, coming back to this OS, since I read it long long back, I can not promise you a good comment.

So, this one was so heartbreaking, but in the good sense. I felt really attached to this OS, and was completely overwhelmed, the reason for my reserve! It left me completely s p e e c h l e s s , but nevertheless, I loved the choice of theme you took.

This topic is not much very picked up by writers, especially in the D3 forum, but you did the brave attempt, and succeeded completely.

Sharon's feelings on hearing the death of her husband, where so true, I could imagine them happening in front of me, like a reel.

Beautifully written, and you left me stunned with it! x)

Love.

Edited by NocturnalBeing - 12 years ago

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Hetal

@hetu29

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

OMG payu... ! Me sachi mai crying now...
Waise toh i dont read much of swaron writings... But this took my heart away ! Loved it !
Ajust with the chotu comment... ! Exams on the way u knw :P

P.S. I imagined Sneha.. ! Coz though i am not a big swaron fan, but i love Sneha A LOT ! And even i haven't seen vrushika's work coz i dont watch D3 anymore..

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

awesome os payal👏

beautifully written😃

P.S as i stopped watching d3 long back sharon reminds me oly of sneha😳

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

I hate it when it will be end on sad note
but i love d whole os where she is happy with her life nd enjoying with kriya nd neha children
n she herself too much happy abt her preganancy bt whn life take dramatic turn. She became lifeless soul
Her love her life her swayam died in shooting n she numb didn't even cry for once
Pain of loosing him was unbearable for her n she started cursing herself for letting him to join army but she proud to be wife of him
Her friends worried about her situation n handed over her his letter
He tell her in letter if she became sad thn he wil be sad nd if she happy thn he wil be happy
To let out all her pain sharon step in RH nd started to remembering her memories with him n started cry louder n louder
She read his letter again n again nd feel that she wil not disappoint him n started to begin new journey of her life
love d OS

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shaanswayam

@shaanswayam

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

this is so beautiful one...and i dont know why to be very honest i imagine vrushika as sharon...

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Beautifully written Payal...but then of cors it had to be as u were writing it...it is always heartwrenching for me to read sumthing with one of them not alive anymore...but I culd relate to this concept and the sentiments at each stage - i have accepted Vrush in that role now - but this story i culd only envisage Sneha - perhaps the maturity of the concept has a lot to do with it

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

payal 😭 yaar it is so so so beautiful, i will be back with my comments jaldi

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--Rumeli--

@--Rumeli--

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Payal I alwyz loved reading ur works its really sweet of you to write both kriyansh and swaron versions of it separately for us!!
the OS was beautiful just the swaRonish way u described their love for each other..but the end made me sad!!much deep OS awesomely emoted!
Oh well I had visualised Sneha cz i guess it wil take time or it will alwyz continue to be this way for us!!thankx for the PM!do write one soon please!