Originally posted by: Sreearabhi
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tensions + Jealousy + Amits attention towards khatra = Rabchik fire between these 2 A2.
đ Your writeups are too good đđź agree...ekdum rabchik đđź
par amit babu kab mehsos karega ki oh bhi amita se pyar karte hain??? whts ur take in this Sree ji??
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arrey simple hai ...
ammu NRI khatra ki wajah se gumshum
Amit apne papaji ko dukh dekh ke gumshuda rehte hai
Amit aur Khatra ke beech ki dosti
Ammu banjayegi jail hui tosti
ROhan RIa tina ammu aur amit ke beech doori lane ki koshih mein honge
Ammu ke dil mein NRI Khatra aur Amit ke beech some thing something ka doubt paida karne mein riya lagi rahegi...who edi toh maahir issme
aur ab
ammu comes to amit babua and says...
oh ji suniye mein chali maika
u chill with ur NRI malaika
Why I stay here khwamakha
AMit the hotwaa becomes sadwa
wants to stop but will not coz he is Akkad ka baap
Bg songs kitni baatein yaad ati hai... reminiscing adha adhura leftover kissie during their one night honeymoon
here ammu - royifying sneezing eyes lal face dull
America date nearing ammu tensed amit missing ammu and amits heavy heart
khatra notices dullness in amit and probes amit chup coz he is introvert ka bhai
khatra tries to dig in his mobile sees ammus pics tells him to call her
he say no she say yes...finally she say he loves her so much she cud read his fce
amit realizes cant wait for second ... and feels bad that he couldn't realize how much biwi does ishaqss with him and runs to biwi
there biwi standing akeli with mobile in hand rona dhona with bg tanhayi...
amit babua comes in front of her with intoxicated eyes...cutewa killing smile...ammu fir se 120 mm smile but tears ganga jamuna saraswati running down
amit comes close wipes tears ...and sings
Hoga tumse pyara kaun humko tumse ...oh amita
shuru hogayi pyaar ki ek nahi shurwaaad...
hahaha kaisa laga meri imagination meri jaan
ekdum dhasu, rabchik, mast, maseledar, majedar...jadugari...Sree u r brilliant dear...simply love reading it...đ thanks