FRIENDS plz read!!OS: AIM FOR THE MISSED KISS!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi hi hi... i can see the forum is in a very heated mode!!! but friends we sanaya friends gotta be more happy! coz all the bashers ( including their LEAD)got an answer from the industry itself!!!! i am sure the more they probe into this more sweeter will sanaya be known!!!

just a small OS!! hope it does not bug you more!! this is my first OS for chanchan so hope you guys like it!!! and plz do drop a comment friends!!


OS:AIM FOR THE MISSED KISS!!

chanchan looked down at her phone beeping!!! it was manav's message asking her to come out!!

chanchan nodded her head in negative and continued clasping her hands for the bhajan...

manav gave a frustrated stare at his new wife!!! who was looking at him from her sides and still kept straight to avoid the angry glares!!


Himanshu let out a giggle whispering : manav!! idea flop uh??

manav gave an angry glare at himanshu!!

himanshu slid his hands over his shoulder: cool down my Bhai!!! it happens..

manav: wait.. i will ensure you don even get a chance to see simple from the minute your married

himanshu: you cant kidnap her.. chanchanji will save her

manav: but who will save youand raised his eyebrows!!

himanshu: manav manav!! ok ok.. i understand!! let me think of some idea

himanshu: manav call bhabi to garden na... you can talk to her for sometime..

manav:hmm.. she is not even coming outside!! and garden it seems!!! now who wants this bhajans!! huh!! my suhag raat has not become only family but it has become public raat!!


himanshu giggled as manv pulled him closer: just look at her.( chan chan was happily clapping hands and swaying with her co-sisters for the bhajan). she does not even turn and see me... dont these girls see any movies !!! all guys are right.. wives are bad!!! i tell you life long date simple.. don marry her

himanshu: excuse me!! i wont even open the door for a bhajan like you my friend!!when bhabi knocked who asked you to open the door!!

manav: himanshuu!!!

himanshu: okok...

manav: what should i do

himanshu: that!! clap!! and manav did the same staring at her!!

chanchan got a message: you dont love me!!!

she stared at the phone!!!

and looked at manav who looked at her an turned his face with a fussy look

chanchan smiled and texted back!!

chanchan: i love you mr.SUSU

manav smiled at his phone and replied: Prove it Miss.PuchPuch

chanchan smiled at the phone and texted back: how?

manav: Just one chanchan!!!

chanchan replied: .. not now manav...

manav texted back: you love me or not

chanchan: i do...

manav replied: then kiss me!!!

chanchan texted: ok fine i don love you!! so now pray!! and joined the bhajan!!!

manav was shocked at his wife's bold backfire: what a wife i have! other girls would have wanted to prove a million times huh..


himanshu went out to check on puch puch in the out house!!! manav's dad had told chanchan's bro to come and take it back the next morning!!


manav turned to look at chanchan smiling away with his family... her sari had fit her perfectly and her smile made him go to lala land every time he saw her ...he couldnt believe his lady luck had favoured him so well and she was right beside him...his lips curved itno a smile

chanchan felt his looks trailing over her and turned to him raising her eyebrow and he immediately frowned faking a baby anger.. manav's elder brother was a silent specatator to the signals between the couple!


suddenly there was a point in the bhajan were all were requested to close their eyes and repeat!!

chanchan blushed at her cute husband and when none were noticing raised her hands and gave him a flying kiss shocking the hell out of him

all were busy into the bhajan but poor VILLAIN brother of manav noticed it and was firing from within!!! and glaring at his younger brother who was blushing like an idiot

chanchan immediately turned and closed her eyes tight escaping her hubby's reaction ...


suddenly himashu came running in

himanshu:manav chanchan.. puch puch is running out ?? i am not able to control it

chanchan got tensed and got up: oh... manav puch puch is scared of the dark!!!

bhabi 1: you go manav.. i will also

himanshu jumped in between: no bhabi if you go who will handle bhajan here.. if aunty comes only you can talk to her

bhabi 3 turned to turned to his brother: bhai you go na??

bhai 2: already we had a trial in the morning.. i am not going

bhabi 2 and bhabi 3 also backwalked

himashu: chanchan.. its been so long and still no signal... you itslef go na!! meanwhile we will be here handling the bhajan.. puch puch can be controlled only by you


all nodded and chanchan ran out as the others continued with the bhajan!!

chanchan ran out into the huge garden and rushed into the farm house...all panic struck on her face!!!

she was shocked to see the sight in front of her...

puch puch was sleeping cutely in the couch and manav was standing there smirking at her!!!


chanchan: manav!!! you??

manav walked closer to her and pulled her towards him !!!

he ran his hands over her shoulder and made it reast comfortably on her both sides...

she was still blibkibg at him: you told me puchpuch was running around

manav clasped his hands behind her and brought his face closer to her: my puch puch just came running with panic in the garden chanchan and he pinched both her cheeks

chanchan blushed and hit him on his shoulder: huh... even himanshu.. wait i will...

manav: do you love me and pulled her close letting his hand rest on her waist

chanchan blushed as manav hugged her and she slowly raised her hands running over his broad shoulders and around his neck tightening the hug closing the space between them by resting her head on his shoulders!!!

chanchan: still in the hug: i love you manav!!!

manav whispered in her ears: prove it !!!

chanchan breaking the hug looked into manav 's eyes... she raised her toes her gaze fixed on his lips...

and she was moving closer

manav rested his hand around her waist and was waiting for the heaven to meet earth just then when

PUCHPUCH: bark bark barkkk

chanchan gave a jerk and moved back and were shocked to see puch ouch standing there wagging its tail...

she blushed and went back nodding he rhead in shy as manav winked at puch puch and it turned away shocking chanchan......

and before she could react manav had already sealed his lips with hers!!!!!


at the bhajan:


bhabi 3: bhabi till now manv bhai is catching puch puch...

bhai: yeah its supposed to be trained na

himanshu giggled: its new place na bhabi.. takes time for puch puch!!!!!!!!





i knoe it was acrappy OS but i just wanted to feel relaxed from my books! do temme how was it ... i am waiting!!!plz do drop a comment.. a second of urs would mean a lot to me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww very very cute and hilarious 🤣🤣🤣

Puch puch bark bark bark omg this is funny and unexpected..

then manav's kiss this one also i didn't expect...
cute one...

Himanshu was hilarious omg i am laughing and with a big smile...

I loved another one allot..

bhabi 3: bhabi till now manv bhai is catching puch puch...

omg you are so correct only Sanajan can ask such intelligent question

superb dear... keep writing..

you know one thing i don't read any OS, SS anything on forum...my cousin and friends know this well..

But when i saw OS on ChanMan omg i got so excited and was so sure your writing will be nice...

will be waiting for more ChanMan stories..

nice one dear.. your writing brought a big smile on my face...😃 Thank you 😳

Edited by LuvuKhushi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i was wondering if it would be found hilarious or stupid!! glad to see you laugh!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Too good OS.

REally enjoyed it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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bang on post, I wish CVs also show dis kind of Chanman scenes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so cute... Loved those little monkeys...Specially the bhajan one...😆 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey..nice os..dis is d first tym im seeing an os ritten on chanman..so i guess ppl hav startd liking dis new jodi...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: CrazyAmie

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bang on post, I wish CVs also show dis kind of Chanman scenes


thanks a lot!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haha!
Enjoyed reading your OS!
Your hilarious OS could calm many people down now!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was cute and funny :)
Loved reading it with all ur cute emoticons :)
Do post more :)

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