FF : Mera mann Kehne laga! - Page 2

Originally posted by: grintson

i lus loved it... u again made me speechless... i really wish the following scene do happen...

Amit : (Thinks) It really hurts like hell when I see you unhappy. All this while I thought you were unhappy and were tired of acting in front of our parents because of our fake relationship .I thought you wanted me out of your life. But I was so wrong, so wrong! Even I dreaded the feeling of leaving you and going alone. (Has tears in his eyes) Amita, I love you too! I don't want to leave you alone. I will speak to my dad and let me check whether I can handle the contract from here. Get well soon. My dear a surprise is waiting for you! (Smiles, slowing bends and kisses on her forehead!!!) ❤️❤️❤️

BG: Mera mann Kehne laga
Paas aake na tu door ja..
Chhoone de Honth tere
Zara saanson mein
Apni basa aa.. a..

Originally posted by: emeraldeye

Thanks grintson dear !!! I'm glad that you loved it.😳 Hope Amit feels exactly as I portrayed.

Originally posted by: grintson

dont say thanks dear... u deserve it... you r very dexterous at writing... i always feel m watching d episode itself...

Originally posted by: grintson

u jus keep on writing and we will keep on reading...👍🏼

Originally posted by: lily.lotus.rosy

@ emeraldeye...honestly, I don't have words to express how I'm feeling to read this O.S. I'm awestruck, dumbstruck, thoroughly mesmerized!!I 🤗don't know where to start from...each & every portrayal in the story, whether it is the description of the conversation of the Shah mansion, or the picturesque description of the natual beauty of Lonavala , the dialogues of A2 in the car & finally the confession of love...I mean...how beautifully it was brought out...so vivid...& the part when Amita on gaining conciousness hugged Amit...too good!!👍🏼 Then Amit's dialogues ( thinking ) with tears in his lovely expressive eyes...really touched my heart deeply. ❤️You know what, I not only visualized each portion of the story but actually felt my presence in the plot as if everything was happening right in front of me...& I'm getting goose bumps. A simple Thank U is very short to describe my admiration for u...👏but I can say one thing without exaggerating that the CVs should seriously go through this write up to treat us with some lovely episodes😊...& what more can I say I have become a fan of urs.
Mera mann kehne laga / Aise hi O.S. tu aur likhti ja...😊

Originally posted by: Momrin

Love it!