Faltering Footsteps Series: Kalank Completed

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayy me first!
--UNRES--
First of all AMAZING!!!

VERY WELL WRITTEN!

So much painful.

The people of Rajasthan Just disgusting! So much Superstitious.

OMG! How much that poor soul has gone through.

First that bas***d raped her that too infront of everyone.And second no one came to help her.They must have tortured her day and nights by their words and taunts that she tried to kill herself not having strength to bear any more.
Disgusting people!

I just loved how u described her pain.I could Imagine happening infront of my eyes and that was very depressing.I literally cried!

Dr.Raizada! So arnav is doctor.I m happy that he is gonna help her.He shouldnt have said the accusing words to her.I hope he apologizes to her.

Hoping she come out of it soon!

I m sorry.I m not able to type much as my heart is constricted and heavy after reading it.It was very painful!

Please continue soon.I wanna see her happy again like her name!

I just hate those men who r so disgusting that just to fulfill their disgusting desires and lust,they destroy so many innocent women life without thinking that how much it will hurt those women.They dont even think that God forbid it can happen to their daughters and sisters as well!

Thanks for the pm.

Update soon.
Edited by Hina69 - 12 years ago
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Oh jenna...i can understand how much this must have effected u...
Thats inhuman...how can a person if he is one think abt doing tbis to an innocent soul let alone actually enjoying it...
Thats out of my head...
Its unfortunate that such mishaps r increasing day by day...
Its a complete contrast to the developing n equal society...
I donno wat to say...
Its jus...arrggghhh...i wanna break a particular someones head whom i dont even know...
Its really sad...

U wrote it really well...
Handling such a delicate issue itself is petrifying...
A bow down to ur courage n talent...
Its saddening as well as awakening...
Thankyou for the pm...

I hope the doctor really helped her stand again n will be by HER all life...
Edited by ankii543 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds good...waiting for first part
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My place😳

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Jenny u made me speechless...
Very emotional and intense update...
Feeling really bad for the poor soul...
Firstly she was disownec her own family call her mahoos...
Than she waz raped by that bloody ba***tered in front of whole village and no one came there to help her...y cant people think that if this happening to others than surely they will be the next victum...
And now she was 6 months pregnant and attempt to sucide...am literly crying while reading ur update...i hate such type of people who torture such poor souls...firstly they dont help her and now they arw making her life more hell by calling her Kalank...
I hope arnav will bring some light of hope in her life...
Superb TS...
Waiting for next update
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😭 m late
nevertheless again a story dat needs lots of courage to write
its disturbing bt dats d cruel society
dey wil hardly help
n yes ppl do act lik dat evn wen dey know it'd nt d gals mistake
dis is ur second sensitive issue after acid attak one
it does touch d raw nerves of d readers

Wnt say lvd it cz dats nt appropriate bt yes a wonderful plot n nice way of taking forward a msg

al d bst
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW this is very interesting :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so sad man:( but glad arnav is gonna pull her out
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wowww Lovely start ! Lukin forward dear ...

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