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Posted: 12 years ago
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Year: 2015


Dadabhai and Agantuk were standing on two different sides of the bridge. Pakhi standing at the mid of the bridge, wanted to run towards her Agantuk and forget about Kaaliganj's responsibility. But how could she play with the sentiments of her respected father-in-law who was concerned about the sudden death of Shivom's dad. Choosing which direction of the bridge to go was so tough that she took a drastic step. She folded her hands in respect to greet Dadabhai one last time, looked at the love of her life Agantuk with gleaming eyes full of love and jumped off the bridge into the rapid stream flowing beneath.


Pakhi kept flowing in the stream for a span of time that seemed to be infinite. This lucid dream of hers made her restless and while sleeping she started panting for breath. Just then his concerned hubby Agantuk woke up, noticed her panting, held her hand and started patting her forehead. Slowly, Pakhi went off to peaceful sleep in the arms of his saviour in all senses. While she slipped into peaceful sleep, Agantuk looked at the clock. It was 5 AM on a winter morning. He turned back, kissed her forehead, clinged her to his chest and went to sleep again. He was never going to let anything happen to her, not even in dreams. He was never going to let anything scare her.


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Sun rays seived through the curtains and entered their love nest. Sun in Mumbai was far more intense than Bengal. Pakhi slowly opened her eyes and got up from her bed. She remoed the curtains and went to the mirror to see her face. She looked as fresh as a winter morning's dew. As she turned behind, her heart skipped a beat. She was in Agantuk's arms. He looked into her innocent eyes, held her close and whispered into her ears, "Pakhi, you are never alone. I am with you always".


Pakhi wasn't aware that she had been dreaming and gasping -for breath every night.She looked up into his concerned eyes, smiled, blushed and cliged to his chest.





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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh My AganKhi is back that too thorugh my very very dearest buddy Sonia Thank you is really very small word for once again take me to My AganKhi's world i hope you will continue writing about them i just feel insecure what if have to miss them once again abruptlythough you cant write it for long please dont stop at the mid🥺atleats you give them the Happily ever after end its my kind request 😳
ok i stop my roona dhoona😆 i fastened my seat belts n once again ready for this wonderful journey owww AganKhi in Mumbai how much i wanted them to be in Mumbai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg agankhi ff awesome, i always wonderd why u dont write an agankhi ff and nw see, wel its by sonia and thanks sonia for dis. I wil again go in agankhi world wid dis but also want hema to write on agankhi.
Edited by foram. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Agantuk always fascinated me..! So very thnx on bringing an ff on them.. Looks really promising.!
Edited by kaatayani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanx for the pm Hema. I like it. 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice writeup. Thanks Hema. Plz update and notify when u done with the next part. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW!!!
this z sooo AMAZINGGG!!!
loved loved loved it!!!
update really soon! n do PM me whenevr u update! :)
Edited by coolfizzy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved Agankhi Alot. Nice A Read A FF On Them.

@Hema I Know You Love Them Just As Much As I Do.
So Can You Also Write A SS About Them.
Edited by SilverFairy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for the share. Wonderful one on Agankhi. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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2nd Update:

Clad in a white saree, Agantuk's mom knocked on the door. Pakhi quickly put the aanchal on her head and went to greet her loving mother-in-law. She and Agantuk touched the feet of her mom. She happily blessed both of them and told Agantuk: "BETA AGANTUK,BAHU; CHALO JALDI TAIYAAR HO JAO..BHUL GYE, KUCH HI DER ME HUME KOLKATA KE LIYE NIKALNA HAI". "Son Agantuk, Pakhi, get ready fast as we have to leave for Kolkata today". Pakhi went to kitchen to arrange for tea/coffee while Agantuk's mom inquired Agantuk whether the flight was at scheduled time.
As yough as it is to get a maid in metropolitan cities, they had brought TamTam and his husband to Mumbai. The kitchen got noisy with the sound of running tap water and the regular chit-chats between TamTam and her chhoti maalkin. In between the chats, Pakhi suddenly realized that 1 and only 1 thing can make chhote maalik angry at her: "A missing towel in the bathroom when he goes to take bath." She guped and rushed to her room, quickly took out the towel hanged it in the bathroom. While she was leaving the room heaving a sigh of relief and a smile, her aanchal stopped her from moving forward. She went red again, this time out of shyness, looked behind to see that her aanchal got stuck in some silly pin protruding out beneath the bed. She took out her aanchal and noticed her chhote maalik staring at her and smiling sitting at the sofa. She quickly ruched back to the kitchen blushing.
Agantuk, Pakhi, Badi maalkin, Tamtam, and her husband were ready to leave the house at 10 AM.

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