SwaRon Poem:Dil ki Dhadkan me tu rehta he ❤️❤️

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

Guys...few lines I jotted down on Swaron after watching the promo..its super lame...just felt like writing few lines...hope you won't get bored ...😳

Its from Sharon's point of view...her newly found Love 😳

Dedicated to Afshan Di...Di...its ur belated birthday gift..m not able to write these days...please accept this as i am not able to write any better at this point of time..Love you Di...

Ur Angel😳

P.S- Edit By Anindita ..Thanks dear🤗

Dil ki dhadkan me tu rehta he

Zindagi gumsum si thi...jab tum na the...dhadkane khamosh si thi ..jab tum na the

Tumne is dil ko dhadkna sikhaya...tumne in sanso ko mehekna sikhaya...

In labon ki hasi...in ankhon ki kashish...in sanson ki justaju ...is dil ke arzoo

Khwabon me banaya tha dhundla sa chehra koi...tumse milne lagi wo hubahu ...

Tumhari najro ka jhukna ...jaise gehre sagar me khud ko khona aur sab kuch pana..

un reshmi julfon ke piche rupehla sa chehra ..jaise kali ghataon ke piche chand ka chamkna ...

Pathar ko chu kar tumne...zinda kar diya ..bandhe dil ko khule asman ka pharinda kar diya

Dil dhadkta he tumhare zikr se ab...najren jhuk jati he ...hayya ki lali chehre ko sajati he...

Tumhe kho kar tumhari keemat samjha he mene...tujhe pane ki arzoo har ghadi ab dil me

Wo Julfon ka udna...wo najron ka milna...dhadkano ka badhna ...najron ka jhukna

Tumhe dekha toh samajhne lage hum...kya hota he dilon ka milna aur rahon ka judna...

Khud se khud ko milwane ka vaada he..ruthe piya ko manane ka irada he..

Dil tumhara toda tha apne in lafzon se...us chot pe marham lagane ka waqt aaya he

Tumhare har badhte kadam ko roka tha mene kabhi...

Aaj is dil ne tumhare taraf kadam badhaya he...

Kehna he tumse is dil ki baaten..khwabon si hogi wo mulaqatein...

Un palon ka ehsaas ched jata he ...labon pe muskurahat ke phool khilata he

Ab har dhadkan tujhse bas yehi kehta he ...is dil me bas tu...bas tu rehta he ...

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i know its super lame...still ..thanx for reading(if anyone read it)..😳

Please let me know the mistakes..i will correct them..wrote in a flow so couldn't cross check the mistakes😊

Promo GIF..by Anindita😳😊..ENJOY 😊

Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

res for someone spl 😳😆...lol..besties

Himani(My Rockstar 😳😊)

Meriii Diii

🤗🤗🤗
Wowww...Poem from u is always a treat to read...and this one is just amazing...simple yet effective...the feel... love...is so visible in each n every line!!
perfectly fit che on the current swaron situation.
u r amazing wid words di...i dont think anybody else could present swaron so romantically...thats why i call them ur swaron...this is simply awesome piece of work di...luvd it<3<3<3

luv U
urs Rockstar

Nisha(Meri Pariii)😳

Diii 🤗🤗
You write so beautifullyy !! 😳..
That even people like me, who are not much drawn to poetry feel like reading it again and again
Sharon's state of mind is described so very well!!
Her life before swayam came and after he became a part of her life...
Truly said:sumtimes people make walls around them, not to shut themselves from the world!
But to know who cares enough to break them away!
Swayam is the one for sharon!
Her feelings, her journey from like to love...😳
Brilliant piece of writing!
Keep writing more! 👍🏼
P.s : what's rupehla 🤔 ..bouncer gaya 😛 Surbhi(My Miss Positive)😳

Aapki issi ada pe toh hum fida hai..
Kehne ko toh aapne kuch shabd likhe hai..
par unn shabdon ke maayne hamare dil ne padhe hai..
Yeh sochti hu ki aisa kya hai jo dil ko chuu gaya hai..
Yeh toh aap hi ka jaadoo hai jo inn shabdon pe chal gaya hai ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Hukum yeh Naa-Cheez aapko salaam krti hai.
What-a-masterpiece!
I think i am in love ❤️

Ria..😳(My Rii)

Dii, 🤗 Look whos here..😆 Eid ka chand..😳

Wow, the poem was so wonderfully written...
It was from Sharon's point of view..this made it more enchanting
It touched my heart...each line brought a smile and a yearn to read the next..
Ab vahi repeat mode pe bolungi.. You write very perfectly..leaving me stunned.. gazing and gaping like a speechless spectator.. (My signature dialogue on all your works straight from the heart...) The poem rendered a wonderful journey and mujhe free mein dreamland bhi pahuncha diya..😳 Dii, ek request... Swayam ke pov se bhi ek plz. 😳😳.😆

Love,
Ur Rii

Lalita(Humari poetess)😳

Diii
this was just super awesome
but I didn't understand few words :p
but I felt every line Jo Aapne likha
it was just awesome
I was all the time blushing reading it :p
could feel the love and all the emotions
you are just amazing
Aapne Yeh Dil se likha and it was shown
I'm in awe of this poem
starting se end tak Jaise you explained Sharons state of mind was amazing
words and Sab kuch
*claps*
Meri demand hai Mujhe bhi Urdu Sikhao plz *folding hands*

Shrutika (My Sweetest heart😳)

acha now comment ki baari...kya kahu...confession is in the air...ek toh cvs maar rahe hai aise promo deke n den ur poem...woh toh awesome se bhi awesome👏

aapko ko pehle hi bola ki ur works have some magic...they make swaron alive n we start imagining swaron as soon as we read them

n aapke har work ki tarah isse bhi dil ko chuha...so i wuld say dil touching dii is back...ek aur baar iski start bhi dil se hai😆

sharon keh rahi hai I M IN LUV...i wuld say I M IN LUV WITH THIS POEM...i hope aise aur poems aap jaldi hi post karo😳

n one more thing which makes this poem special is it written by one sweetest person on IF for the other sweetest person on IF 🤗

Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago

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-spongy-

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Posted: 12 years ago

omg!!!

that was really beautoful

loved it...

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Sakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lame????

Oh accha lame ka matlab fantastic awesome heart touching aur truly amazing hota hoga...😒

Di aap mere favorite ho...

Gosh it was so so so awesome...i fell in love with the wordings.. its really the time for Sharon to heal the wounds she has given to swayam.. she is taking a step forward for him and is finally opening up.. you conveyed it brilliantly di.. i loved it... i truly loved it...

Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 12 years ago

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-TanHaVruShan-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Kya bolu di..
Dis poem took my heart away it was simply spectacular..
I just wanna say it was STUPENDO FANTABULOSLY FANTASTICALLY 👏
Mein toh aapki fan ho gayi hoon u write so brilliantly di..
Seriously ek Baat bolu i hate reading i just can't sit n read pages n pages of anything but here i ve read 3 os.s till now n dis poem of ur.s n i ve loved it all 😊 i wonder koi itna Aacha kaise likh sakta hai..
It was so so apt for sharon n her situation i so wish palki mam yeh show mein add kar leti.. Ur word selection n d way of presenting it as a whole in a flow is superb..
Love u di 🤗 🤗

Ps: pls jo aapko os ka latest idea aaya hai pls pls pls woh for sure likhna i ll be waiting to read it 😊

Edited by Shilpa_SwaRon - 12 years ago

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kshitija

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Posted: 12 years ago

Di...
How can u write such beautifully...its directly touches my heart...
Wow...simple bt so wonderfully written...just loved it...
Sharon's new love...her monologue abt their past as she pushed him away and now she's in love with him...
Very beautiful written Di...
U showed her journey towards her love in such a sweet manner...
I knw m just talking n talking...
Bt seriously i loved it...just superb n sweet like u...

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Amrita Sengupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

Res!! Will update the comment very soon!! Don't you worry Dee!!

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aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

deep now you will get a good one from me! one is a bone crushing hug n a good daant! how dare you call this poem lame?😡 it was so beautiful!!!! you as a poet myself it felt really good while reading this! it felt heart soothing at the same time it felt something pricking deep into the heart! it just touched my heart! i loved it yaar! it was just KHOOBSURAT! no else word can define this poem! wow deep bahut bhala lekhicha tame! mate bahut bhala lagila!😊

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Deepika

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie
deep now you will get a good one from me! one is a bone crushing hug n a good daant! how dare you call this poem lame?😡 it was so beautiful!!!! you as a poet myself it felt really good while reading this! it felt heart soothing at the same time it felt something pricking deep into the heart! it just touched my heart! i loved it yaar! it was just KHOOBSURAT! no else word can define this poem! wow deep bahut bhala lekhicha tame! mate bahut bhala lagila!😊

WOW...Oriya comment...😃😃😃😆

mu tumhathu bada hei thibi...😛...tume mote gali dei paribani😆

ps...thanks swthrt..hugs😳