PuNir OS - U are mine Mr. Dutt

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U are mine Mr. Dutt


Purvi heard Onir saying to Shalini that Shalini is his first wife.

Hearing this Purvi was left heartborken and didnt knew what and how to react. She felt completely betrayed. She was on the verge of crying when suddenly Onir kept his hand on her shoulder bringing her out of her thoughts.

Onir - Purvi what happened? Why are you standing here like this? I told you to go and catch an auto then...

Purvi (controlling her emotions and thoughts) - Nothing Onir...Yeah i am going...

With this she started walking remembering the words of Onir that she heard and feeling betrayed.

Onir signaled Shalini with a thumbs up and asked her to leave.

In Onir's house -

Purvi was trying to concentrate on work but thoughts about whatever happened in past few days and whatever she heard about Onir and Shalini's relationship was wandering in her mind. Onir all the time was seeing her and was eagerly waiting for her to respond. But she didnt. Therefore he in order to make her more angry came near her and started talking. Now Purvi lost her temper.

Purvi (shouting) - Onir stop it! What do you want?

Onir (trying to behave as if he knows nothing) – What happened Mishti? Why are you shouting at me?

Purvi – Why are you betraying me Onir?

Onir (still pretending) – Betraying you but when did I betrayed you…

Purvi (not getting super mad) – Oh please Onir don't even try to pretend in front of me…Ohk fine tell me one things what's the relationship between you and Shalini.

Onir (getting happy in heart but face showing getting scared) – What? Now where did Shalini came in between us…

Purvi – Onir stop all the excuses and answer me…as I heard everything today…

Saying this she totally broke down and sat on the floor crying. Onir wanted to soothe her but he continued with his drama.

Onir – Okay fine Mishti if you had heard everything then what's the need to hear all the things again…Yes whatever you heard is true…Shalini is my wife…Happy!!

With this he looked away as he didn't wanted to face his Mishti…he knew his Mishti is smart enough to catch lie on his face.

Purvi hearing this was now even more feeling betrayed. She immediately took Pari in her hands and moved out. Onir didn't even tried to stop her as he knew that Purvi would never be happy with him and she is more happy with Arjun. So he allowed Purvi to go.

In Deshmukh House –

Purvi came alongwith Pari and seeing Archana she immediately rushed towards her and hugged her. She even started crying profusely.

Seeing this Teju took Pari from her hands and Archana was not able to understand what's happening. Now Manav was also getting worried for her.

After calming her down Archana made her sit.

Archana – Purvi beta tell me what happened?

Purvi told her everything and everyone were shocked at this.

Manav – No I don't believe Onir will do such kind of thing.

Archana – Yes Manav I also am not able to believe.

Purvi – Aai…first I was also not able to believe this but today he confessed that thing and he told that this is the truth.

Hearing this everyone were again shocked.

Archana (wiping her tears) – Ok I believe you Purvi..but first let me talk to Onir about this than only I can say anything.

Manav – Yes Archana you are right. After all its about the life of Purvi and Pari..and its about the marriage of Onir and Purvi too…so without getting all the clarification we cant decide.

Saying this Archana and Manav left to meet Onir.

At Onir's house –

Onir – Kinshuk didi, Shalini your work is done. Thank you so much for all the support that you provided me when I needed my sisters.

Shalini – Onir Dada we know what you have gone through in your life. You were also the illegitimate child and we never understood you. But today your love for Purvi and her child Pari shows everything and today we realize that you proved yourself as the best brother, the best husband and the best father.

Kinshuk – Onir I knew all this of showing Shalini as your wife in front of Purvi was just a mere drama so that you can send Purvi and Pari back to Arjun and give her all the happiness in life. But what about you? You achieved nothing Onir.

Onir (smiling) – I achieved…I achieved my happiness..though it was just for the short span of time..i achieved it…The day I saw Arjun, Purvi and Pari playing together and happy I felt that I am the only hindrance in their coming together..that's why I called you and Shalini to do all this drama. Thank you so much for supporting me. I know what's the title of illegitimate means. And I didn't wanted Pari to go through the same things.

Kinshuk – But onir due to Purvi you lost your medical license and your house and everything…

Onir – I am sad for loosing those but at the same time I am happy I found my love in Purvi…I was able to do something atleast for Purvi..

Shalini – What about your future Onir…According to your plan and all this drama Purvi will go back to Arjun …what about you? You will again remain alone in your life.

Onir – No!!No Shalini I am not alone…I have good memories of the time that I spent with Mishti and I will always cherish those.

Kinshuk – Onir still we would request come with us.

Onir – No didi..please don't force me…I have decided they will go away from here and from everyone's lives. Now please you both leave before anyone comes…

Kinshuk and Shalini said bye to Onir and left from there. But the moment they left Onir saw Archana, Manav and Purvi standing there. They were totally shocked. Their faces were clearly defining that they had heard the conversations. Purvi was about to burst out. Archana and Manav saw Purvi and Onir and then signaled each other to leave. Therefore they left Purvi and Onir to talk to each other for sometime and left from there.

For few minutes there was pin drop silence between them. Neither Purvi nor Onir talked to each other. They were looking at each other and remembering their special moments spend with each other.

Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, har aansoo piye
Tere liye, ham hain jiye, honton ko siye
Dil mein magar, jalte rahe, chaahat ke diye
Tere liye, tere liye

With this Purvi came near Onir and tears started rolling from her eyes.

Purvi – Why onir? Why did you do this to me? Why?

Onir – For you happiness Mishti…

Purvi – For my happiness…But have you ever asked me where my happiness lies…

Onir – In Pari and…and…

Onir was about to say Arjun's name but Purvi cut him

Purvi(shouting) – And in you Onir Dutt..

Hearing this Onir was shocked and Purvi was now not able to control herself therefore she hugged Onir tightly.

Onir was not able to respond anything for some seconds but later he reciprocated by hugging her back.

Purvi (getting happy) – I love you Onir…and you will always be mine Mr. Dutt…

Onir hearing this words from Purvi just felt at the top of the world and embraced her even more tightely.

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko taraashe
Meri nazar se tu zara, haaye re
Aankhon se teri kya kya chhupa hai
Tujhko dikhaaun main zara, haaye re
Ik ankahi si daastaan daastaan
Kehne lagega aaina Subhanallah...

Jo ho raha haim pehli dafaa hai wallah
Aisa hua, Subhanallah..
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai wallah
Aisa hua



Purvi – Onir remember one thing I made many mistakes in my life but today if I am happy about something and I am satisfied of something than its gonna be our Pavitra Rishta..Today loosing you made me realize that how much I love you…I love you Onir. I love you very much.

Onir – I love you too Mishti.

With this both again hugged each other…and after that stayed with each other for the lifetime. Onir also proved himself as the best Baba to Pari and never made her realize or make her felt that she is illegitimate.


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ShaktifanSwati thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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outstanding OS on Punir...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww its such a beautifull OS.. This is onir love 4 purvi which i love..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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onir truly love...purvi...n he proove lots of times...nw he going to proove again...😃
I knw the end main sachhe pyaar ki aur pavitra rishtey ki means punir ki jeet hogi...🥳
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fabulous 👏 you made me speechless
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wow superb OS😊i hope we get the same scenes
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Couldn't stop myself from commenting.

Beautiful plot for the OS.

Onir's sacrifice was heart wrenching... unbearable.

The twist in the tale - Kinshuk and Shalini turning out to be Onir's sisters - was astounding.

But the portion that touched me the most was the ending - Purvi's realization about the love for her husband, her confession, and her demand for a "life together" with a partner worthy of love, care affection, respect, trust, loyalty etc.

And the songs were so apt... amazing sequences.
"Tere liye, hum hain jiye, har aansoo piye" was mesmerizing.

Absolutely awe-inspiring concept.




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Posted: 12 years ago
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Linda this is really beautiful! How I wish this happens in the show but it won't. I hate Purvi with a passion but if she had decided that she and Onir would be together in the end, not her and Arjun, and if she had worked on her marriage, I would have applauded her for that decision. She will find no better man than Onir.

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