THE LOCKET(6), MG FF, link new thread pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 69

just loved it loved it loved it

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

I love watching guys with little babies... Hayye.. So adorable. :)

Awesome update! I can't wait to read more!

Originally posted by: Onir

Avi 🤗 Each update becomes memorable for me. Each part gets to be my next most favorite. I love your writing. It gives me a feel good feeling. A smile is always there while reading, also I am forced to weave so many dreams. Thanks to you.

Firstly thanks for the dedication... Rockerz banni hu toh Bhooton ke wajah se.. hum sab itna jo bolte hai... 😆

Yes esp. Mari...😆

Coming to the update... there's so many things that I loved that I can't pinpoint one single thing.

The song was the whole summary of it. I love your music selections. They add that additional polish to the updates.

This song is one of my favourites (Actually each song you use are either my favourites or become after you use them. )

Thanks Onir! I wanted to use Kehna hai from Padosan but someone wrote an OS with it..so had to scrap that.

The whole dream was so beautiful... I was all 😳 What I loved was the "Tum chor ho" I am reminded of the SR scene where he talks about chor annkhen. This time you gave a whole new meaning to it. I don't want to add words to it because then I feel I won't do justice to it.

Glad that worked out. I was not thinking of SR but those lines fit in..

I love Maan's nature. I like to see how dedicated & sincere he is. He wants to learn so much. People his age want enjoyment not much bothered about future (Though there are few exceptions like him...) He takes note of each new experience & advice. He values advice as he knows they are from experience. But its not like he uses them randomly ... he ponders over each & then uses wisely. 👏

I loved Daadi's advice. Very practical. I agree to it. Sometimes you need to become firm for work to be done for everyone's good. You can't always be the good person as then it is sometimes taken advantage of.

He used that advice from professional front into personal front. That's what a intelligent & wise person does. Imbibing values & experiences & lessons in to self & living the good from them in your everyday life.

Yeah I am trying to show his growth into being a business man as well as Geet's love.

Sona, Yash & their 'Baby' 😆 Loved this a lot.

The baby did something that these two tortoises could never do between them.

Geet's City boys rant was too good. His retorts loved them. 😳

They both together took care of the baby ... learning for future I feel... 😉

I don't know but i have a soft corner for Boys who love kids... who be a different softer self when with a child. Geet saw that face of Maan and I'm sure it is going to be with her forever now. Also the scene with him & the baby cuddling & asleep was such perfection for someone to see... a girl always wants to treasure e such moments.

He wished her Good night sweet dreams. But I know for sure both are going to be having restless & awakening dreams of the other. 😉😳

Geet is real Baambi she didn't understand 'Good news' 😆 Its usually the boys who don't understand these stuff...but here its reverse. Chalega as long as they both are together unki naya paar ho hi jayegi... 😳

Thanks for such beautiful updates 🤗

Originally posted by: heytal

Aankhon ne teri yeh kya keh diya

dil yeh deewana bahekne laga😳

Maan ka sapna

Woh aur Geet aur tanhaai😉

par jab aankh khuli toh Nakul ki surat nazar aayi

🤣 🤣 🤣

Bechaara Nakul jise dekho uski bajaata hain

Maan aur Dev apni frustration uspe hi nikalte hain😆

Maanka haal behaal

Meeshti ke sapne kar de bura haal

Finally Munda decides today its do die

and Off he goes on Mission Meeshti😳

Jab tak baahon mein nahi liya tha tab tak shareef tha..

Ab itni paas aa gayi toh kuch kuch toh hona tha...

Mere dono bechare heros... tadpa ke rakhungi...😆😆

Maan 's sharp mind learning all the ways of business as well as heart

Dadimaa's valuable advice brings the much needed breakthrough

and

Eureka!!! Geet speaks to him😛

The staff room encounter with The baby was superb😊

I could actually visualize the baby eating her choti and squeezing her cheek

Aw! so cute and adorable sight😳

Maan enjoying Geet's plight and baby giving Geet a tough time😉

City boys gaon ki gori pe bhaari pad gaye😆

I loved the baby part too. Kash ke baby ki entry hoti rahe...

Not bad from 'Suniye' to 'Maan'

Haaye maar dala🤢

And then begins their nok-jhok😉

and baby enjoying and having having his way around😛

Maan taking care of the baby, playing with him, feeding him and also taking a small nap with him😊

And Geet nihaaroing him chup chup ke😳

Her feelings need to be expressed too..

So Sona Mam again going the family way and

our bholi bhaali gaon ki gori couldn't grasp this fact

Again the walk to the hostel in silence

and Maan making no mistake this time wishing her 'Good night' and not to forget 'Giiit' 😉😆

His Giiit's hazels following him from the confines of her room☺️

I love the Giiith... GC had such odd pronunciation but the way he said that was completely melty...

Avi fantastic update

Thoroughly enjoyed😃

The baby part of like the cherry on the cake😳

Superbly written

Thanks for updating in your tight schedule

🤗

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Yeh dil mange more !!!

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

Hiii avi hugs 🤗 ...how is you?