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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

HAHAA!!!!!

that was the funniest and most awkward scene ever!!!
imagine seeing your best friend kissing your sister!!!
and the juice scene was hilarious!!!
they actually thought something was wrong with their drinks!!!
hilarious!!!
since when has Sharon come up with these filmy ideas????
anyway...I hope their plan doesn't go the wrong way!!!
UPDATE SOON!!!
I wanna know what hapensd!!!!

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

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nice update,, 👏
plzz update soon.. 😊

thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
yes dear updating
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CHAPTER-31

Taani goes n stand at a place from where Vicky could see everything

Here with shareyam

sw to gundas-ab jao taani k pass…they go

Sw-kaise din dekhna padh raha hai mai gunde ko apni behan k pass bhej raha ho

Rey-abbe saale chill yr yeh sab acting hai

Sw glared at him…..rey-what???

Sw-ek aur baar saala bola na toh Vicky ko sab sach bata donga

Rey-sorry

Sh-arre guys act pe dhyaan do

Here with taani

Gun 1-kya item hai yr(he said slowly)

Taani-arre thora loud bolo warna Vicky kaise sunnega

Gun 1-sorry madam

Taani-koi baat nai phir se bolo

Gun1-kya item hai yr(loudly)

Viha heard it….vicky smiling face was now turning into serious

Gun 2-kya re item chalti hai kya 9 se 12

Taani(confused)-9 se 12 ka kya matlab hota hai(slowly)

Gun 2-arre madam aap matlab mat pooch bas sunte raho

Taani-ok ok sorry

Gun3-arre chal na itna kya bhao kha rahe hai

Gun 4-chal na aaj raat maze karenge

With shareyam

Reyam-yeh zayda bol raha hai

Sh-shhh chup raho acting hai

Back with taani

Gun 1-arre chal na chamiya

With shareyam

Sh-eww chamiya is so lower middle class

Reyam looked at her in disbelief n slap their head

Sw-sh wo gunde hai

Rey-aur gundo ka koi class nai hota

Sh-phir bhi ache gunde nai la sakte the tum

rey-sorry madam agli baar gunde tum select karna ok!!!!

Back with taani

Gun2-arre chal na….holds taani's hand

Sh-rey ab jao n plz yaad rakhna k yeh k nakli fight hai ok

Rey-ha mujhe yaad hai…he was about to go when they saw Vicky moving towards the gundas angrily

Sw-abbe jaldi ja warna yeh unhe maar dalega

Rey-ha ha…again rey was about to when….vicky reaches to gundas n he was about punch but someone kick the gunda who was holding taani…

All looked back n saw armaan full in anger (who was coming out n heard everything)

As soon as armaan kicked him….shareyam slap their head

Sw-bhai kaha se aa gaye

Rey-ab meri image ka kya hoga

Sh-arre tum dono chup raha aur chalo un gundo ko bachana hai

Here armaan n vicky were beating the hell out of those guys…

Vicky pulled one of them from collar n said-saale meri behan ko tang karega tu…he punched him again n again

Taani-vicky chod usse….armaan bhaiya jane dejiyeh unhe

Shareyam came running

Sw(holding armaan)-bhaiya chodo usse bohot ho gaya

Rey(holding Vicky)-vicky chod usse bas kar maar dalega kya!!!

Vic to sw-bhai aapko pata nai hai isne bacha ko kya kaha…isske toh aaj jaan le longa mai(again going to the guy but neha stops him)

Sw-mujhe pata hai(all looked at him in shock)….i mean maine sunna k inhone kya kaha

Ar-toh phir tu itna shaant kaise hai

Vic-ha bhai atleast ek zor ka thappar toh maaro

Sw looked at the guy Vicky was holding n then at her brothers

Ar n vic-maar na!!!

Sw goes to the guy n signals him sorry…n close his eyes n slap him very hard that the guy fall on ground n blood came out from hid lips

Shaani mouth was like "o"

Rey signal them to run n all ran away

Ar-kaise kaise log aajate hai collage k bahar…..angel tu theek hai na

Vic-bacha tu mere saath rheh ab..hold her hand…dekhta ho kiske dum hai tujhe tang karne k…vicky took taani n neha with him taani turns back n give a sorry look to shareyam…ar also went inside

Now only shareyam were left….reyam glared at sh who ran as fast as she could inside collage because it was her foolish plan

AFTER CLASSES IN CANTEEN

As taarey n swaron were free they were sitting in canteen

Rey-yeh idea toh flop ho gaya

Sw-ab kya kare

After sometime sh eyes blink with glow n she said-mere pass ek idea hai

Reyam- no way tum rhehne do

Rey-abhi tak toh wo gunde he pite the tere idea execute kiya toh kahi mai he na pit jao

Sh sit pouting like a child n sw goes lost in her..

Rey saw this n taps on sw head n said-idea sooch idea

Taani-mere pass ek idea hai

Sw-tu bhi rhehne de plz

Taani-kyu…kyu rehne do phele wala idea mera nai tha

Rey-ha par approve toh aap he ne kiya tha na madam

Sw-exactly

Taani-nai atleast mera idea toh sun lo

Reyam-fine batao

Taani-dekho hum na aisa karte hai k hum sab stairs pe honge n rey mujhe dakka denge par jaise he mai girne wale hongi rey mujhe bacha lenge…Vicky k samne rey mujhe bachange toh Vicky inpress ho jayega…what's say…kaisa idea hai

Sh-awesome idea taani….taani-thanks bhabhi

Reyam looked at each other completely shocked

Taani-oh my god mera idea itna acha tha k aap dono shock ho gaye…bhai rey kuch toh bolo

Rey-I m telling juice mai kuch garbar tha

Sw-par juice toh humne smell kiya tha na

Rey-toh phir yeh dono achanak se paagal kaise ho gae

Taani-aapas mai kya baat kar rahe ho batao na idea kaisa tha…..waise(stands up) mujhe lagta hai humme isse execute karna chahiyeh

Sh(also stands up)-ha mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai

Reyam-no way…(makes them sit back)

Sw-tum dono rhene do hum soach lenge

Rey exactly imitating taani "stairs se gira do"

Taani-par prob kya hai

Rey-agar Vicky ne dekh liya na k maine tumhe dakka diya hai toh wo mujhe un stairs se gira dega!!!

Sw-guys kuch soocho kya karna hai

Voice-kis bare mai

All turn n found ar n ridz

Ar(sits with them)-so kya sooch rahe ho

All-nothing

Ridz-bata do shayad hum help kar pae

Taarey n swaron saw each other n think ha yeh sahi hai armaan sir/bhai hamare help kar sakte hai

Taani-superman hum sooch rahe hai k Vicky ko kaise batae

Ridz-toh kuch idea socha

Reyam looked at taani n sh

Rey-ha aaj subah he ek idea flop hua hai

Ar-konsa idea

Sw-gunde wala

Ar looked them with wide eyes-wo gunde nakli the!!! God kiska idea tha yeh n kisne approve kiya

Reyam looked at shaani

Ar-oh great y I m not surprised….ladkiya hoti he aise hai

Ridz-execuse me I think the idea was fab

Ar-ha isiliye flop ho gaya hai na

Ridz-toh garbar toh kisi bhi idea mai ho sakti hai

Ar-oh plz agar idea he itna stupid hai toh garbar toh hogi he

Sw-bhai bhabhi ab aap dono jagra nai karo…aur yeh batao k ab hum kare kya

Ar-soocho kuch

All started thinking….

Sw(getting frustrated because no idea was clicking so he said)-arre I m telling u na directly bol dete hai

Rey-abbe tu chup kar na kyu pitwana chahata hai mujhe

Ar-guys I have an idea

All-kya

Ar-dekho phele toh hume yeh pata karna hoga k Vicky ko kaisa ladka chahiyeh taani k liye tabhi toh hum usse impress kar paege

Rey starts laughing n all look at him like whats so funny

Rey-sir Vicky k nazar mai taani k liye koi bhi perfect nai hai

Ridz-he has a point

Ar-par kuch toh hoga…atleast Vicky ne socha toh hoga k usse taani k liye kaisa ladka chahiyeh

All-hmmm

Ar-ek kam karte hai sh aur rey tum dono aaj ghar pe dinner k liye aao wahi Vicky se pooch lenge k usse kaisa ladka chahiyeh ok

Rey(happily)-ok done

Ar smile n sw glare at him-sirf dinner k liye bulaya hai itna kush mat ho

Rey-ha toh mai dinner k liye he kush ho raha ho

CLASS

All were attending classess n were sitting in a couple except viha n taarey…vicky made taani sit with him because of morning incident he can't take more risk…..n neha was sitting with rey as no sit was empty

Rey can't help it he was continuously looking at taani n where taani got a little time ..she use to look at him n both smile

Neha saw this n think-neha thinking y rey is looking at taani n smiling n taani also smiling…kahi in dono k beach mai kuch hai toh na….aur agar hai toh babu kaise react karega…

Just then peon come n said-GS,AGS,CS,ACS ko vp sir ne bulaya hai

Taarey n swaron left to meet vp sir

Meanwhile in class

Aashi was making notes when her pen falls down n got broken…she picks it up n make a cute pout n said-ab mai kaise types likonge

Bharat-arre sad kaiko ho rele hai yeh le mera pen se likh le

Aashi smile n both look at each other..

Here rimar…..rinni was making a sad n cute face as she is not able to understand what teacher is saying

Rinni-mai ho he stupid…kuch samjh mai nai aa raha k yeh teacher kya padha raha hai

Amar-linni tumtari talti nai it leacher to he talne nai tata(rinni tumhare galti nai hai is teacher ko he padhane nai aata)

Rinni-so sweet amar…both started looking at each other

Simmi-nil look at rinni n amar…they look so cute together na

Nil-not more than u my jaan

Simmi blushes n both look at each other

Here Vicky saw neha thinking…he slowly goes n sit beside her

Vicky-kagu tum mere bare mai soach rahe ho na(dreamingly)

Neha(still thinking about taarey n without realizing said)-nai rey k bare mai

Vicky eyes goes wide-kyu uske bare mai kyu sooch rahe ho

Neha(realizes)-babu wo…wo…neha thinking rey is a good gs …talented he is haina

Vicky(smiles remembering his friend he was actually very talented)-ka kahu he is talented

Neha-par my babu is best

Vicky smiles n both looked at each other

Now teacher turn n saw all couple looking at each other

Teacher(shouts)-kya ho raha hai yeh!!! Class hai ya park hai!!! Kabhi padh bhi liya karo!!!!

Just then bell rings n all-ooo

All went to canteen waiting 4 taarey n swaron

Meanwhile in vp office

Vp-ok soo aap logo ko abhi ek hotel k manager k pass jana hoga aur collage k admistrative body k liye meeting fix karne hogi

Rey thinks-agar bas mai aur taani jae toh mai taani k saath thora time bhi spend kar sakta ho…he smiles n sw saw him n he thinks-yeh itna kyu smile kar raha hai chal kya raha hai iske dimaag mai

Rey to sir-sir mai aur taani…I mean GS uar AGS yeh kaam kar lenge…CS aur ACS k zarorat nai hai..aur agar hum sab chale jaenge toh collage mai kon rahega

Sw glared at him n shaani looked at fully confused

Sw think-acha toh yeh baat hai!!! Saale mai tere best friend ho itna janta ho tujhe …tu taani k saath time spend karna chahata hai na ruk batata ho tujhe

sw-nai sir hum sab chale jaege

shaani looked at them like-yeh ho kya raha hai

rey-no sir bas GS n AGS

sw-nai sir hum sab

vp-execuse I m gonna decide k kon jar aha hai so mr.GS tum sab ja rahe ho aur wo bhi abhi

all-ok sir

they come out n goes to canteen to tell them that they going

rey-guys hum bahar ja rahe hai collage k kaam se

vic-hum matlab

rey-hum matlab mai aur taani aur…

vic(cutting him)-tu kyu jaega bacha k saath

rey rooled his eyes n looks at sw to help….sw indicates him I m der don't worry

sw-vic taani AGS hai na toh usse jana parega n mai aur sh bhi ja rahe hai

vic-oh ok

all left in rey car to the hotel

rey-guys tum log chalo mai car park kar k aata ho

trio-ok

swaron taani step out of car n move towards manager's cabin when taani realize

taain-oh shit mera phone toh car mai he rheh gaya….bhai bhabhi aap dono jao mai apna cell le kar aate ho

swaron-ok

taani runs to the parking area….rey come out from car n saw taani running to him

rey-kya hua

taan-mera phone rheh gaya….she starts searching making a cute n adorable face when she can't find it

rey looked at her she was so simple n innocent girl….she was perfect…they were so opposite to each other but as they say opposite attrack each other…rey adore his gf…he smiles he wanted to get marry to her n have a daughter exactly like her….

Here taani finally found her phone n jumps in joy

Taai-yipee mil gaya

Rey smile n looked at her….taani-rey aap aise kyu dekh rahe ho

Rey come close to her n taani step back but hit his car n rey block her

Rey coming close-tum bohot bohot bohot beautiful ho

Taani blushed-rey hum parking mai hai yeh kya kar rahe hai aap

Rey in husky voice-toh aisa kisne kaha hai k parking mai koi romance nai kar sakta

Taani blushed…rey kiss her cheeks n taani smiles…both were kissing each other when rey's phone rings n it was vp sir…he picks up

Rey-yes sir…hum pooch gaye bas andar he jane wale hai

Vp-ok rey tumhe aur sw ko all the best

Rey(felt weird)-thanku sir…they hang up

Taani-kya hua

Rey-ek simple se meeting to fix karne ja rahe hai isme sir n mujhe aur sw ko all the best kyu kaha

Taani-chodiyehna hoga kuch

Meanwhile with swaron

Sw knock door n voice came come in….he open door n said to sh

Sw-after you

Sh(smiles)..they went inside but the manager was facing other side

Sh-excuse me(the guy didn't response)

Sh-excuse me sir(no reaponse)

Sh looked at sw…sw(loudly)-excuse me

Sh-dheere sw

The guy turns n saw swaron n got lost in…(u will know soon )

Man-yes young man

Sw-ammm sir hum st.loius collage se hai..wo meeting fix karne aae hai

Man(stands n walk towards swaron)oh yeh I see…I must say(moves towards swaron…sw thinking he is coming close to sh so he steps forward)

Man-I must say u r a very cute guy

Swaron eyes goes wide n both look each other

Sh(slowly)-yeh toh gay hai

Man-so what's ur name hottie..(sw was about to ans when sh steps forward n said)

Sh-sharon rai prakash the CS of collage

Just then taarey enter..manager saw rey n goes flat on his looks n looks at him dreamingly

Taarey were confused…rey thought he is looking at taani

Man-hey how r u sexy boy

Swaron giggles n taarey goes in shock n taani look at the manager in jealousy

Taani-excuse me???

Man-yes lady

Taani-I guess we are here for meeting so lets start

Man(looking at reyam)-I m dying to start…anything u want

Shaani looks at him in anger n reyam hide behind shaani

Now all start meeting

Man-so mr. reyansh singhania…oh my god what a manly name

Rey starts coughing badly

Man(touch his back)-r u ok

Rey-I m fine thanku

Man-so where was I…oh ya see I have to visit ur collage for formalities ok

All-ok sir

Man(giving his personal card to reyam)-n this is my card call me anytime..wink at reyam

He was about to gave but shaani snatch it

Rey-see u later sir

Man(dreamingly)-when

Shaani-in collage for the "official work"..they pull reyam with then n move out

Reyam was laughing like hell…what just happen …kya aadmi tha yr

Shaani was jealous

Sh to taani-taani yeh manager collage bhi aane wala hume rey aur sw ko bacha k rakhna hoga

Taani-ha bhabhi hum unke saath he rhenge

They move forward but sh felt something strange…as if someone is following them she looks back but no one was there

Sw-chalo sh kya hua

Sh-mujhe laga k kuch…anyway leave it let's go

They left n a guy came out holding a camera n calls someone

Guy-ha mai unka peecha kar raha ho…kaam ho jaega

Uh finally done with chapter 31-do like it plz n comment big one plzzz

Precap-dinner at taavicyam house…some strange things happen…..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i've written as i was reading so i don't miss anything n so u can see my reactions 😆

i loved the reyam scenes at the start
hahah sharon's line "ache gunde nai la sakte the tum" was hilarious
OMG yeh armaan kahan se aa gaya??? yeh log toh pakka marne wale hai
awww i love Vicky's protective side n his love for taani!! i wish i had a brother like that
hehe poor sharon's plan completley flopped 🤣
ab yeh naya plan bhi flop hoga na aur reyam phir se juice pe gaye hai 😛
awww bharat-aashi scene was so cute, n so was rimar n nimmi scenes
VIHA R SO DAMN ADORABLE!!! i love that u incorporated them into ur story as well as the other couples
😆 swayam in protective bhai mode again!! i love this side of him
🤣 vp sir comes and finds taarey hahahah
😲... manager is gay... "what's your name hottie"... he likes swayam... 🤣🤣
omg he likes rey too... n jealous shaani 🤣 tere pas yeh idea kaise aaya??
OMG OMG OMG!!! Vicky hired that guy to spy on taarey na???

wow another amazing update yaar!! i seriously love ur FF so much 😊 it has all the elements of an amazing story n ur writing is just awesome!! seriously how do u come up with such amazing idea?? please do update soon n make sure to tell me first ok 😉

Edited by u-me-aur-D3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m 2nd hehe yipe...hehe
nice update dear looked it yaar it was supebr yaar i m so so so hapy to read the update it was really awesome n nice n throughly enjpoyed it..thanks for pm do update soon...
Edited by lovelypriya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update!!! Out of d world!!! Aaj ho kya raha hai itne superb update padhne mil rage hai subha se!!? Thus was a totally hilarious update!!! 🤣 I was laughing like an idiot!!! 😆😆😆 Sharon ko gunde hi ls lag rahe the! Lol! N bichare gunde asli mein pit gaye ! Pura plan flop!! N then later taanis plan was so silly! N then d guys talking abt d juice!! N arman n ridhima fight was cute!!!! N then all d couples were also damn cute!! N neha telling Vicky that she is thinking abt Rey!!! Lol!😆 N then bichare reyam kidhar gay k saath phas gaye!! N shaani getting jealous of gay!!! 🤣 n tr romance in parking was awesome!!! 😳 but whose following them??? Waiting to know!! Update soon n thnx for d pm...😊😊
Edited by riachandnani - 12 years ago
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Awesome update m still laughing...
manger scene was hillarious
And whos the guy.
Interedting precap update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow di,...it was just awsm...lovd it...🤣🤣

sabse pehle swayam ki dhamki was hahhaha...
"ek aur baar saala bola na toh Vicky ko sab sach bata donga" 🤣

then taani and gunda's talk was ..🤣...9 se 12 ka matlab batao koi taani ko..hahahahha...
reyam thinking "kuch jyada ho gaya " and then sharon thinking"koi class nahi h gundo ka" hahahah...
gundo ka class bhi hota h kya...😆😆...ab to agli baar sharon hi gunde select karegi...😆


OMG...maine socha tha vicky band bajayega unki but armaan bhi aa gaya...bechare gunde...thank god reyam ne bacha liya ...swayam saying sory to gunda's ...hahaha..

haaye vicky is so protective...nyc...but bechare rey ki band baja di..saara plan flop.


reyam blaming shaani was 😡😡 ...vaise idea bura nahi tha yaar..😆😆...then taani's idea was 🤣
reyam thinking ki juice mein kuch tha again was 🤣
armaan and ridhima's fight was nice...

haaye classroom scne was amazing...☺️☺️...rimar,bhashi,viha and nimmi...love them...thanks for adding their scenes 😊😊

reyam argument in VP sir's cabin was 🤣
vicky asking why taani will go with rey was nyc...possesive bhai jaag jata h baar baar.

taarey parking lot scene was ☺️☺️ so cuteee,...lovd it


& at last but not the least...the ending scene...🤣🤣 bechare reyam...hahahahahhahaha..🤣
jealous and protective shaani was superb. 😃🤣

wow what an update di...👏👏...lovd it...❤️all the tym i was like 🤣

amzing wrk...plz update next soon and PM me...i m still laughing holding my stomach 🤣

last mein kya jhatka diya...kaun follow kar raha h unhe...😲😕😕

plz update soon...wanna knw abt that prsn and waiting for dinner part...that gonna be damn funny...plz update soon...
Edited by raveena1 - 12 years ago
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Awesome update dear...
Its really so funny...🤣🤣
I was laughing for the whole update and still also laughing...🤣
ANd that manager thing... OMG it was so funny...🤣
I want to know who was the person following them...😕
Do update soon and PM me

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