FF - Blackmailed Bride, PG 1, all parts

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi folks,

I am starting a new ff, which is a continuation of Adhura Zindagi.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=484491&T PN=1

Cast: The usual suspects from KS (Jai, Bani, Rano, Adi, Dadi, Maasi, Nattu, Pushkar, Tarun, Lakshmi, Ranveer, Raashi

Jigs & Pia (the last two in small doses)

+ Introducing

Sameer Bhavsar: A self-made American Software Billionaire who falls promptly in love with Rano (even when he was engaged to Bani) at First sight and marries her (She is divorced from loser Sahil)😉

Kalpana Singhania: Maasi of Bani and Rano, married to Adi Bali in unusual circumstances. 😆 (Adi Bhi Na!!)

Introduction:
Post Leap: 4 years later,

Jai and Bani have two adorable children (JK, Krissy)😃😃😃

Bani meets Jai again in Goa,
All misconceptions about Pia, ONS cleared.👏👏(Yeahh!!)

Jai insists on marrying Bani again, the correct way (After the first wedding fiasco, he wants to do right by her, with pomp and tradition)😃😃😃

Pia goes away with Pushkar, divorces him, becomes an Air Hostess and is serving food to lecherous and nasty coach class passengers between India and Singapore 😆😆😆

Story starts with Suhag Raat tomorrow

Hope you will like this FF - Characters and personalities obviously borrowed from KS -

Circumstances, humor, style is mine, if it even resembles other writers', it's purely coincidence and nothing but coincidence. If it does resemble, think of it as great minds think alike.😉😉😉

Edited to have all links to the chapters on page 1:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=503451&T PN=2

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Enjoy!! (Hope I didn't miss any parts!!)

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pooja.walia thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I'm glad u're starting a new one...I look forward to it...
Usual suspects 😆

Now can we have the first part sooooooon

Poo

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja.walia

I'm glad u're starting a new one...I look forward to it...
Usual suspects 😆

Now can we have the first part sooooooon

Poo



Thanks Poo,

I was working on it, but hubby wants me to come and sleep now, have to work tomorrow (As it is my peers are complaining I am getting overpaid
🤢)

So you will probably see an update around this time tomorrow.

-- SR

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Posted: 18 years ago
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sheena,
i am very happy that u r starting a new ff and that too in continuation of adhuri zindagi that will be great. please update soon.

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey
am readin Adhura zindagi at the mo.. got couple of pages left i think.. WOW another FF from u.. i love ur style of writin it just flows..

Wonderful job keepin us KSians entertained wen the actual serial isnt 👏

Henna x
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This looks great! I'm sure that I'll enjoy reading this one very much! I really like the sound of Pia being an air hostess having to serve coach class passengers! 😆 I hope there will be plenty written about Pia's experiences at her new job!

Good to hear about Jai and Bani having 2 little kids! Hopefully Ranvir and Raashi will follow in their footstes also! 😃

God bless.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Whoohoo!!..........another FF!!

And since it's a continuation, how can I not read it?!😉

In a rush right now so I've bookmarked it and comments to the first part will come soon!!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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well congrats for writing another fanfic
well really looking forward since all misconceptions r cleared update it soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i like the concept, your character sketches are really good now i cant wait for update!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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OK, the blackmail part doesn't come in until the 3rd chapter...

Exerpts from Adhura Zindagi

He slowly lifted her ghungat and desire burning in his eyes, Bani's eyes dropped shyly, he looked so handsome, she wanted to throw herself into his arms and hide her face in his chest. He removed her jewelery one at a time, each ornament he removed, he replaced it with a burning kiss. By the time, he was finished, she thought that she would go up in flames. She was trembling violently as he turned her slowly and started untying the doris on her blouse with his teeth. Each dori he removed, he stamped the spot with a kiss until he finally reached the small of her back.

PART 1A - Suhag Raat

The stereo was playing the song from Kabhie Kabhie..

Kabhi Kabhi Mere Dil Mein Khayal Ata Hai
Kabhi Kabhi Mere Dil Mein Khayal Ata Hai

ke jaise tujh ko banaya gaya hai mere liye
ke jaise tujh ko banaya gaya hai mere liye

tu ab se pehle sitaro mei bas rahi the kahi
tu ab se pehle sitaro mei bas rahi the kahi

tujhe zamee pe bulaya gaya hai mere liye
tujhe zamee pe bulaya gaya hai mere liye

Kabhi Kabhi Mere Dil Mei Khayal Ata Hai
ke ye badan ye nigahein meri amanat hai
ke ye badan ye nigahein meri amanat hai
ye gasuo ki ghani chao hai meri khatir
ye hoth aur ye bahe meri amanat hai
ye hoth aur ye bahe meri amanat hai

Kabhi Kabhi Mere Dil Mei khayal Ata Hai
ke jaise bajhti hai shehnaya se raho mein
ke jaise bajhti hai shehnaya se raho mein

Suhag raat hai ghunghat utha raha hu mein
Suhag raat hai ghunghat utha raha hu mein
Simat rahi hai tu sharma ke apni baho mein
Simat rahi hai tu sharma ke apni baho mein

Kabhi Kabhi Mere Dil Mei Khayal Ata Hai
ke jaise tuu mujhe chahe ge umrr bhar yuhi
uthe ge meri taraf pyaar ki nazar yuhi

Mein janta hu ke tu ghair hai magar yuhi
Mein janta hu ke tu ghari hai magar yuhi

KABHI KABHI MERE DIL MEIN KHAYAL ATA HAI
KABHI KABHI MERE DIL MEIN KHAYAL ATA HAI

Bani stared at the honey jar in her hands for interminable moments, then she slowly raised her eyes to sneak a look at him, what she saw there in his face, made her quickly drop her lids, the blush in her cheeks spreading to her ears and neck speedily.

The contrariness of her behavior was enchanting; first she was teasing him and driving him crazy, then she was acting like a teenager, shy and totally unlike a mother of two three year olds.

He slowly removed the ghunghat and dropped it on the floor and tilted her chin upwards until her eyes lifted to look at him, desire, passion, love clashed and held them captive, they stared at each other as if they wanted to imprint each other in their mind.

He slowly removed the maang tikka from her forehead, smoothed the hair that was messed up when he removed the ornament, then he unbraided her hair, his fingers winding in the long curtain of luscious silk. He tugged it gently until her face was raised to his, her lips parting in an oh. He bent and closed his mouth over her quivering one, just their sighs breaking the silence in the room. She was bare now of all her jewelry, the ghunghat, (OK, I am not describing anymore, although I could, in great detail!!) and the last gulp of air in her lungs.

He reluctantly let her go so that she could breathe. Then he dipped his fingers in the honey jar and traced a trail on her body, followed by his mouth, then his lips taking liberties to roam all over her body, starting with her collarbone, her rounded shoulders, her pale b*****s, her ribcage, her midriff until she grabbed his hair and brought his mouth back up to her lips.

They didn't get much sleep, the insatiable need for each other making them reach each other throughout the long night.

Next parts - 1B - Rano and Sameer
1C - Adi and Kalpana

Edited by Sheena_Row - 18 years ago

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