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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey guys, after passing all the hurdles and obstacles I am here with the update. I hope you guys enjoy. Do give LONG COMMENTS. 😆

Part 16

It's been an hour since Taani found Rey they were looking at each other with lots of emotions like love, pain, passion, happiness and sorrow. They were in their own world until one of the guys came and said "eat this. I don't have time a lot so eat fast." Saying this he extends his hands to feed Rey food but Rey moved his face sideways and said "let me go. I want to go home." "Well you are not going anywhere eat it or leave it. If boss wouldn't have stopped me you would have been dead by now. Aur haan bin pani ki machli (fish) ki tarah tarap mat, koi faida nahi hoga" guy 2 says that from a distance. "Mere haath khol phir batata hoon kon bin pani ki machli ki tarah tarapta hai" Rey replies him with full confidence. The guy 2 listening to Rey stands up and walks towards Rey with full on anger. The guy 2 who brought food stops him and says "no he is just challenging you so he can get away from here. Don't do anything stupid." "Haa ja aur pehn lay churiyaan, mard ka bacha hai toh haath khol mere phir batata hoon" Rey says pushing Guy 2 to be stupid and open him due to anger. Guy 2 pushes Guy 1 back and walks towards Rey and picks a big stick and hits him with it.

He wanted to scream in pain but he didn't instead he looked at Taani showing her that he is fine. Taani tightens her fist she so wanted to go kill that man but she couldn't put him in more danger or pain. Guy 2 hits him again and she closes her eyes, tears were rolling down her eyes. "har ek ansu ki kimat tum sab ko chukkani paray gi" Rey said in full on tashan and Taani opens her eyes and smiles through her tears. "Chal yeh toh pagal hai hum kha kar so jate hain. Isse bhooka rehnay do" guy 1 says and they all go eat and goes to sleep.

What do heroines do at this kind of situation in movies? How do they save their heros? Hmm should I go beat them all while they're sleeping? No meanwhile u will be beating one others will wake up and you will get in trouble. Hmmm think Taani! Think! Idea! Thinking this Taani stands up all of a sudden. Seeing rey's afraid and shocked expression, Taani sits back assuring him that she will not do anything stupid. Time flies and everyone was now in deep sleep, Taani slowly slowly stands up and goes to Rey while Rey was still thinking and didn't realize that Taani was here beside him. He suddenly feels someone touching his hairs; he lifts up his head and sees a teary Taani in front of him. He instantly looks at those guys and takes a breath of relief seeing them all asleep. Taani quickly opens his hands and "Aaah" Taani screams in pain when guy 3 holds her by her hairs. Rey quickly kicks and holds Taani's hand and bring her behind him fully covering her from all the guys who were now all up and ready to beat Rey up.

He walks towards them leaving Taani behind. Guy 1 comes first and Rey beats him up fully. Seeing his condition others take steps backward except guy 2. He walks up to him and kicks Rey at his injured place. He screams in pain and falls on ground taking the chance guy 2 again kicks him this time directly on his face. Rey falls sideways while blood comes out of his mouth almost faints due to the immense pain. "REEEYYY" Taani screams and runs towards him but before she could reach him guy 2 holds her and brings close to him. Taani feels disgusted and struggles under his hold but he was too strong for her. They were inches apart, Taani shuts her eyes not able to take his closeness but then suddenly Taani could feel him going away from her. She opens her eyes and sees Rey holding him with his hairs she smiles through her tears. And then Rey kicks him same way he did until he breathes his last. Rey beats guy 3 and pushes him towards the bonfire and he dies there burning. He punches guy 4 on his face and he falls and hits his head on the tree.

Ignoring all his injuries and pains, Rey kicked the last one, at least he thought he was the last one, and he fell on the stony ground and he was not able to stand up again. Rey turned and saw the real last one holding a loaded gun pointing towards him. There was no way Rey could do anything as he was at a little distance and was hurt too badly. He looked at him straight in his eyes as he was looking in the eyes of death. He wanted to do something not for himself but for his love but he knew there is no way out. And the next second that guy presses the trigger and THAD a sound came before he could press his trigger completely and in no second he fell on ground. Rey's eyes popped out from their sockets, his mouth went wide open not because of what was about to happen but due to what really happened and buy who. He saw Taani holding a big thick wood stick in her hand, fuming in anger but yet scared looking at the guy who she hit may be first time in her entire life of course apart from slapping Rey. She was standing like she won a huge battle or killed her biggest enemy in the world just like Jhansi ki Rani.

Firstly Rey was shocked but then he burst out laughing leaving a confused and angry Taani standing. "Rey ap has rahay ho woh b mujh par" saying this Taani walks towards Rey and seeing Taani's stick Rey steps back and falls on ground bringing his both hands together. Taani stops seeing him like this and he starts his nautanki "nahi shama kar di jiye Jhansi ki Rani. Humein mat mariye, humari biwi hai. Us ka kiya hoga? Aur humare bachay [Taani opens her mouth in an O shape and Rey corrects himself realizing what he said] matlab honay walay bacho ka kiya hoga?" listening to this Taani blushes and leaves the stick, Rey stands up and she runs and hugs him as much tightly as possible. Rey was feeling pain but he ignored it as he was craving for her touch and her hug. They stayed like that for a long time then Rey comes to his sense and breaks the hug still holding Taani's hand and says "we have to leave as its not save here lets go." Taani and Rey walked miles holding each other's hands. Even in the middle of night and in Jungle not knowing there way out, they still felt save and complete. Seeing Rey's exhausted face and body Taani says "Rey lets sit for a while [seeing Rey about to argue she continues quickly] I am hungry, I am walking since afternoon and want to sleep in your arms peacefully." She completes her sentence and makes the cutest pout ever and Rey smiles at her nautanki and they both sit on a safest place possible in that Jungle. Taani takes out the food and water she had and they eat and then Taani dresses his wounds and they sleep in each other's arms feeling as they were in heaven.

*Part 16 Ends*

I hope this update didn't make you guys cry a lot and sorry if there are mistakes not feeling good so didn't proof read like I always do

Okay I wanted to tell you guys that I was not able to update today as well but pushed myself and wrote the update and I did this just for all my lovely readers who comment regularly and that too long ones.

Thank you all for all the support and just a warning I might get late in my future updates as have a Dare to complete, lots of pending FFs to read and then some personal stuff. But don't stop supporting me and liking my updates and FFs and keep giving long comments.

I hope you all will understand *fingers crossed*

Love you all

TaSha


NO PMS ARE SEND AS OF NOW CANT DO IT NOW JUST WANTED TO UPDATE SO YOU GUYS DON'T GET MAD AT ME. PLEASE PRAY FOR MY STUPID BACK PAIN

Edited by --Ta_Sha-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yayy! me saw it pehle...hehe...
resd! =)

unres...

omg! it was soo soo amazingg!!
i lovedd it soo much...
it had amazingg moments...
esp the part when rey was hit, and he looked at taani to assure her he was fine and then the dialogue...
gosh! i really loved that part...
baaki was soo intense... =(
poor rey...but thank god he is fine...
and haww! taani...!! way to go girl! hehehe =)
and rey ki nautanqi...i culdnt stop laughing...
"bacho" part was hilarious...
and den the sweet scene, when taani asked rey to sit back...
it was soo soo sweet... <3
in short...
jus lovedd it ree...!
it was amazingg meri anjaan dost! hahaha...
lookin forward to the next part... =)
Edited by Mohit_monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ok 1st really sorry i know i m very late bt was nt well really pakka sorry plz
cuming 2 d update
hayee mai marjawan it was mashallah too gud yr n taani jhasi ki rani hehehe n our rey is soo handsome n strong god isiliye toh sab marte hai n taani was so brave must say n yr taani to serious mai jhasi ki rani mikli hehehe n precapp woww tooo ossam
nw cuming 2 promo
promo was too good yr i vl wait 4 it plz update soon plzz plzz plzz
n again sorry

Edited by shanya8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesome update...
was scared when guy stood infront of Rey hoding gun...
But then felt relief...
So I loved it...
Get well soon dear...
And do pm me when u'll update next😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update dear
muah finally u updated
love u a lot
i mean how could u bring laughter in mid of a fight man awesome👏
i m in love with ur ff
love u lots muah😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tasha fab update 👍🏼 lol jhansi ki rani wala dualogue 😆 n u perfectly described the intense love btwn taarey ..i loved it so much 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res 😆
Btw just saw what you wrote in the bold.. u having back pain
Haye i know how horrible it feels ..
Get well soon tasha
Mera aashirwaad aapke saath hai
Tathastu 😆
unres 😳
btw i am sorry agar pichli waale comment se bura laga to 😭
but i got so invovled in the sorry 😆😆
coming to this update ..
it was superb dear
i was smiling and laughing while reading the whole update

"Mere haath khol phir batata hoon kon bin pani ki machli ki tarah tarapta hai" 🤣 🤣🤣

hahahahha !! .. that was awesome ! .. xD

"What do heroines do at this kind of situation in movies? How do they save their heros? Hmm should I go beat them all while they're sleeping? No meanwhile u will be beating one others will wake up and you will get in trouble. Hmmm think Taani! Think! Idea! "

LOL ... filmy thinking 🤣🤣 🤣...

"Rey's eyes popped out from their sockets, his mouth went wide open not because of what was about to happen but due to what really happened and buy who. He saw Taani holding a big thick wood stick in her hand, fuming in anger but yet scared looking at the guy who she hit may be first time in her entire life of course apart from slapping Rey. She was standing like she won a huge battle or killed her biggest enemy in the world just like Jhansi ki Rani."
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
jhansi ki raani .. 😆
This was out was the world 😆

"Firstly Rey was shocked but then he burst out laughing leaving a confused and angry Taani standing. "Rey ap has rahay ho woh b mujh par" saying this Taani walks towards Rey and seeing Taani's stick Rey steps back and falls on ground bringing his both hands together. Taani stops seeing him like this and he starts his nautanki "nahi shama kar di jiye Jhansi ki Rani. Humein mat mariye, humari biwi hai. Us ka kiya hoga? Aur humare bachay [Taani opens her mouth in an O shape and Rey corrects himself realizing what he said] matlab honay walay bacho ka kiya hoga?" listening to this Taani blushes "
aaww!! 😳

awesome tasha 👏👏👏

this was a perfect update ...

loved it to the core ..😳😳😳

thank you soo much for such an awesome update 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

and we can wait for updates ... no worries ... update when you are free ..😳😳😳










Edited by arpita_wadhwa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all, I am really very angry at you...
No..Not for sending PMs...
Why dont you take care of your health???
Don't tell that you do...
Because, if you would..Then what is this back pain all about???
Take care of yourself, TaSha...
Firstly give importance to your health and then think about other things..OK???
Get well soon, dear..

Coming to the update...Yay!!!!
Me jumping, dancing and doing what not in happiness...
Huh!! Finally...I am super duper happy...
Thank you so so much for giving this wonderful update...
It made me cry, laugh and gave a sense of fear in me...
It had all in it..
So, again a perfect chapter from your side...

Loved how TaaRey were lost in each other..

And then the confidence in Rey..

"Mere haath khol phir batata hoon kon bin pani ki machli ki tarah tarapta hai"
😆😆
Loved how Rey used his wits to instigate those guys...
The part where that guy hits Rey was so painful..
Rey was bearing so much pain but still he was reassuring his love that he is fine...
God!! What is this man made up of...His strength is Taani...
And Taani..How vulnerable she might have felt on seeing her love being hit...

Then came the line:
"har ek ansu ki kimat tum sab ko chukkani paray gi"

You know what, I was reading so seriously and then all of a sudden I read the first 5 words and the dialogue which came to my mind was

"Ek ansu ki kimat tum kya jano ramesh babu"
😆😆
I don't know why this dialogue came in my mind and it cracked me up...
Then again to bring up my seriousness, I read from the start..
That's how much I love this story...
I always read it full concentration..
And mostly I read each update 3-4 times...
Ok Ok back to the update...

Again Taani's thoughts about what would the heroines do in such situations...
That was so funny...
Taani is so innocent..Poor Darling...

I so so loved the action part..
Again like the previous action part, you nailed it...
Loved that part..Especially the way he was protecting his love...

Loved how Taani could not even bear that cheapo's closeness...
Even I felt so disgusted..
Loved how Rey saved her and beat everyone to death...

God!! The part where the last guy had pointed the revolver at Rey...
My heartbeats actually stopped at that point..
But the next second, when Taani hit him..
Haaha!!! That came as a shock to me too..
Poor Rey!! He was so shocked to see that..

Loved these lines...

"He saw Taani holding a big thick wood stick in her hand, fuming in anger but yet scared looking at the guy who she hit may be first time in her entire life of course apart from slapping Rey. She was standing like she won a huge battle or killed her biggest enemy in the world just like Jhansi ki Rani."
😆😆
This part was so hilarious...
And then Rey's nautanki...
That was so adorable and cute along with Taani's blush thinking about their would be children...
Loved loved their hug...
So beautiful...
Can't describe how I felt reading that part..
And then the way Taani took care of him..
And then they slept in each other's embrace...
Feeling complete...
Loved the last few lines too..

Great work done. dear...
Now take care of your health...
It's Ok.. We understand..
And as I said before..
Your health comes first...
Keep smiling..



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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres
1st of all really
Glittering Heart And Sorry Graphic 4 unresing my comment so late...was stuck with some prblems...
nw coming on 2 the update i dont knw wht 2 say!!!!!! should i say its an action full update or emotional or hilarious!!!!!! actualy its a combo yar...
rey ne kya dialogues mare yar...😆😆😆 it was lyk mai kisi hindi movie ki would b fighting scene visualize kar rahi hu...nd den meri heroine taani !!!!!!!
What do heroines do at this kind of situation in movies? How do they save their heros? Hmm should I go beat them all while they're sleeping? No meanwhile u will be beating one others will wake up and you will get in trouble. Hmmm think Taani! Think! Idea!...🤣🤣🤣 only she can think lyk dis yar in dis situation...😆😆😆
den finally my fav action part came... wah wah full on hindi movie ka maja tha yar ... heroine hero ka hat kholta hai goons heroine ko pakar leta hai den our angry hero goons ki dhulai karte hai ... **dishum dishum**...😆😆😆 oh i truly luvd it yaar full on entertainment...
bt wht i luvd the most & the best part of dis update was
There was no way Rey could do anything as he was at a little distance and was hurt too badly. He looked at him straight in his eyes as he was looking in the eyes of death. He wanted to do something not for himself but for his love but he knew there is no way out. And the next second that guy presses the trigger and THAD a sound came before he could press his trigger completely and in no second he fell on ground. Rey's eyes popped out from their sockets, his mouth went wide open not because of what was about to happen but due to what really happened and buy who. He saw Taani holding a big thick wood stick in her hand, fuming in anger but yet scared looking at the guy who she hit may be first time in her entire life of course apart from slapping Rey. She was standing like she won a huge battle or killed her biggest enemy in the world just like Jhansi ki Rani. Firstly Rey was shocked but then he burst out laughing leaving a confused and angry Taani standing. "Rey ap has rahay ho woh b mujh par" saying this Taani walks towards Rey and seeing Taani's stick Rey steps back and falls on ground bringing his both hands together. Taani stops seeing him like this and he starts his nautanki "nahi shama kar di jiye Jhansi ki Rani. Humein mat mariye, humari biwi hai. Us ka kiya hoga? Aur humare bachay [Taani opens her mouth in an O shape and Rey corrects himself realizing what he said] matlab honay walay bacho ka kiya hoga?" listening to this Taani blushes

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣i was just laughing lyk hell in tht part... so finally my guess was ri8 meri jhasi ki raani i mean taani ne hi rey ko bacha lia bt had 2 say i just luvd rey's reaction after tht😆😆😆
& finally something romantic
Taani blushes and leaves the stick, Rey stands up and she runs and hugs him as much tightly as possible. Rey was feeling pain but he ignored it as he was craving for her touch and her hug. They stayed like that for a long time then Rey comes to his sense and breaks the hug still holding Taani's hand and says "we have to leave as its not save here lets go." Taani and Rey walked miles holding each other's hands. Even in the middle of night and in Jungle not knowing there way out, they still felt save and complete. Seeing Rey's exhausted face and body Taani says "Rey lets sit for a while [seeing Rey about to argue she continues quickly] I am hungry, I am walking since afternoon and want to sleep in your arms peacefully." She completes her sentence and makes the cutest pout ever and Rey smiles at her nautanki and they both sit on a safest place possible in that Jungle. Taani takes out the food and water she had and they eat and then Taani dresses his wounds and they sleep in each other's arms feeling as they were in heaven...

at last just wanted 2 say it was full on entertainment wala update & enjoyed a lot while reading it... 👏👏👏

Edited by samiha_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG Amazing update. Have no words for it. I loved how you tried to make it funny in between. In short it had everything. Intensity, romance, comedy, action.
Brilliant. Hats off to you.
Applause for you 👏
Take care of your health, thats more important. And looking forward for the next part =)
Edited by neha23 - 12 years ago

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