OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: --RockStar--

amazing written very touching ,simple and awsm ,what a story just too gd ,mindbilowing , u r amazing writer congrats ,

omg mind blowing OS foxxy 👏
from the start i knew that something big gonna happen..i was like maybe her father lost his job or something...
but i didn't expect this twist ..poor girl 😭
love you writing style foxxy...i can see the improvement in ur writing style.
again i m gonna say that this my fav OS from you ☺️ keep it up 🤗

Omg!!! It is so well written and so so sad that it has actually left me cold...

Originally posted by: ..Prinzy..

omg mind blowing OS foxxy 👏
from the start i knew that something big gonna happen..i was like maybe her father lost his job or something...
but i didn't expect this twist ..poor girl 😭
love you writing style foxxy...i can see the improvement in ur writing style.
again i m gonna say that this my fav OS from you ☺️ keep it up 🤗

thanksss 🤗 improvement 🤣 pehle konsi kami thi? 🤣
huh huh bas karo 😳

Originally posted by: dreamer_dreams

Omg!!! It is so well written and so so sad that it has actually left me cold...

thank you for your lovely comment 😊 i am glad i could reach out to u 😊

Originally posted by: -.SapnokiRani-.

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Hey nazzy, it's really nice yaar. 👍🏼 I like the idea of writing dates with year. 😊 It's one of a new concept that I read. 😉 Also the fact that you changed the point of view from first to third. 😊 You should write more of these, and I will be happy to read all of them. 😳 Great job, dear! 😊

thank you 😆 yeah i will try to write more 😃