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Originally posted by: _IcePrincess_

Simple yet beautifully written...👏
God it was soo touching! I could feel her confusion as she stepped into the huge city, her fear as her Daddy left her in that strange place.
She knew something was wrong, a girl always knows. But she wasn't willing to believe it, because she trusted her daddy.
Her pain as she slowly starts acknowledging the truth, that she has been betrayed by her own father, the moment when she really learns for sure that her trust is broken and the shock that came with it, u have portrayed it soo beautifully...
This is the first tym m reading ur work, n I would really love to read more!😊

Originally posted by: subi27

that was so sad too😔clearly can feel the confusion of this girl😭but its true that ba****ds like her father are still living in this modern era😡

beautifully written👍🏼

Originally posted by: .-Nikki-.

<font color="#000066"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">OMG OMG I loved the oS lively idea behind it, the way u wrote it the way u ended it its just woooww
At first i was like okay hmm maybe its about a new life in Mumbai it indeed is a new life but without the actual essence of a life
U took up a good topic n its quite relatable taking in the various cases of henious crimes coming in..
Hmm trust indeed a big thing😆</font></font>

Originally posted by: ..nisaluvrk..

amazingly written...
felt the confusion the pain the helplessness feeling she went through because of her hell father!
very well written..