AsYa fun-fic:From slap to kiss || Part-6 pg-40 ||

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guyzzz,

I am toying with the idea of a new AsYa FF with some other supporting character and a slightly different backdrop. I know many of you are wondering whether I am done with my previous FF 'Dil Ki toh Lag Gayi', as that is the one in desperate need of updating right now, but all I wanna tell is that I am very much planning to continue my previous FF and complete that. This new story is just a rough sketch which I wanted to share with you guys.

FF Title: Ishq, Love aur Lafda 😆

Character sketch:

Asad Ahmed Khan aka 'Safed Kurta': Famous architect. CEO of Dilshad Constructions. Successful, rich, handsome but a self proclaimed recluse. Had been a class topper throughout school and college. Strict disciplinarian, opinionated, loves classical music and old Hindi songs. The only person to intimidate him is Shaheen (see character sketch below).

Zodiac sign: Leo

Life's mantra: Parampara, pratishtha aur anushasan = (Quade+Kanoon) x Commitment

Starring: Karan Singh Grover 🥳

Imtiaaz 'Immy' Rehman: Asad's chuddy buddy. Extrovert, fun-loving, full of life. A consistent back-bencher throughout his school and college days. His dad forced him to take up Engineering. He attended the same college as Asad's, but dropped out after seven consecutive 'supplementary' (flunked seven exams in a row) in one semester. Thinks he is 'too lazy to study'. Currently he is the base guitarist of a music band 'Chaos'. Loves his band more than his life, but loves his friends even more. A prankster with a great sense of humour, his favourite victim is AAK most of the time. In short, a spoilt brat with a heart of gold.

Maintains a secret diary where he pens down his imaginary conversations with his late Ammi (His ammi passed away while giving birth to him).

Zodiac sign: Pieces

Life's mantra:

Advice 1. A for apple, B for babes, C for chakkar and D for 'Dates'. So, Love me, love me just for the day.

Advice 2: Nothing comes for free. So, f*ck off, no more free advice.

Starring: Aditya Roy Kapoor ⭐️

Zoya 'firebrand' Farooqui: A singer, a dreamer, a chatterbox: introducing the fiery Zoey to you. A mysterious girl whose character is yet to unfold.

Zodiac sign: Pieces

Life's mantra: Good girls go to heaven. Bad girls go everywhere.

Fav line: You don't mess with THE Zoya Farooqui.

Starring: Our SJ aka Surbhi Jyothi 🥳👏

Shaheen Sikandar aka Shehzadi: Asad's ex-girlfriend. His first love, whom he is struggling yet to forget. A medical student by profession, Shaheen is a career-oriented, ambitious and open minded girl. She is the 'agony aunt' of the group, showering them with her precious advice in tough times. Her one deadly glare through the spectacles is enough to shut everyone's mouth. Fondly called 'Shehzadi' by Immy, much to Asad's dismay.

Zodiac sign: Taurus

Life's mantra: Independence

Starring: Shilpa Anand 🥳

Madhav Rao Deshmukh aka 'Maddy': The pacifier in the group. The one who is trying hard to maintain the sanity and balance in a bunch of headstrong people. Sadly, he often ends up being the 'yes man' of the group. He is sweet and polite to everyone and has a secret crush on Asad's sister, Najma. But is he trying to hide a bleeding heart behind that smile?

Zodiac sign: Libra

Life's mantra: Maddy Deshmukh, the light of your life, jee.

Starring: Arjun Bijlani 🥳

Dr. Ahsan Rehman (Immy's father): A graduate from London School of Economics, Dr. Ahsan Rehman is the undisputed King of Real Estates in the North India. Imtiaaz is the only heir to his business empire. He is a man of class. Hates laziness, shoddiness and fakeness with a passion. He has great love and admiration for Asad, loves him more than his own son. Harbours a soft spot for Dilshad Ahmed Khan (Asad's mother), but is too reserved to ever talk about it.

Zodiac sign: Capricorn

Life's mantra: If you want something in life, go get it. Nobody's gonna serve it to you on a plate.

Starring: Ram Kapoor

Dilshad Ahmed Khan: Mother of Asad and Najma. Ex-wife of Rashid Ahmed Khan. Currently separated from her husband, Rashid Ahmed Khan. Still in love with him, though.

Rashid Ahmed Khan: Estranged husband of Dilshad Ahmed Khan. Remarried Shirin and have three children with her ' Ayaan, Nikhat and Nuzhat.

Other characters ' same as QH

At present, I have decided to do an anti-virus check on my story and keep Razias, Haseenas and the insufferable cat woman away from my story. 😆😆 Later on, they may come to spice up the story.

Guys, the actual update with all the characters may come after 10-15 days, as I am really busy with my mundane office works. I just thought of penning down the idea before it runs away from me.

P.S Please let me know how it sounds to you, guys. And plzzz plzz suggest an actor for the character of 'Maddy', as I need to imagine the character before I start writing.

P.P.S Added Arjun Bijlani as 'Maddy'. I think he fits the bill perfectly.

NOTE: I SELECTED THE ACTORS IMAGINING THEM FOR MY STORY. THERE IS NO INTENTION TO HURT ANYONE'S SENTIMENTS. COMPARISON BETWEEN ACTORS AND BASHING SHALL NOT BE ACCEPTED.

Sincerely,

Idea-chor Teddy 😉

PART-1 on Page 7

PART-2 & 3 on Page 14

PART-4 on Page 22

PART-5 full on Page 29

PART-6 on Page 40

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cutiesanya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so inovative
best character sketch ever
a large applaud👏
agar trailer itna acha hai
picture wil be superhit
plzzz update
p.s. - luveddd the choice of actors
dreaming it fr real😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Already looking forward to it!!! Kash+KaBhi combination is gonna rock!!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res!!
vl b back sooon!!
IM BACK!!!!!!
ohhh my teddy bear its verryyy intrstng!!🤗👏
plzzz updt it!!
waiiitn 4 d story!!😃
Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds like fun..eagerly waiting for the story...plz try to update soon...WAITING...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG! KaSh! ❤️
Gawd I'm so in love with your pairings! even though KaSh are exes in your FF 😆
I'm totally hooked!
PM me when you update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Cool! Sounds great! Will you PM me?

Sammy 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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quiet interesting dear...new character but i mst strong one...pls continue & do pm...me

a small req if u don't mind.
pls update soon..smtime late update spoil the taste of story & we don't get to knw where is story going on...need to read last updates again its quiet time consuming..being student i m sure u understand,...it difficult when parents allow u to use lapy 4 fixed hours..
2. don't stetch it too long.. i hv read sm stories on this forum..thst of 30-40 parts..god...after readng ur story i mst say u already have ploted story well...so do it in a spectacular & structured manner..i hv read ur earlier story "dil ki toh lag gyi" ..its gr8...i love tht..i m ur regular reader..wann alove to read ur good stuff...

pls ignore if i heart u..i don't mean to...never i can ever...pls its jst a friend advise/or demand/wish..anything u cn take it...
sorry again if i hurt u..or i guess bore u..

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG! Shilpa & Surbhi in One!! 🤗
I LOVE YOU
Do Cnt soon Buddy. Otherwise,
I WILL KILL YOU -_-
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept dear👍🏼⭐️..something diffrent from the usual ..i loved it..so i am with u, go for it😉..i know i know u don't need this mantra from me😆..but really its inovative..eager to see how will the story unfold..do continue soon

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